Siddhima - FF - Fire & Ice - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi

thanks for updating, fantastic, enjoyed it

do continue

norzar
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG it was so romantic.😳
Needless to say,it was so awesome Tazz.😍 Plz plz update soon. Really want to read what happens next between Sid and Riddhima.
Continue soon.🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
well written and romantic.

continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
fab part...again n interruption...sigh...love how sid is so vocal abt their feelings...
n just like ridz i am also looking forward 2 tomorrow i.e. ur next update so plz cont.. soon...

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Tazzy 😛
you know what ur title is perfect 👍🏼for but not for ur FF but ur readers
when ever i read ur FF my eyes freezes on screen and my screen is on fire 😳so like FIre & Ice :😉Ppp
Fab update
i just love ur FF
update soon dear
Thanks for pming ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
Tazzy,😊
This Was Absolutely Carnal,Sensous & Burning Romantic Hot.😍😍😍
Jatin.....Shit Yaar......You Came in b/w A Heavenly Kiss.Anyways,We Accept Your Apology.😊
Siddhima Controlling Their Emotions,Lust & Feelings Towards Each Other.
It's Matter of Time That How Far Can they Control Their Feelings of Heart coz When They're Intimate.....It's Only Two of Them & The Whole World Ceases to Exist.
Last Part Was Heavily Romantic.....
Cheek Kiss & Sid Controlling & Good-Night to Riddhima to Let Her Rest in Her Dreams.
Riddhima Too Controlling For Next Events.
Looking Forward to Next Update.😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Tazzzzzzzzz.....finally you updated your FF...thank goooodddddd...😆
But was was so damn short...😕😆

I want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😆

Coming back to the update.....phew....i mean, do I even have words to describe how it was...it was marvelous, 🤗amazing,
☺️miraculous, 😳astonishing, unbelievable, 👍🏼fabulous,😛wonderful 😍, fantastical, 😊incredible,👏 phenomenal, prodigious, 😎stupendous,😃astounding🤗, HOT and SEXYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy😳

And MOREEEEEEEEEEE...I am getting edicted to your FF...it triggers so many "known" feelings in my heart..if you know wat I am trying to tell ya!!!!😆

I just hope you do not take as long as you took this time to update your FF....pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳

Love you lots,
Pri😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
👏👏👏 fab fab fab...ohh i just cn't wait for your next update
plzzzz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments guys, i'll let you all know when i've updated, guess i'm lacking in inspirtation atm 😔 xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Guys after a very long and subdued break from my FF I have returned with an update, now this update is for my lovely friend Prii who has urged me to write despite my sad mood of late. So this update is partially for her. As usual thank you all for supporting and liking my work, you guys rock and mean the world :) x


Part 7:

Stupid.... Utterly, unmistakeably, undeniably stupid!!!!! As ridzy sat, morosely, she vigorously cursed herself for her crucial error! Because of her one stupid mistake of today, sid now sat comatose in the camp hospital bed! All due to her incapability of compromise! She watched, silent tears of grief and pain sliding down her cheeks, as sid lay motionless on the bed before her. She watched as his chest rose gently up and down in time with his shallowed breathing. How could this have happened? It seemed only moments ago she had been anxiously awaiting the next assignment set by the camp leaders, itching to catchup with their rival opponents, and spending time with sid, even though she still could not fully comprehend why her heart was yearning so much to spend quality time with him so abruptly. And yet it had only taken her a matter of 15 minutes to tarnish all her whims of the day and cause calamity to ensue! The tears flowed more vastly now, and as they did so, ridzy cast her memory back to 3 hours back, when all the chaos began and ultimately landed sid in this dire situation......


All members of the camp were crowded around a vast expanse of woodland, each member of the separate teams were given a map, a compass, a whistle and a list with 5 various objects bullet-pointed. Almost each and every person was bewildered. None knew the reasons for being given the strange unrelated equipment, yet all somehow sensed that a very strenuous assignment was about to be set. Though unprepared, all of the team-mates composed their nervousness and awaited the instructions of their guides a.k.a leaders.


"Now as all of you can blatantly see, there are 5 main objects which we require you to find in today's assignment. However the task itself shall not be that easy." Abhi stated as he spoke to the crowd of students that surrounded him. "there are guidelines on the map, now each team has been given different maps, and a varied set of objects to find. The differential maps vaguely guide the routes for which you will need to take to acquire each of the objects listed. Should any team locate all 5 individualised objects on the list and bring them back to base, situated here, then they shall receive 100 points, the first team to find all 5 will gain 150 points, others after them will gain 100, if any team fails to find all five then they shall receive 3 points, if you fail to locate any such item on the list, and return to base empty handed then the team shall receive 0 points. Upon blowing the horn, each team will disperse on their routes shown on the map, remember, the map is to guide you, the compass is to help ensure an accurate direction for you to follow, the list is for you to check that you have correctly secured each item and lastly the whistle is for you to use in case of emergencies, if you get lost or encounter trouble then blow 3 sharp blasts on the whistle. The instrument may seem feeble and tiny but it holds great power and can extend to very lengthy decibels. This assignment is to test your skills of cooperation, team-work and most of all initiative, hopefully you will all succeed. Good Luck." With his speech over, Abhi moved back and initiated the horn, causing its bellow to be heard by all campers.


As the team-mates dispersed onto their paths of the hunt, ridzy, sid, Jatin and Millie, poured over their maps, slightly befuddled. As each of them pondered which route to take first, sid cleared his throat and voiced his views. "I think it would be best if we went in search for the easiest item on the list, which happens to be a dream-catcher on a withered tree. I mean c'mon guys how hard can it be to spot it? It'd look so out of place, we'd be idiots not to find it!" He looked around to see if anyone had any qualms with his idea, his fellow members instead nodded in agreement with his notion. With the matter of the first object settled, the four content members set off in hunt for their first strange mystic object.


Millie and Jatin set off ahead of ridzy and sid, both seemed to be eager to take the lead, perhaps because they were excited about finding the object, but more likely because they were eager to be alone. As ridzy and sid trailed behind, they both fell into step with one another. Out of the corner of her eyes ridzy viewed sid's profile, he seemed almost nonchalant after last nights events! She didn't know how to regard this! Should she be relieved at not having to explain her sudden inexplicable feelings? Or should she instead feel humiliated that sid seemed oblivious to what had happened the night before? As she speculated her confusion, sid reached out and took her hand, stopped her swiftly in her tracks and said, "of course I remember it all, how on earth could I forget? It's just this is all very aberrant don't you think? One minute we hate each-other and the next we cannot resist the pull of our lustred hearts!" he stopped walking for a moment, and looked solemnly into ridzy's eyes. Her heart's palpitations increased to severe levels as she felt the magnetic pull of his eyes drawing her in. Their hands and fingers were still intertwined with one anthers, both their eyes transmitted confusion, but the dominant feeling was desire. They both felt this pumping insistently through their veins, urging them to respond to the calls of their hearts.


As they were both moving in closer, they were once again interrupted, as the always seemed to be, by Jatin! "Guys I think we have a problem, Millie is incapable or reading a map!" As ridzy and sid both sprang apart, they addressed the issue which faced them, if in fact they could even call it an issue! They both moved ahead to catch up to where Jatin and Millie were. Having finally reached them, they looked at Millie as if she were a two year old, the timid girl looked at Jatin furiously and replied in an indignant tone, "I am not incapable of reading a map!!! you are simply a cretin who cannot use a compass correspondingly!" Jatin shocked by Millie's sudden outburst, soon regained his composure and replied in level, angry tones, "well if you could actually read a map right side up then maybe we would be progressing onto our next object rather than sitting like waiting ducks!!!" Millie was about to retort to this insult when ridzy stepped in.


"Guys c'mon lets not argue okay? Look let me and sid take a look at the map and maybe we can come to a decision", with that ridzy looked at her map, and sid looked at his. After great consideration both came to a declaration, "we'll follow the map east-wards!" Exclaimed Sid.

Ridzy looked at him rather at him rather perplexed, almost as if reasoning with a small child with the mentality of a frog! "ERM no sid, we go west-wards! That direction will lead us to the tree and dream-catcher!"


Sid gazed at ridzy questioningly, his ego a tad bruised from her way of patronising him! He repeated his earlier inquisition, "Ridzy, we are taking the eastern route, that is what will lead us to the tree, the western route leads us to a very dangerous derelict area which could be harmful to us! Looks like Millie isn't the only one who is inadequate in reading maps!."


Ridzy simply stared at sid in astonishment! Had he really just insulted her? When only moment ago he had been holding her hand???? filled with rage she spun on her heel, and stormed towards the western path whilst shouting over her shoulder, "We'll see whose inadequate when you realise I am right!!!!!!" with that she flounced off in the direction she intended to go.


However 15 minutes later she realised, that she was in fact wrong! The path she had "supposedly" read correctly, had lead her to a dead end. Frustrated at being proved wrong, she lashed out at the dead-end cliff and kicked vehemently at it! As she turned to retreat, a sudden rumbling sound from above halted her in her tracks! She glanced upwards, directly where the sound was emoting from. Ridzy was shocked to see a boulder the size of a planet, hurtling towards her at alarming speed! Her mind was screaming at her to move, but her legs were rooted to the spot! Unable to even transmit a single movement to her limbs, she realised she was doomed!

As the boulder reached crushing distance, a sudden scream burst through ridzy's paralysed thoughts, before she could react, a forceful figure pushed her out of harms way, and was intermediately enveloped by the demonic boulder! As ridzy stumbled to the ground, saved from the vicious great rocky giant that was about to assault her, she turned to see who her saviour had been. What she saw sent tremors of fear and horror through her very essence! Lying beneath the great weight of the boulder was Sid! He was bleeding, and must have been in immense pain! Ridzy rushed over to him, tears streaming from her eyes like a water-fall.


"Sid! SID! Oh My Gosh! What did you do? Why on earth did you come in between?" she exclaimed helplessly as she tried in futile attempt to remove the boulder from him! By some luck of the god's he was still alive! And as ridzy bent down, sobbing her heart out, she wiped the blood from his face and tried to control herself. Unfortunately she was unsuccessful, and began crying uncontrollably all over again! Sid looked pained by her tears, he was more in pain at seeing her cry than he was with the boulder on top of him, he gently whispered in a haggard breath "Ridzy do not cry please, I couldn't let this boulder destroy you, even if it means me life, I'd rather save you than watch you writhe in pain!" As he slipped into unconsciousness, ridzy howled in contempt! As Jatin and Millie reached the scene they were horrified to see what greeted them! Using his common sense Jatin grabbed the whistle from Millie and blew on it continuously sharply as had been instructed by Abhi. The shriek of the whistle zoomed around ridzy in awful vicious decibels. All she could do was cry bitterly at her careless mistake, if only she had listened to sid, if she had read the map accurately, then he would not be suffering like this! As she cried morosely, she whispered to the unconscious sid, "Please Wake Up Sid, Please, You Cant Leave Me Too, I've Lost One Person Who Meant So Much to me, please do not make me lose another who has begun to mean a lot to my heart". With that she crouched down beside him and lay in a foetal position until the camp leaders came and brought help with them.

Flash Back Ends.


To Be Continued....


Thanks For Reading Guys Let Me Know What You Guys Think


By Tazzy

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