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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW!!!!!
SO EMOTIONAL N NICELY WRITTEN
GREAT JOB ALL THE WRITERS!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so cool theme n great going!!!!!!!
@ imane: u simply rock!!!! iam becoming a fan of urs!! great parts imane dear!!
@ cool gal: u were superb!!!!

plz someone continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow man i was justwachting lagi chunary main daag and here is the sma e thing =)
awesome guys love ya all
update son
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome parts from everyoneeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

continue soon
Namrata_12 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
WOwww imanee tht was soo guddd!!!
continuing:
muskaan got up and went to freshen herself in the bathroom. she looked at herself in the mirror. she was a disaster. her eyes were all red from crying, her hair was messed up, her salwaar suit was wet from the tears, and the bruise on her neck made it worse. she washed her face, fixed her hair, put the dupatta to cover the bruise and went outisde. Rahul was outside standing by the balcony.
Muskaan: Rahul....
He turned around.
Rahul: Muskaan, acha hua ki tum uth gayi, maine tumhare liye coffee aur sandwich banaya hai, jao jaake kitchen se le lo.
Muskaan: Thanks, lekin... rahul.. main ja rahi hoon.
Rahul: Kidhar?
Muskaan: Pata nahin.
Rahul: Pata nahin? Muskaan pagal mat ban, tum yahin pe raho gi.
Muskaan: Nahin rahul... mujhe jaana hoga. main yahan pe nahin reh sakti
Rahul: Kyun nahin? Main tumhe kahin nahin jaane dunga.
Muskaan: Rahul mere baat samajne ke koshish karo. Maine yahan pe nahin rehna chahti.
Rahul: Theek hai.. fine... go..
Saying this rahul turned around.
Muskaan: Rahul.. please. ghussa mat ho.
Rahul: Tumhe yahan pe nahin rehna hai na... then go... fine.. just get lost.
Muskaan; Rahul... pleasee.. aisa mat bol.
Rahul turned around again: Muskaan... toh phir main kya bolu? Maine tumse pyaar karta hoon, main tumhare madat karna chahta hoon, tum yeh kyun nahin samaj sakti??
Muskaan: Tum mujhse pyaar nahin kar sakte. tum mere waja se apne zindage barbad mat kar.
Rahul: Agar main tumhare saath nahin ho toh main apne zindagi barbad karunga.
Muskaan: Rahul.. stop it.. bas hogaya. tumne mere ko raat ke liye rehne ke liye jaga di, thanks for that.. lekin abhi bas hogaya. main ja rahi hoon, aur please mujhe dhund ne ki koshish mat karna.
Saying this she ran out the balcony, and out the apartment, leaving rahul behind.
Someone continue pleaseeeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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She had come a block or two away from rahul's apartment...she was now running out of breath..she stopped midway...looked around...people walking by her without any care or concern busy in their own lives...something echoed in her mind..."i love you muskaan...pyaar karta hoon tujhse" it was rahul's voice...she closed her eyes thinking what should she do...her heart was saying one thing her mind was saying the other...she looked about..then she didn't know what but something came over her and she ran straight back to rahul's apartment...she ran as fast as she could...her blood rushed to her head and her heart was beating faster than ever...she reached his apartment..the door was open like she had left it...she ran inside finding rahul standing at the balcony just like the way she had left him...he turned around as she barged in breathing harshly...
Muski: Ra...aa Rahul!
Rahul:(stood there staring and opened his arms gesturing her to come to him, there were tears in both of there eyes ready to bulge out any minute)
Muski:(ran into his arms and hugged him tightly feeling his arms around her tightly, securely, lovingly) Rahul..main...
Rahul: jaanta thakay tum waapis ajaoogee...bus shhhssh abb kuch na kehna...(he said closing his eyes wanting for time to stop right here right now)
Muski: Rahul per...
Rahul: Kaha na ssshhh...sub theek hojaye ga...sub kuch bus tu jo meray saath hain main duniya mein kissi se bhi lar loonga...
Muski:(griped him tighter) jaanti hoon...tu hain toh sub theek hojaye ga...per rahul hum saari problems kasiey...
Rahul: (pulled her out and made her face him as he wiped her tears away) ajj ka din no sad talk..nothing from the past no gham no tears..we'll go out...kahein bhi...beach per...paani puri..shopping wherever...bus ajj kay din mujahy meri muskaan kay saath spend karna hain...ajj se muskaan jeyay gee...manishaa is no more...samjhi...
Muski:(nodded her head as more tears fell from her eyes while rahul cupped her face in his strong protective hands)
Rahul: and no more tears...(wiping her tears with his thumb again) chal ja kay ready hoja...hum bahir jarahey hain..
Muski: abhi aai...(she smiled a little)
**Muski got ready and wore a black knee length skirt, with a tube top inside it that was a little above her belly and a cardigan covering the top (see the song from the movie Woh Lamhe "kya mujhe pyaar hai"; she was wearing something like kagana at the end-black skirt and all) anywho she came out like that as rahul was ready waiting for her outside, rahul and muski made their way to teh parking and rahul opened the door for her;she smiled in delight as this was the first time someone had ever opened the door for her...it was silly but she had never had anyone care for her like that and so she looked at rahul with immense gratitude as he would do something like that for her, held the door open, said please, thank you, even at his smile...she felt the urge to say thanks back to him...but her eyes were enough for that she would just look at him with grateful eyes reflecting her emotions which rahul was easily able to read...**as they drive towards the mall rahul turns on the radio and teh song zara sa from jannat is being played rahul looks at muski who looks back at him they both smile...*imagine this song in the Background from now being played**)
Muski: (standing at a jewelry shop at the mall she looks in from outside as rahul went to get them ice cream, she is admiring the necklace on the display)
Rahul:(comes with 2 ice cream cones) yeh lo..tumhari favorite...
Muski: (smiles and takes it from him then looks back at the necklace one last time)
Rahul: kya dekh rahi hoon? (he asked eating his ice cream)
Muski: (didn't want him to know her desire of the necklace) kuch nahi...(she lightly puts some ice cream on his nose and smiles) chal na... (grabbing on his arm she moves him along, as he turns back to look at the necklace she was looking at)
Rahul: (looks over at an expensive store that has all the col girl stuff in it he drags muski in there) chal na...
Muski: per rahul yeh toh...
Rahul: haan yeh store bahut mehnga hain lakin teray se zayaada nahi abb jaa dil bhar kar shopping kar...jeans, skirts,shirts,whatever...just no looking at the tag...i'll help u select...come na...
Muski: (for the first time she was shopping with all her heart, carefree, not obligated but actually selecting her own clothing style, she picked up shirts and showed the ones she liked to rahul who gave her a thumbs up on everything, on top of that he even bought extra things for her..purses, shoes,random assesories...at one point he even wore different shades for her showing her which one would suit her most...she laughed at him being such a kid..but that's exactly what she had missed out her entire life..she felt as if the world was revolving around her, as if she owned everything that's how much rahul was caring for her...with all his hear..for the first time she was not restricted or bound..stepping out the shop with muski's shopping bags in his hand he started to sing)
Rahul: main tere main tere kadmoon mein rakh do yeh jahaan (spreading his arms open for her, then bowing down) mera ishq deewaange...( coming closer to her he placed a loose strand of her hair behind her ear) hain nahi hain nahi aashiq koi mujhsa tera...tu meray liye bandagi (he said taking her hand in his as they both made their way into that same jewelry shop muski had stopped at before)
Rahul: rahul garewal's order please
Salesmen: sir here you go...(he handed him a box)
Rahul: Thanks...
Muski: Yeh kya rahul...
Rahul: shhhshh chal na meray saath (he took her to the nearest mirror in the store and opened up the package)
Muski: hum yeh kya?
Rahul: just look in the mirror and wait..(he took out the same necklace that she wanted from the box and placed it on her neck as she looked in sheer amazement and delight, then as he was closing it he sang the following) keh bhi de keh bhi de dil mein teray jo chupa, khawaish hain jo teri...rakh nahi rakh nahi parda koi mujhse aaye jaan...karle tu mera yakeen main chaho tujhko meri jaan behpanha...fida hoon tujh pe meri jaan bepanah..wooah woahooooo waoahooo...
Muski:(smiled and blushed she hugged him right there)
Rahul:(smiled in contentment and delight as he caressed her back lightly then break free from the hug holding he rhand they both made their way out the store smiling.."songs ends")
**they are both in the car now...muski is playing with the necklace...feeling it around her neck and the charm on it which was a heart...a delicate small diamond studded heart..she was blushing watching muski smile to herslef rahul looked at her them smiled and said...
Rahul: pasand aaya?
Muski: hmmm bahut...(she said looking intently at him as he said)
Rahul: mujhse zayaada toh nahi na?
Muski: (smiles) ummm...voh...
Rahul:(watching her being so nervous shakes his head) it's ok tujhay kuch kehnay ki zaroorat nahi hain...teri muskaan sub kehday ti hain..
muski: thank you rahul...
Rahul: kiss baat ka?
Muski: zindagi ka...
Rahul: no problem...(he pulled up in front of the apartment building)
Muski: rahul dekh dekh...(she pointed to teh fountain)
Rahul: kya muskaan? (he followed his eyes to where she was pointing the fountain which was shooting sprinklers every now and then and some kids were playing under it)
Muski: chal na mujhay bhi khel na hain...
Rahul: per musk...(before he could finish his sentence she was already out the car towards the fountain he got out and went to the front of teh car...watching her spin and dance carefreely under the fountain...he was leaning on the car bonnett smiling as he watched her...she spun around in circles, her delicate body was now drenched and her hair was wet looking gorgeous it was her smile that was glowing...she bent down to one of the kids and whispered something to him and pointed in rahul's direction who nodded his head and made his way to rahul as muski danced away with kids...and as rahul watched one of the kids approach him he knew exactly why he was sent by muski...he smiled)
To be continued....(plz plz someone continue)



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Posted: 16 years ago
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the kid approached Rahul and told him that Muskaan has asked him to come there
the kid pulled rahuls arm....
once they reached there muskaan pushed him under the fountain
she laughed as he was getting all wet
but he was just admiring her beauty......
staring at her he suddenly came back to reality
He gave a mad look to muskaan
when muskaan noticed she started to run away from him
he ran after her .. they ran until they reached
a open land where her foot sliped over a log and
she fell... rahul ran when he noticed her fall
she was lying there in the grass smiling and still laughing
but trying to control her laughter.....
then he smiled and held out his hand to her
she took his hand but instead of getting up she pulled
rahul down...
he fell on top of her....
there was slience .. both of them staring at each other
lost in each other eyes....
Muskaan came back to reality and tryed to get up when
Rahul caught her arms and made her stay still
she said " chod de" Rahul giving a smurk didnt let go
Instead he tightened his grip making her quiet
Muskaan's heart was beating so fast......
she wasnt able to say anything or move......
she was thinking what is wrong with me.. what is happening
why did my heart skip a beat??
Rahul noticed her worried look and smiled
and said " dont worry this happens in love"
Muskaan smiled...........
Rahul came closer... His and muskaan's face was about
4 inches apart... then slowly 2 inches..then
slowly none.............
Muskaan can hear her heart racing..........she closed her eyes
Rahul taking advantage of that ;) kissed her on the cheeck
moving down to the lips..............
Edited by Kiki_luvsRM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
gr8 parts guys!!!!
continuing!!
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He played with his fingers on her lipss...muskaan's eyes were still closed...
Slowly rahul took her lips into his own!!..
Muskaan responded with equal amount of passion!!..
When they broke reality struck hard on muskaan....she had a very confused look on her face....was she right??
Rahul-Kuch bhi mat soch muskaan..
Muskaan-Rahul..
Rahul-Mat bol joo main sun na nahi chatha.....main janta hoon tere dimag main kya chal raha hain......i just dont need to hear it muskaan!!
A tear rolled out of her face..
Rahul kissed her tear away...muskaan shivered....many people had touched her but she never felt anything...today she was going cazy by his touch!!
Rahul-Muskaan..main sab kuch bhulakar tujhe apnana chatha hoon..kyun tu apney kal(past) se chipak kar baithi hain....bhool jaa sab kuch..
Muskaan-ITs not easy rahul..
Rahul-Soch muskaan.....hum apni khud ki duniya basayengey...iss sab se durr.....is sab se bahar....tu main aur hamrey bacheee..
Muskaan looked into Rahul' eyes
Muskaan-Kyun kartey hoon itna pyaar mujhse??
Rahul shrugged..
Rahul-Bas karta hoon..
She lept on to him....he just held her in his arms...It was tough.....it was tough to get her out of everything but rahul had promised to do so!!...He would bring her out of the dirty world she was living in......he would!!...
*****
Tina!!
i-love-dr.rahul thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
great parts form everyone!!!!!!!!!! 👏
loved it!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
gr8 parts imane, kiki, and tinaa!

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