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Hello guys.I am Keerthi from Tamilnadu and new to this forum. Iam a big fan of Omkara and Rikara.So i decided to write a story of my own on them.They will be some changes in Gauri's background.So read it first before reading the story.
Gauri Sharma:
A professional interior designer living in Bareilly with her younger brother Ranveer.Her parents passed away before few years back in a car accident and from then she was living in her small family house.Though she wanted leave her small village and explore the world with her brother she didn't have enough money and support from anyone as all her relations left her alone after the death of her parents.So she continued to live in the small village by starting a small shop to earn enough money to run the family and support Ranveer.One day when Kaali Thakur came to her shop and saw her he wanted to marry her by hook or crook.so when he approached Gauri about the marriage proposal she rejected it immediately and insulted him.But Kaali Thakur kidnapped her brother and Gauri was forced to accept the marriage proposal as she didn't want to loose her only family.
Then the rest happened like in the show from Omkara arriving at the village and saving her from the villagers by marrying her.The story starts from the scene where Omkara marries her.
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Chapter:1
Gauri just looked at omkara without blinking in shock as she can't believe he is the same guy who accused her as a characterless girl before few hours.But now he is taking pehra with her to safe her life from the villagers.She was so shocked even to react and just looked at omkara in wonder how a guy can be so horrible and good at the same time.When he called her charaterless before few hours she wanted to slap him hard for juding her without even knowing her.But something in his eyes stopped her from doing it.Maybe it was the pain,anger and heartbreak in his eyes that stopped her.But now she was damn sure he was a good guy seeing how he saved her from the goons and marrying her to save her.She didn't know why she is not stopping him from marrying her as she know well he is doing all this out of pity and humanity.Just then Omkara carefully made her stand on her legs and filled her maang with his bright red blood as Gauri closed her eyes .Then Omkara looked at the angry villagers holding her hand.
''Now she is my wife and no one has any right to harm her in any ways.If anyone even took a step towards her i won't hesitate to destroy them .so just leave from here.''said Omkara in a cold voice which the scared the villagers and they left from there without saying anything.
Once the villagers left from there Gauri sighed in relief .Then she looked at her hand which was still held by Omkara and she was shocked to see the wound which he got while saving her was still bleeding.
''Omkara your hand''said Gauri and she tore the edge of her pallu and started to tie in on his hand covering the wound.Omkara just looked at her silently while she dressed her wound and looked at her maang with held his name in blood now.
''Is it paining a lot?''asked Gauri and Omkara came out of his thoughts and looked at Gauri who was looking at him with care and worry.Seeing the care and worry for him in her eyes stirred something in his heart.But the next moment he remembered everything she did and snatched his hand from her hold and glared at her with anger.
''Just stop acting like innocent as i know what kind of girl you are.Don't even for a moment think this marry means something to me.I just did this to save your pathetic life.As much as i wanted to let you die for yor sins,I can't see anyone hurting in front of me.So i saved your life though you deserved all this pain.A characterless girl like you did not even deserve to live.I can't even understand how someone can stoop this low just for money and live a life without any moral and standards.''shouted Omkara and Gauri who had enough slapped him hard.Omkara just stood there shocked keeping his hand on his burning cheek.
''Shut up Omkara.Shut the hell up.Not one more about me or my character''shouted Gauri glaring Omkara in angry and Omkara on the other hand was shocked to even react or replay back seeing the burning anger in her eyes.
''What you know about me and my character haan.you just came to this village yesterday and labelled me as characterless without even knowing the whole truth.Who gave you the rights to judge me Mr. omkara?Who gave you the bloody right?Its true i am going to marry Kaali Thakur.But did you know i was forced to marry him as he kidnapped my little brother and threatened to kill him if i didn't marry him.So i was forced to marry that monster just to save my brother who is my only family.Just becaused you saved my life doesn't mean you can talk anything you want''shouted Gauri as her eyes welled up with tears.On the other hand omkara was shocked hearing this and looked her with guilt as he can see the pain and truth in her eyes.
''Gauri i ...''tried omkara to apologize but Gauri just stopped him by raising her hand and shaking her head.
''No Omkara.you said enough and i don't want to hear anything anymore.I thought atleast you will be different and will understand me or atleast give me a chance to explain.But you are just like the other men who never thinks about other and their feeling.Thanks a lot for saving me and don't worry i will never disturb you again''said Gauri keeping her hand on her wound on her stomach.Omkara felt like he was slapped again hearing her words and felt guiltly thinking how he treated her.
''Good bye omkara''said Gauri and ran from before Omkara could stop her.
As Gauri left from there Omkara just closed his eyes in pain and guilt and fisted his hand remembering how he treated Gauri without knowing her side of story.
''What have i done?''said Omkara with grief and guilt looking at the directed in which Gauri disappeared fe minutes ago
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Omkara was sitting in one of the benches in the railway station with face face buried in his hand .He felt emotionally drained and the guilt of hurting Gauri was already eating him slowly.Once Gauri left ,omkara decided to search for her and apologize to her properly.But even after searching her for hours he could not find her in the village and he felt really deafted knowing he can never see that girl again.He just hoped she is safe and Kaali Thakur will not disturb her.Just then he heard loud footstep and he looked up to find Kaali Thakur and his men coming towards him.Omkara stoop up fisting his hand as his blood boiled seeing Kaali Thakur and decided to teach him a lesson today.As the goons started to attack him Omkara fought with them.But after few minutes the goons caught him as he was outnumbered.
''You thought you could escape from me after spoiling my plan of killing that girl.No one can live another day after going aganist me.Now pay the price for helping that b*tch''said Kaali thakur and Omkara felt like breaking his mouth for insulting Gauri.Kaali thakur then got a big sword from one of his goons and lifted to attack om.But as the sword came near Om's neck a hand held the sword and omkara was shocked to see shivaay standing there holding the sword and glaring at Kaali Thakur.
''Tum theek ho?''asked shivaay looking at om and om shook his head positively.Then both the brothers started to beat kaali Thakur and his men black and blue.Kaali thakur saw this and took a gun from his pocked and aimed at omkara as he decided to finish him once for all.Both shivaay and Om didn't notice this as both of them were busy in fighting with the goons.Shivaay who kicked a goon saw kaali thakur's reflection in a mirror and his eyes widened as he understood he was aiming for omkara .
''OM LOOK OUT''shouted shivaay and Omkara turned but Kaali Thakur already pulled the trigger and omkara closed his eyes to feel the pain of the bullet.But even after few seconds he didn't feel any pain and he opened his eyes only to feel his blood freeze seeing someone standing infront of him like a shield and protecting him from the bullet.Just then he felt shivaay's hand on his shoulder.But Omkara just focused on the figure before him and saw her loosing her balance and ran towards her catching her figure before she could hit the floor.
''GAURI''shouted Omkara holding her small figure in his arms and Gauri closed her eyes from the pain which was spreading like a fire on her left side.
''Gauri ...why..?''asked Omkara in shock looking at the wounded girl in his arms who saved his life even after he hurted her a lot.
''I can't ..let the ..person die..who..who saved ..my life and moreover ap..mera ..pati..hai''said Gauri with a small smile in pain.Just then she saw dark spots appearing in her vision and closed her eyes as darkness engulfed her completely.Seeing this Omkara started to get worried and tapped her face softly.
''Gauri ..gauri..open your eyes.please don't do this to me''said Omkara as his eyes welled up with tears.
''Om calm down.I called the ambulance and i am sure she will be fine''said Shivaay keeping a hand on omkara's shoulder and calling the ambulance once he made kaali thakur unconscious.
Shivaay wanted to ask who the girl is,why she saved his brother's life putting her own life in danger and how his brother know her as he was new to this village.But after seeing his brother's state he decided to ask him everything later as he understood they should save the girl first.
''DI''came a shout which made both shivaay and Omkara look from their thoughts to see a boy about 8 years came running in their direction.Once the boy reached them he sat beside omkara and Gauri taking her hand in his small one as tears ran down his cheeks.
''what happened to my di?Why is she not responding to me?''asked the little boy looking at omkara with tears running down his cheeks.Omkara understood he must be Gauri's younger brother.
''Tum Ranveer ho na.Gauri's younger brother?''asked Omkara and Ranveer shook his head positively.Just then they heard the sound of ambulance and omkara lifted Gauri in his arms and looked at shivaay and then at Ranveer.Shivaay understood his brother's gesture and decided to talk with Ranveer as Omkara ran out of the railway station with unconscious Gauri in his arms.
''Ranveer look at me.I promise you that your sister will be fine once she reaches the hospital.Now come with me.I will take you to the hospital so that you can see your di''said shivaay in a soft voice wiping Ranveer's tears.
''My Di will be fine na?''asked Ranveer and shivaay's heart mealted seeing the boy's innocent eyes.
''She will be absolutely fine.Now lets go to the hospital okay?''asked shivaay and left to the hospital taking Ranveer with him.
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Omkara sat on one of the benches in the hospital outside the OT after the doctor rushed Gauri inside the OT to treat her.He can't believe the girl who he called characterless and hurted in the last two days saved him putting her own life in danger.He just sat looking at his hand which was now covered with Gauri's blood and her lifeless form kept flashing infront of her eyes.
''Please be alright Gauri.I can never live with myself if something happens to you''said Omkara closing his eyes.
The next moment he felt someone sit beside him and he looked up to see Shivaay sitting beside him with Ranveer
''How is she om?''asked shivaay keeping a hand on his shoulder to comfort his brother.
''I don't shivaay.The doctor rushed her inside the OT as soon as i bought her.''said Omkara and Shivaay didn't fail to notice the unshed tears in his brother's eyes.
''Om i know this is not the right time to ask questions.But i really ant to know who the girl is and why kaali thakur tried to kill you?''asked shivaay and Omkara decided to share everything with his brother he really wanted to share everything with someone.
Shivaay just sat in shock for few moments after hearing everything from his brother.He can't believe that his brother who never believed in marriage and rituals married some girl to save her life.As much as he wanted to get angry on her brother for risking his life to save some stranger,he know his brother did the right thing by saving a innocent girl from a monster like kaali thakur.But shivaay decided to make sure to everything about this girl once the doctor informs about her condition as he can't risk his brother's saftey for anyone.
''Shivaay i want to take her with me to our home''said Omkara breaking Shivaay's thoughts.
''Are you sure?''asked shivaay.
''I am sure Shivaay.Eventhough i don't believe in this marriage and rituals ,i can see how much it means to her.so i am not going to leave her alone.I will never be my father Shivaay.Never''said Omkara in determination and shivaay understood his brother feelings.But before he could replay the doctor came out and Omkara rushed towards him.
''Doctor how is Gauri?''asked Omkara as shivaay came and stood beside him holding Ranveer's hand.
''Your wife is out of danger Mr.Oberoi.The bullet missed her heart by few inches and we even lost her twice while operating.But she is out of danger and stable now you can take her home by tomorrow night.''replied the doctor which made the oberoi brothers to sigh in relief.
''Can i see her?''asked Omkara.
''You can once we shift her from the OT.''said the doctor and left them to check the other patients.
Once the doctor left omkara looked at Ranveer who was standing holding shivaay's hand and kneeled down before the little boy and took his small hands in his.
''Your di is fine okay.I promise you i will never let anything happen to her''said Omkara in a soft voice.
''Pinky Promise?''asked Ranveer in a innocent voice and Omkara smiled seeing the innocent boy.
''Pinky promise''said Omkara with a smile and Ranveer hugged him tightly with his small hands.
''Thank you sir.Thank you so much for saving my di''said Ranveer and shivaay smiled seeing this despite himself.
''Don't call me sir okay.Call me Jiju''said Omkara and Ranveer gave him a smile.
''Okay Jiju''said Ranveer and Omkara stood up lifting Ranveer in his arms.
''Shivaay you go and say in some hostel with Ranveer ans come back by evening.I will be here and take care of Gauri''said Omkara giving Ranveer to Shivaay.
''But om are you sure you can manage alone?asked shivaay as he was really worried for his brother.
''I am sure shivaay.I just want to be alone now''said Omkara with a thoughtful look.
''Okay om.But i will call some police to make sure kaali thakur's men won't come here and harm you and Gauri''said Shivaay.
''Sure Shivaay.see you in the evening''said Omkara and shivaay left with Ranveer after giving a tight hug to his brother.
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Omkara entered Gauri's room once the hospital staffs changed her into a private room.As he walked towards her bed his hearted pained to see her lying down with various tubes connected to her soft hands.He know he was responsible for her current state and felt like hurting himself .
Once he reached her bed he sat on the chair beside her bed and took her hand in his with hesitation and looked at her pale face.
''I am sorry for everything Gauri.I know i hurted you a lot by jumping into conclusion without even knowing your side of story.But I promise you that i will take care of you and your brother from no.So please wake up soon and let me earn your forgiveness''said Omkara as a single tear ran down his cheeks.He just prayed Gauri will forgive him as he can't live with the guilt of hurting a girl forgetting his manner in his blind anger and pain.with this thought omkara laid his head on the bed as he felt tired to his bone from the fight and everything he faced today and closed his eyes and drifted to sleep keeping a tight hold on Gauri's hand.
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Okay guys here ends the first chapter.Let me know how the first chapter was and whether i should continue this one or not.For PM please buddy me and leave a review.
Anupamaa
