ff:2gethr ever aftr!!updated part 15 (2 july)

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hello every1!im planning 2 write an ff on chalka!though i m nt new 2 if bt m new 2 this forum.i never thot of writing ff bt nw i loved chalka so much tat i want 2 write an ff.dnt knw much how 2 write n all bt ill try ma level best.plz like n comment 2 tell me shud i continue or nt?
btw sorry ma intro
m tina 4m boston studying medical.an aspiring surgeon.lolz...bt m still 2 far 4m tat.ma hobby z reading books n ma fav z doctors by erich segal.m a fan of vampire diaries.just started watching dlmh n i loved the simple,sweet n charming character of chander n his loyalty 2 alka wich resembles the man of ma dreams wich i havnt got yet n i dnt thnk ill ever get.i also like the character of alka who z more or less just like me in real life,though m nt new 2 if bt new 2 this forum.i read many ffs bt chalka compelled me 2 write an ff 4 them.
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Part 2:page 2
Part 3:page 3
Part 4:page 3
Part 5:page 3
Part 6:page 4
Part 7:page 4
Part 8:page 4
Part 9:page 4
Part 10:page 5
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Part 12:page 5
part 13:page 6
part 14:page 6
part 15:page 6😳
plz plz plz cmnt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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character sketch:
main protogonists
chandar shukla(cs)
21 yrs old.he is a happy-go-lucky person.he z so sweet,smart n nice guy who loves simplicity.a lawyer by profession(student of law nw),he z smart both by looks n by brains.he never accepts defeat n takes life as a challange.he never envies nor hates any1 n z happy the way he z.ppl might thnk he z stupid n way 2 simple bt he dont pay any heck 2 them.he z still single n never had a girlfriend.
surbhijit shukla(ss)
chandar s father.a lawyer by profession who z honest
alka tiwari(at)
19 yrs old.she z a free bird.she has recently got admission in medical n z very happy abt it!she doesnt like 2 apply makeup n b formal like girls of her age do!she z very devoted 2 her carrear n profession n wants 2 b a big sergeon.unlike her other class fellows,she never had any affair.she doesnt like 2 go 2 parties n stuff like tat!
abhishek tiwari(abt)
alka s elder brother.a spoilt brat.he loves drinking,girls n party.doing mba
nandini
a dancer by profession.she z a very stylish,proud girl who loves 2 cheat boys
nityanand tiwari(nnt)
alka n abhishek s father.a politician by profession.wants 2 c his offsprings into politics bt they r least interested.
p.sm so sorry hav never tried writing an ff before so i dont knw how 2 insert pictures in the character sketch.if any1 knws,plz guide me.ill b grateful 2 u!!
Edited by tinatartari - 14 years ago
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PREFACE
The story begins wen alka z enjoying her ride on a bicycle in the woods.she z going alone on the smooth,silent road after she z free frm her medical school tough studies.she has recently given her substage of anatomy n she wants 2 relax her mind of the tiresome study.
On the other hand,chander z busy with his studies in his room.he z unaware of the world around him.
Abhi z busy flirting with his class mates.they r admiring his new ferari he just had 4m his dad.
Nandini z loving the new dance form she just learnt.
all of them are busy wid their lives in their own world.all hav different ambitions,dreams n thngs 2 acheive being unaware wat destiny has in store 4 them.
destiny ll bring them 2gether.chalka n abhini.
its just the intro 2 lemme know whether u ppl approve ma idea of writing an ff or nt?if i get positive response,then only m gonna update furthur n proceed ma story.p.s this story z different 4m the serial bt the personality more or less ll b similar so tat ma readers can enjoy ma storyline in the shades of their fav characters personality.
recap:new characters.original plot of story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...nice ff...do write more, please...btw whats ur name?
It sounds interesting..arre wah..my chandu baba is a lawyer!...Nandini a dancer..cool! Update soon! (and could u pm me, if possible?)
Oh, and to add pictures, you need to upload it somewhere, i.e. photobucket or imageshack, or if its already on the internet, then just insert the URL in between: but without any spaces..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ tinatartari nice!!!
Chandu baba a lawyer?! areee wahhh!
plz do continue!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@tinatartari a nice ff dear...
plz continue na.....
our chandu baba is a lawyer.....😳. oye hoye....😳
Edited by sv003 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnks a lot suvi,ruhi n ss.u guys really made ma day.hopefully ill update 2moro.n whoever wants a pm,plz add me in ur buddy list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NIce try, i like it😉
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PART 1 (edited:plz re-read)
Evening
Alka came back in her room after her bicycle ride in the woods. she ws humming the tone"BABY,BABY,BABY" on entering her room.
Annie asked her "HEY Alka!wats the matter?alka n song?n tat 2 romantic!is everythng ok?"
Alka"yup dear!i ws just free 4m ma substage so m enjoying this"
Annie"oh!btw how did ur substage go?"
Alka"it ws awesome n guess who took ma viva?it ws our new teacher dr eric pattrison!"
Annie"Eric!man he z so dashing!i wish i had taken ma viva wid him!i wud hav loved it!u knw wat all girls drool over him!
Alka"stop it!he z just a teacher.n we shudnt thnk like tat abt him!"
Annie"oh!come on deary!he z afresh 4m medical school n z nt so elder than us!"
Alka"stop ur nonsense annie!"
Annie"oh u boring old lady!just keep dreaming abt ur prince charming n dnt take interest in handsome hot hunks!!n ull land up wid a poor soul like u or ll b alone 4ever!"
Alka"ma prince charming wud b simple,caring n nice unlike these stupid boys over wich many girls drool!"
Annie"oh u n ur stupid dreams!forget it!u wont get any1 ever n ll single like tat"
Alka"annniiee uuuuuuu(throws a pillow at her)
Annie"alkaaaa(throws a pillow back)
they had a pillow fight n end up hugging each othr n lights out...
Chander z sitting on his reading table studying 4 his law test 2moro wen his roomie ralph enters wid food 4 them.yummy chicken sandwiches wid coke.he z so immersed in studies tat he doesnt notices ralph.ralph clears his throat 2 get his attention bt no use.so he goes 2 chander n gently strikes his head.chander looks at him abruptly.
Ralph"hello!good evening gentleman!come 2 the world mr chander!i hav been calling u since 5 mins"
Chander"oh sorry ralph!i dint knw u were here!i ws studying 4 ma law test!u tell wats the matter??"
Ralph"mr chander n his books!no interest in anythng else!u knw wat chander apart 4m ur creapy books thr z a beautiful creature in this world called girls.i thnk u shud also take a look at them"
Chander"m here 4 studies so tat i wud b the best lawyer n then i d go 2 ma country n join politics"
Ralph"if u hav 2 join politics anyways,wats the use of studying law?y waste urself 4 smthng u dnt wanna follow in future?"
Chander"i wanna knw how 2 bring a change before becoming a part of it.our leaders gandhi gee n nehru gee were also lawyers b4 they became leaders"
Ralph"make some love 2!add some colours 2 ur black n white life mr chander!u n ur philosophies.life z so sweet!donot waste it gentleman!u only live 1ce so rejoice it!"
Chander"love n defeat dnt exist 4 me"
Ralph"god!u n ur dialogues!y dnt u ecome a script writer?"
CHANDAR"stop it man!"
RALPH"ok lets eat!"
n they both eat n go 2 sleep.
Recap:back 2 india
Note:I want 2 make some thngs clear before proceeding wid the story!abhishek alka n chander nandini r siblings.chander,alka,abhishek n nandini r childhood frends.they share many memories 2gether bt wen they wr 12 alka n chander went abroad 4 studies.they live in the same city bt never met each othr.coz chander s mother savitri doesnt like his n alka s proximities n she created a huge misunderstanding in chander s heart tat alka z jealous of him n in alka tat chander beefooled her n z a casanova.so both hate each othr n never met aftr moving abroad.
If u like this plz do not 4get 2 hit the like button n leave some comments.it z a treat 4 me 2 read ur comment.they really make me feel gr8!so plz comment!!!u can also write suggestions,criticism.if u want me 2 add somethng or remove smthng,do lemme knw.
love tina😃
Edited by tinatartari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part1 of story tina dear.....😳
i loved all the scenes n i went to heaven/dreamland aftr readin each line.....😳😍
plz.. plz.. continue writin n do continue the story......😉

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