17th June 08 Written Update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY GUYS!!!
My FIRST EVER OFFICIAL UPDATE!!!
And such a MINDBLOWING EPISODE IT WAS TOO!!!
Ahem. Yeah.
Sorry I've just had a bottle of Pepsi. Anyway I hope you enjoy it!
Any comments suggestions whatever just reply okay?😃

Aisha xxx😉
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RECAP:
The villagers that were fighting for reedom with Veer have been captured😕 and are being tortured by Shakaal🤢
Shera promises to look after Dharam😊 while Veer goes off to be a Hero😆
Veer has reached Shakaals lair and is undercover looking very *Ahem Ahem* while hes doing it😉😆
RamJaane has been attacked and Shera has been ambushed!😲

AND NOW:

Shakaal🤢 is laughing evilly as he tortures the VillagerFreedomFighters (He won't be laughing for long) Villager No1 says to Villager No2 "Mein nay kahan tah kay voh nahin aye gah"
(Arre yaar itni jaldi himmat har gaye?😃 Veer ata hain nah! Tora intazar karo!)
Villager No2 tells Villager No1 that Veer will come! (Haan! Ab yeh hoey nah baat!!!😆)
Shakaal🤢 still laughing like a psychotic nutcase and then he gets up and basically proves to me that this episode is based on a horror movie. He starts slicing😲😕 the VillagerFreedomFighters and poking them with his knife! (I thought this was a programme that is targeted for young kids?!😕)
And just when I can't take watching all that blood and gore anymore (I get squeamish) Veer comes!!!😃 and he kills some of the bad guys!!! (I'm not gonna say anything about Veer's costume. Let's just say that I really like it and leave it at that. *Ahem Ahem*😉)
Back to Shakaal🤢 who is still torturing the VillagerFreedomFighters for info on Veer but they won't say anything and Shakaal🤢 just keeps poking and stabbing them🤢😕
Back to Veer (!!!) who kills another badguy😃
And then Shakaal🤢 tells the VillagerFreedomFighters that this is there last chance to tell him who the Hell this guy is who has given them so much courage otherwise he will kill them but the VillagerFreedomFighter says: No we will never tell! Even if we have to lose our life! 👏 (I like this guy himmat wala hain😆)
Shakaal🤢 loses it and raises his knife to kill the himmatwala guy but VEER stops him!!!! (Can I just say that Rajat really knows how to play Angry-And-Hot REEEALLLY well😉😆)
Veers hand is bleeding😲 as he locks eyes with Shakaal🤢 and the villagerFreedomFighters look so shocked but pleased that Veer has come back! (Arre yaaro! Yeh Rajkumar Veer ki himmat hi kuch aur hain!😆😆)
Shakaal🤢 says: "So its you who has given these men the courage to defy me?" And then Veer takes his turban off, the guitar music starts up and Veer hits Shakaal👏 sets the VillagerFreedomFighters free👏 and everyone starts fighting!!!
(Veer looks mindblowingly GORGEOUS *Ahem Ahem*😉 and that supercool guitar soundtrack made it even better! Kya scene tha yaaro! Kya action!!!)
The VillagerFreedomFighters are fighting with Shakaals men and Veer😉 is fighting with Shakaal🤢 and OH. MY. GOD. Veer is sooooo HOT!!!
Ahem. Yeah. Sorry.

Anyway Veer is killing and fighting and looking so mindblowing and sooo angry!!! And then Shakaal🤢 ruins it by bringing out Dharam (Still unconscious😕) and Shera and RamJaane
Veer looks shocked and he drops his sword (NOOOOO!!!!) and Shakaals men come and surround them😕. Then Shakaal🤢 starts shouting about how he wants maafi blah blah blah🤢 and whoever raises his voice against Shakaal🤢 he will do suicide😕 (Yeah this Shakaal is a nutcase. Well done Sagars😕) Veer looks so torn!😭 (And Hot.😉)
Shakaal🤢 tells Veer to bow his head before him otherwise he will slit Dharams throat!😕(Oh God! Maat Karna Veer!!! Saar maat jhokana!!!)
Veer goes down on his knees (NAHIIIN!!!!!😭) and Shakaal🤢 laughs triumphantly😡 (Yeah laugh all you want fatty! Veer is gonna KILL YOU!!!😡)
And then Veer reaches his hand out grabs a spear and throws it at Shakaal!!!👏👏👏 Shakaal falls down dead! (HAHAHAHA!!!!😆) Dharam falls down too (But hes not dead dont worry guys!) and Veer runs over to him😊 The villagers all come running in and Veer stands up😉 And teels them that they are all free!!! AZADI!!!!👏👏👏

Back to Maharaj who is standing with that crazy nutter Beera😕 and asks him about the MessiahBeera goes all nutty and starts shouting about how the Messiah is alive! And Getting STRONGER!!! AND WILL TAKE OVER!!! Etc etc Blah Blah Blah 🤢 (Yeh Beera kitna pagal hain...)
Maharaj looks shocked and then leaves. Short visit. Leaving Beera to talk crazily to himself.😕

Back to Veer and Co (Girls Veer is all covered up again😆) and they are all at some Vaidjis with Dharam still acting like a ragdoll😕 (Itna sara kuch ho gaya aur Dharam ko phir bhi hosh nahin aya😕)
Dharam is put on a bed and the vaidji asks : Who beat the crap out of him? (Swear to God Someone is DYING and the vaidji can only ask stupid irrelevant questions. *Shakes head in disgust*)
Veer tells him to make him better quickly and the Vaidji asks: Is he your rishtadar? (Arre yeh tumhara kya business hain?*rolls eyes*)
Veer says: Yeh saab kuch hain merah 😳😳😳 (Aww!!! Veer!!!)
The vaidji tells Veer that Dharam will be okay and offers to treat him but Veer tells him to treat Shera first.
Shera is about to refuse but then remembers when Veer told her off for arguing the last time they were all getting treated and she keeps her mouth shut and does as she is told😆😆😆
Sheras sad music starts😳 and (I swear to God I didnt imagine this!) Veer is looking at Shera and Shera is getting all shy! AWWWW!!!! (Agar Veer mujhe bhi aisay dekhtah toh mein bhi sharm say saar jhoka latee!😉😆)
Shera tells Veer that I should go now (NOOO!!!! Veer ossey rokh lo!!! Agar nahin rokha tho tumharee PREM KAHANI KATAM!!!!)
Veer tells Shera to stay the night (YAY!!!!😉) and then to go in the morning and Shera is just looking at him so longingly!!! *Squeals* Ahem Sorry.

Oh God. Back to Sakshi.🤢 Who is praying to God to send Veer back to her as soon as possible🤢 Sakshi tum kitnee selfish ho!😡 Let Shera have him for a while!!😡
Somebody knocks at the door (Who could it be???) Its.... KRANTI!!! Oh. No. Sorry. Its just Bhimsen.🤢 Sakshi tells Bhimsen her problem (You know the fact that Rudra is trying to kill her *rolls eyes*) and Bhimsen says that He will be her Hero! Oh God.

Back to Shera😳 who is totally checking out Veer while he's sleeping beside Dharam😆 Becharee Shera! Shera toh paas gayee! Pyar mein!!! AWWW!!!!😳😃😉 Shera looks so beautiful in this scene! And shes remembering all of their moments together! And she's smiling!!!
And then she remembers her Baba and how she has to stay away from them
RamJanne interuppts by asking Shera that These two guys are Rajkumar Dharam and Veer and that they are your friends right? Shera tells him to keep his mouth shut otherwise she will kill him
RamJaane asks why she is always threatening to kill everyone?😆
And Shera tells him that her Baba told her to stay away from them two. And then Shera says that Destiny keeps bringing them all together.😃
Ram jaane is watching Shera and he says that when Shera is with Rajkumar Veer she changes completely and turns into someone else😆😆😆 Ram Jaane sahin kahan tum nay!!!😆 Shera looks at Veer again (AWWW!!!!) I think she's missing him😆

Dharam wakes up (FINALLY) and hes wondering where he is when Veer tells him that he brought him there
Dharam is surprised to find that he is still with him and thanks him Then Dharam tells him Thankyou for telling him that Dilkush is Swastik and not Dilghar and Shera wakes up and hears them. So now Shera knows that everyone is going on a treasure hunt and all to the same place😆😆😆

Becharee Shera!
Can't wait for tomorrows episode!
Sorry about the delay! It took me much longer to write this update than thought it would!😆
Aisha xxx😉




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thornewood9 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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No problem! 😉
Honestly this was the highlight of my day! 😆
Especially seeing Veer all *Ahem Ahem* 😉 😆

Im glad you liked it!
If it was too long or if there's anything i can improve on please guys tell me!
I can ramble on and on and on sometimes 😆

Aisha xxx 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome update alisha 👏 .. I have seen the epi but reading ur update was real fun.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for thw update 😳 👏
thornewood9 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aw thank you guys!!! 😃

Am soooo glad you liked it!!!

Aisha xxx 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really cool update aisha... 👏 thanks a lot... 😃
thornewood9 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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THANK YOU!
😃 😛 😃

Aisha xxx 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow what an update 😆 and you sound as powerful and enthusiastic as a bullet train 😆
Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shraddha!!! 😆
If I didnt say it before I'll say it now!!!

THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH FOR LETTING ME UPDATE!!! 😆 😉 😛

LOVE YOU!!!

Aisha xxx 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Aisha, thnx a lot for this lovely update!!!!!! 😛 yup, d epi was awesome!!! n congratss on ur start!!!! 😃 😃 😃

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