I've got an idea 4 d Gurukul track !

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well just had a thought abt the Gurukul track and Dharam-Sia /Veer-Shera love story....😉my own imagination.....😃

Well this gurukul track is extremely boring...and Since we all knw there are cracks in DV's friendship and the luv story has no exciting element to it....so I thought something like this....

Two princes come to study at the gurukul too...both are twin brothers....named Sourav and Gaurav....Sourav,the elder one is like Dharam -calm and patient, while the younger one,Gaurav is like Veer-always thinking of doing masti and a prankster....now since both of them are a lot in nature like DV, the four of them become good friends....and they are four ppl against Karan , whoz now left alone since Agni has left and thus Karan doesn't trouble DV anymore.

Now accidentally ,the twin brothers find abt Dharam's liking for Sia through Veer ......and it turns out to be that they are Sia's cousins,so they send her letter,asking her to take admission into the Raj kala Bhavan....and Sia,whoz not met Dharam since many days , readily agrees.......so Sia comes there too....and also develops a friendship with Shera in the gurukul.

Now Gaurav comes to know about Veer and Shera catfights, as he saw them fighting on petty issues himself......and later Dharam told him all about them....so Gaurav took up this task of making them meet frequently...he would convince the Guruji to take lectures next to the lake where the Rajkumaris are practising dance...Veer-Shera continue to meet like this...and once Veer also saves her from drowning in the lake...so Shera's fondness for him increases....even though she has promised her dad not to meet him again....the urge to see him keeps rising in her.....both Sia and Shera narrate their stories to each other...and they almost become like sisters.....sharing each of their secrets with each other...they keep watching Dharam and Veer practicing different skills and are totally taken by their charming personalities.

This,brings about a difference in Shera, she no more thinks abt the khazana now...and Veer seeing her changing attitude, develops a small crush towards her too....both Dharam and Veer now wish to spend their leisure time watching Sia and Shera secretly...and they are unable to make out this confusion that has taken birth in their minds.

Now DV and Siya-Shera complete their gurukul training and go back to their respective homes...Now Veer misses Shera a lot...there are several questions bothering him...Why is he wanting to catch atleast a glimpse of her?What is this sudden tendency inside him....he is unable to concentrate on the throne too....he is completely confused...he has many questions in front of him....but the answers seem to have been lost somewhere......

One day, DV go for pleasure hunting in a forest...Veer is feeling uneasy...he notices a sudden change in the atmosphere..everything around him was pleasant...he knew he had sensed it somewhere..but could not make out where.....He left Dharam alone,who was sitting on the horse with a confused expression on his face.....Veer started following the origin of the magic in the atmosphere...he seemes to know the way.....and from about fifteen feet away,he saw Shera sitting there....there were tears in her eyes...she was missing Veer terribly and wanted to see him....at any cost...she wiped her tears....looked behind and saw Veer some feet away......Veet outsretched his hands...Shera ran and flung herself into them...both were hugging each other for what looked like hours......and they seemes releived...because both had got their answer...they had fallen deeply in Love....

do tell me if you like it😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good work Great story mazaa aaya padkar 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks guys for the compliments! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice 😛 masaaledaar chatpataa banaa diyaa hai na tumne.. sam... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!! very sweet... especially the ending... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

nice 😛 masaaledaar chatpataa banaa diyaa hai na tumne.. sam... 😛

Like a sweet dish😆but Sam?😕 my name is Reeti😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kunataanya

wow!! very sweet... especially the ending... 😳

thanks neeri😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mad-about-Rajat

Like a sweet dish😆but Sam?😕 my name is Reeti😛

waaaaaah i always get confused between reeti and samprada 😭 even now type karne se pehle chaar baar sochaa... phir bhi galat likh diyaa... sowwie...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woww reeti ur idea abt the gurukul is so muchh better! 😛 Would love to see it! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haila!! Reets Tum To Ahem Ahem* 😉
Kya Story Hain 😳
Aur Ending To Masha Allah 😍

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