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Posted: 17 years ago
shona next part kaha hai 😳 we all r waiting 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

shona next part kaha hai 😳 we all r waiting 😆



megha yaar i just got up a while ago 😆
i'll post later on 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh...toh tum soh kar utee hoo koi baat nahi hum sham tak wait karege aage ki story ke liye 😆
Edited by meghaparti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
this fanfic is totally cool.i came across it yesterday only and read it from starting to the end non-stop.it's 2 cute.the scenes between the couples are so romantic that the person reading like me started blushing.
keep up the good work shonu. 😊 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok heres the next part:
credit for pix: Vinisha
The following morning:

JV n Agni are in their secret cave talking to their men

Jv: iss bar koi galti nahin honi chahiye...agar ho gayi toh tum sab ko mar dalunga...samaj gaye

Agni: baas Veer ko iss bar khatam karo...uske bina dharam toh vaise he mar jaye ga aur phir maharaj bhi

he laughs


the men leave

DV are in the courtroom talking to the nobles about the new fort they are going to build when a sainik runs in

Sainik: Rajkumar DharamVeer ki jai...koi luteron ne aryanagar ki seema pe atank macha dia hai...jaldi kuch kijiye warna ko nahin bachega

Veer grabs his sword

Dharam addresses everybody and says we will be back shortly n him and Veer go n get their weapons

in the hallway they come across Sia n Nivi who learn that the boys are going to save the people of aryanagar and Nivi quickly does their arti
She does the tilak on Veer n then on Dharam...

Dharam is about to leave but turns and says to Sia

Dharam: mere intazar karna

sia simply replies:

Sia: Vijaybhava

the two boys leave from there n get on their horses

they go as fast as possible n get to the place of attack in about two hours and forty minutes

The boys fight like never before and defeat the dakoos with the help of some locals...suffering not many injuries...the dakoos were tough but DV were no less

Once they got rid of the dakoos and reassured the safety of all locals and tried to make things normal...the locals saw the care and determination to keep their people safe in DV's eyes and were all praises for DV

the boys are making their way back to aryanagar...it was nearing nightfall and they wanted to get back to their palace before night and so decided to go through the jungle which would cut across alot of distance

the boys were cutting through the jungle when about 30 men came running and attacked the boys from behind...both were caught by surprised and so were knocked of their balance and fell from the horses

Veer was fighting about 16 men at once...and was being almost overpowered


Dharam on the other hand was dealing with 14 men who were driving Dharam well away from Veer

Veer had killed or knocked out atleast 7 men and was dealing with the rest but with difficulty for he had been cut all over on his hands and on his stomach and shoulder
He frantically sliced the air with his sword in attempt to defend himself...he had just sliced one of the men when suddnely a couple of guys came and hit him on the head from behind with a hard rock

they struck again and teh third when Veer actually lost his concious


they thought he had died and went away to give Jv the gd news

Dharam had just finished off all the men he was dealing with and got back to Veer. Dharam was injured all over his hands and had a cut on his waist and on his shoulders

Dharam looked at Veer...Veer's face was cover with blood which was streaming from a big cut on his forehead and cheek

Dharam: Veer ankhen kholo...Veer ootoh...mein vishva ko kya jawab dunga....Veer

He somehow managed to get Veer up

one of the horses came back to them...Dharam put Veer on the horse and then he got on it

And slowly on the horse they made their way out of the jungle

when they reached outside the jungle and into a small village of aryanagar they were spotted by many locals

Dharam too was losing his concious
The locals took them straight to the palace

it was about midnight and all the ladies were sitting worring about the boys
on one hand arya was out on the otherside of Aryanagar and Jai and Agni had goon to do shikar(hunting) and would return in a couple of days and now DV hadnt come back

the locals are let in with DV...they put DV on the bed and the Vaidji is called immediately

one vaid worked on plastering all Dharam's wound while the other worked on Veer


All were so tensed

Dharam came round

the ladies start questioning him

Nivi: Dharam kaise ho beta

Dharam: Veer...Veer kaisa hai bua

Sunaina: vaidji ilaj kar rahe hai

Nivi: par ye sab kaise hua

Dharam recalls all that had happened
All are left in shock

Vaidji treating Veer comes to talk to nivi
Nivi: veer teekh to haina

Vaidji: is waqt kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai...rajkumar veer ke haath pe...saar pe aur kandho pe bohat chooth ayi hai aur bohat khoon beh chuka hai...hum puri koshish karenge...par ap prathna karna

with that he goes back and begins examining veer again

Veers heart beats were slowing down

Vishva has tears trickling down her eyes then she recalls Veers words

"tum veer ki premika banki inti jaldi har man gayi"

she wipes her tears and goes into the shiv mandir


Vishva: meine apko bola tah ke mere Veer ki raksha karna...ab sab apke haath mein...mein apki mandir ke ek hazar ek soh gyara chakar lagaungi...tab tak mera Veer teekh hojana chahiye

She lights a diya and begins to walk around the mandir and shivling in circles


after some time Veer's heartrate was getting back to normal
Dharam entered the shiv mandir where Vishva was praying...he was being supported by Sia...as he cudnt walk properly due to injuries

Vishva continued in circles...Dharam and Sia also prayed
Veer was beginning to improve....he was still unconcious though

Vishva got to 1000 circles when Veer gained concious...Nivi and all were so enthrilled that he was ok...

Veer asked for Vishva
Sanchi replied to his question

Sanchi: woh apke liye shiv mandir mein prathna kar rahi hai

Veer slowly got out...Nivi helped him much and from their with Sanchi help he entered the mandir...Nivi knew Veer was alive now only because of Vishva's prayers so allowed him to go

Vishva was feeling very dizzy and tired and energyless...she has 11 circles to do...Veer watched her do teh last 4...after completing them she bowed to the shivling and got up...she saw Veer

Veer: vishva

Vishva mustered all energy in her and ran to him...she touched his face slowly...when she reached his lips he gently kissed her fingers....she fainted in his arms



Dharam and Sunaina come in with Sia...they splash some water on Vishva's face...she comes round

Nivi says that none of them have eaten all day so they should proceed towards the dining chamber where there is a special breakfast for all

see all were up all night worried about DV

After breakfast when Arya returns he is shocked to see DV in sucha a state

Dharam: pitahji humme aur Veer ko apse kuch zaroori baat karni hai...akele mein

Arya: app humare saath chaliye


DV go with Arya who asks for everyone to leave the courtroom...including sainiks

Arya: kya baat hai


Dharam: pitahji ye jo hum pe hamle ho rahe hai...kaas karke Veer pe woh koi itafak nahin...yh koi jaan bhuj kar, kar raha hai...aur ye humle koi aur nahin balke iss mehal mein se koi kar raha hai

Arya: par kaun aur kyun?

Veer: jai mama aur agni...

Arya: par iski vaja

Dharam: waja toh woh hi hai jis ke upar ap birajmaan hai

Arya thinks for a while...

Arya: par jai bhaiya aur agni...

Veer: maharaj ye singhasen kuch bhi kara sakta hai...iss singhasen ne mahabharat mein bhaiyon ke bhich yudh karaya tha...

Dharam: aur pitahji hummne humari kanose suna hai...jai chacha aur agni ko ye kehte hue ke woh pehle Veer phir humme aur phir...phir apko mardalenge

Arya looks for a moment at Dharam...he knew Dharam was not lying and he also found it difficult to believe what they were saying

Arya: humme thoda waqt chahiye sochne...hum iss baat pe zaroor ghor karenge

Dharam: par pitahji Veer ke jaan ko khatra hai...hum haath pe haath rakh ke beht thode sakte hai

Arya: Veer apko puri surakhsha milegi...app mehal se bahar nahin jayengi...ye humara adesh hai

DV leave
Arya looks tensed

Precap:

Arya: bhaiya hummne sab sun liya...ab humme DV pe yakeen hai...

JV begins to act

Veer: maharaj mujhe agiya dijiye ke mein unhe yaheen cheer dalun


enjoy

shona


Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the update shona great part once again. Vishwa 1000 chakkar kate.....veer ke liye hmmmmm how romantic 😉 😊 Keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey thanx shona..... yet an other amazing part..... do contineu 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

this fanfic is totally cool.i came across it yesterday only and read it from starting to the end non-stop.it's 2 cute.the scenes between the couples are so romantic that the person reading like me started blushing.
keep up the good work shonu. 😊 😉



thank u hun
yup the story is mostly romance
im glad u liked my work n hope u continue to do so!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

thanks for the update shona great part once again. Vishwa 1000 chakkar kate.....veer ke liye hmmmmm how romantic 😉 😊 Keep up the good work 👏



im glad u liked this part megha
yup vishva went 1111 times for veer around the mandir
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aandhanika

Hey thanx shona..... yet an other amazing part..... do contineu 😉



thanks hun
im glad u liked this part!

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