Dharam and Veer use their royal swords! - Page 2

Wowwwwwwww Lashyyyy!!!!!! 🤗
Mwaaahhh...Fantastic!!! 👏 👏 👏
I was sooo intrested in readin d whole thing...it was gr8!!! 😉
It will be gr8 to see Rajat n Vikrant enacting d whole thing!!! 😍
So gud to see dat u have such brilliant creative skills.. Please continue writing all of this!!!!

Hey Lashy 😛 ,


firstly amazin narration........most impt very gud storyline hope to see dis kinda story on Tv too.. 👏

v rtians, shud def recommend ur name 😆

lashy 👏 👏 👏 🤗beautifully written and i loved the way you have described everything.

I especially loved the way you have mentioned :

how veer always looks out for Dharam and making sure he is fine how dharam runs to save the little girl even though he is tired. very gallant of him 😊 veer's entry and how he saves dharam "he is distracted by the loud screams of a menacing rider on a horse charging towards them". 👏 👏 I could just picture this scene so clearly and will set the forum on fire and everyone will start fainting. 😊 👏 how veer and dharam looking after each others wounds and at the same time teasing each other. this shows the lovely friendship bond they have between them 👏 😍 how veer reassures the girl that everything will be fine. that is such a sweet scene 😊
• lastly how how the girl says that if only the king was like this and both dharam and veer look at each other. This would make both of them realise about the people and what their needs and wants are

I am so looking forward to the next scenes. 😳 😳 😳😍😍 😍

Oh My My........ Shradhha dear.......😃

Kya story likhi hai yaar.....👏 Amazing........

Its so wonderfully and gracefully written, what should I say?😛 I loved the way u described everything. ⭐️ I could imagine everything happening.

I admire and adore ur writting skills, specially your Vocab power......👏

The script is so nice that in the first part itself I fall in love with DV😳😳😳. Story line is perfect😊. I wished that Sagars show us something like this.😍😍😍

Thanks for posting and waiting for next........😉

That was one beautiful script. Very well-written!👏👏 I hope you do write a next part.😳 Eager to know, will Dharam and Veer actually do something following this incident...

2773696 (sorry yaar I don't know your name) but thank you so much for those lovely words and I am sure you are as talented as I am if not more… thank you so much for making my day 😳
Abhy - Omgggggggg those were too exquisite comments abhy and I think you should reserve such wonderfully worded poetry for something that is really that worth it… mujhe sharmindaa mat karo yaar… neverthless something I will definitely cherish 😳
Reenie - Thanx reenie for listing out each and everything that caught your attention and imagination.. thanx so much for that detailed commentary 😃

Thanx leelu, prcfan, nishu, bhuvi, aashi, swordy,
Thanx luv_prc for the special comments…
😳
Pooji lets see if my tubelight mind shines brightly enough to give me some more new ideas to continue 😳
Kai thank you so much… hmmm agni haan? That guy is seriously up to no good.. tumhaara choice itna bura kyun hota hai har baar? 😆
Kiran and Ppiyu * a big huggggggggg* yes this was just for you two
😳

Originally posted by: lashy

Kai thank you so much… hmmm agni haan? That guy is seriously up to no good.. tumhaara choice itna bura kyun hota hai har baar? 😆
😳

wht !!! 😲..is my agni so bad 😭😭....well now lasho sagar leave me with no option:

Veer - tooo young to fall for😳

Dharam - tooo skinny🤢

only my harshu is kinda tolerable😆...

awesome work lash, m spellbound 👏

Oh lash......Apki jitni taareef ki jai kam hai 👏 👍🏼
btw....the girl rescued by DV....was she a child or a teen.......... just curious 😉

thanz aditi... 😳

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Oh lash......Apki jitni taareef ki jai kam hai 👏 👍🏼
btw....the girl rescued by DV....was she a child or a teen.......... just curious 😉

😆 a child...