1st September 2008 Written Update

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Hello people. I am back with this weeks first update. Firstly th recaps:
There was something about jaivardhan which i didn't bother remembering.🥱 🥱
Veer is hidding the hatyar while dharam is talking to him trying to find out what Veer is up to. (But in vain.)😉 😆
Finally!!!!!!! DharamVeer people have heard my cries or should i say screams and reduced the length of the recaps.😆 😆
As the scene goes Veer catches up with Dharam and tries to distract him so that Shera can escape with the hatyar. But Dharam already comes to know that Shera is helping Veer and captures her. The sipahi bring Shera in front of Dharam and Veer. Veer stares at Shera (Or might i say at her beauty. Whatever it was, he was just staring at her.😉 😉) Dharam goes nearer to Shera...........
D:- Shera... Tum kaisi ho?
Shera justs looks at Dharam with a straight face trying not to react.
D:- Suna hain ki tum Veer ki madat kar rahi ho taaki vo Aryanagar ke andar hatyar lekar jaa sake.
Shera smiles
S:- Bhala hum Veer ki madat kyun karenge?
D:- Ye abhi pataa chal jaaega.
Dharam goes nearer to the cart and opens one of the pots kept in it. He was so shocked to find no hatyar in them but pickles. All the pots were filled with pickles. (Shera might have definitely been thinking looking at Dharam's expressions "Dharam ko mirchi lagi toh main kya karoon.....")😆 😆 😆 😆
Dharam goes towards Shera again
D:- En sab barniyon main sirf aachar hain....
S:- Haan! Shera ab emaandaari se paise kamaane ki koshish kar rahi hain.🤣
Dharam was in absolutely disbeleif. (So was i. Shera is so clever. Akhir, she is Veer's girl.)😛
Dharam told the sipahi to check the pots again but they found nothing but aachar. Upset, Dharam goes to Veer
D:- Hum jaante hain ki ye sab tumhari chaal hain Veer
V:- Tumne ye pahle bhi kahaa hain
D:- Hum tumhari yojanaa ka pataa zaroor lagaayenge.
V:- Ye bhi tumne pehle kahaa hain.🤣
Dharam goes away. Veer looks at Shera one last time and goes away. (Oohoo Veer! Just can'y keep your eyes off her, can you?)😳 😉 😆
Now in the mahal, Nivriti is pacing when charusinha enters her room. She asked him why she bhaiya had to leave so suddenly and whether everything was alright. Just then pari came inside and charu caught a glimpse of her. Nivriti distracted him and sent him away. Pari brought samagri for Nivriti and said that she had to go since Veer would be coming back from the yatra soon. Nivriti told her to leave and said that someone had to be there taki Veer ki nazar utaar sake. (So sweet!)😃
Dharam, Veer, Sia(God damn it!)😡 and the shramiks were sitting on the ground. Dharam was looking at Veer angrily and walked away. Just then 😡Miss Attitude😡 got up and walked in the direction towards the shramiks. As usual, she was half blind or maybe completely and kicked a bundle of clothes and didn't bother to look back. A small girl got angry and told her to look down while she is walking. She said that Aryavraths always keep their heads held high and never look down when they walk. (Wait a minute!!!!! Since when has she become an Aryavrath. (Bloody bin bulaaya mahemaan!!!!!!!!!!)😡
Sia walked away. But Veer followed her and stopped her in her path. Veer told her to go back and pick up the clothes that she ruined. She obviously had to refuse. (She an Aryavrath naaaaa...)😕 Veer told her that she has to treat the shramiks also with some respect. If she can't then she doesn't have to come in the way of the shramiks. Sia told him that he is coming in her way and to leave her alone. Veer agreed and told her that she can go her away.
Sia walked away and as i said she is completely blind and feel into a pool of mud. (Agian!!) (I wish it was cow dung.) All the shramiks started laughing and so did Veer. The little girl said again loudly "I told you look down when you walk." (Suddenly my mom came in. Anu, stop laughing so loudly. If you laugh in a louder frequency than this, then the window pane will shatter. Hey! Now thats over exaggeration. But i guess if she saw that scene then even she would have started laughing that loudly.)😳 😆 😆 😉 Dharam had to come when all the racket got over and helped sia. He looked at Veer and said that there is a limit to everything. (Hey!!!!! What the crap?? What did Veer do??? He was no where near Sia)😭 😭. Both Dharam and Sia walked away.
Jaivardhan and Agni are walking towards Veers house and entered it. A girl named Rupa was standing there. They said that they wanted to meet the massiha. Rupa told them that he would be coming shortly and invited them for lunch. They went in. After eatign they told their real motive was to kill Veer's family and also killed Rupa.
Dharam and Veer are walking back home when one of the shramiks asked Veer how will they take the hatyaar back to Aryanagar. Veer told him to handle everthing and he went back to where Shera was waiting. Veer ran towards her. Shera told her that the hatyaar are kept in the pots. Veer looked at Shera
V:- Ab tumhaara kaam ho gaya hain.
Shera just looked at him knowing very well that Veer didn't mean a single thing that he was saying.
V:- Ab mujhe tumhari koi zaroorat nahin. Kuch he der mein hum Aryanagar ke simaa pe honge. Uske baad tumhara raasta alag aur mera raasta alag. Ye raha tumhare kaam ke paise.
Veer held out a bag of gold and gave it to her. Shera took it.
S:- Accha hain. Akhir tum Shera ko thoda samaj paye.
Veer went to the back of the cart. Shera didn't think once before throwing the bag back into the cart and she left hurriedly.(That is so nobel. She is not trying to show Veer that she has changed. She just knows that she has.)👏 👏 Veer came back to find Shera gone. He saw in the cart that the bag of money that he gave to Shera was there. (Come on Veer. Don't act so dumb.You know that Shera has changed and just for you.)😆 😆😉 😳 😊
Veer took out the hatyaar and started it cleaning it. Just then Dharam realised that he couldn't see Veer anywhere. He went back. The shramiks saw that Dharam was coming their way. They gathered together and pretended as though they were talking to Veer.
Well well well........ I must say that shramiks are not as dumb as i thought they were.😉 By the way...... Where is that wanabe kranti gone. I just realised that he was missing.😕
Well thats it for me.
Hope you liked it
Please do comment
Signing off
Your one and only babli girl
ANUSHA.🤗

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omg anu..
u with ur update
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hey thanx 4 thhe update,missd it!
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thanh u 4 the updates .....................thanx a lot ......
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Thanks for the written update dear..
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thanx for the update anusha..😊
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thanks alot to you guys for spending time to read my update.
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Thanks alot foa the update dear .....

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