Kaanto Ka Safar , Phoolon Ki Gali - Page 2

Originally posted by: DrFuture

Beautiful 💓

Your writing has calmed my Dhadkan. The thought of what could have been is heartbreaking. Could imagine it happening. Visions of Deepika putting her heart into her dream, saving lives. And Abhay in a different world, with his family.

Thanks for sharing.

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I am glad that you like it ❤️

Thanks for reading

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Originally posted by: Kri18

I would love to read it

So here is a lil glimpse of Deepika's view in form of poem...it will be sad too

In this chilling winter night here,

I am reminscing of a past, I left 40

yrs ago,

I am all here alone, no one is there

That past was of a pure hearted soul, I knew...

Which my attention never drew..

Somewhere the hands are still

waiting for me..

Wherever is he now,

Down in my heart

For once I crave to see..

Those hands were there by me to console,

I didn't saw,

Those eyes cried with me,

I failed to notice,

His smile, smiled with me

What was that then?

Why I looked for the demon,

Why I got into his talks..

Where is that demon now,

Perhaps living a life of wow...

That day, I made him walk of..

And I didn't see him, Oh! God

He was the friend I craved for,

And that feelings was so pure ..

My eyes are sored, hair are grey,

Yet, I hope to see him once

Before I meet the death day!!!

(She cries)

Deepika's view at age of 70

I feel this is how they will end it all :) A bittersweet story which makes us wonder of everything that could have been and that we only get what we deserve....and Abhay did deserve someone like Shreya....who understood, valued and respected him!

Takes me back to one of my fav songs...Maana ke hum yaar nahi :)

The beauty of life is that eventually, with time, everyone moves on in life. Time may or may not heal the hurt but it definitely teaches us to live with it more comfortably. You have captured this aspect of Abhay's life so well. Loved it. It had a really peaceful end with the thought that in the end, things do get better ❤️

Write more soon

Originally posted by: Sanjanas

I feel this is how they will end it all :) A bittersweet story which makes us wonder of everything that could have been and that we only get what we deserve....and Abhay did deserve someone like Shreya....who understood, valued and respected him!

Takes me back to one of my fav songs...Maana ke hum yaar nahi :)

Thanks for reading ❤️

Actually That song was my inspiration for this story 😊

Originally posted by: Chir-Cute

The beauty of life is that eventually, with time, everyone moves on in life. Time may or may not heal the hurt but it definitely teaches us to live with it more comfortably. You have captured this aspect of Abhay's life so well. Loved it. It had a really peaceful end with the thought that in the end, things do get better ❤️

Write more soon

Thanks for reading ❤️

I will write more whenever i get time

Oh God oh God this is such a beautiful fanfic dear. Its really amazing. The story of vipika is exactly how i want to be in the show. You are a really good writer. You wrote from the perspective of abhay and ut was wonderful. Loved it.😍😍😍😍

Please do write more in future😊

Originally posted by: Rohitfan321

Oh God oh God this is such a beautiful fanfic dear. Its really amazing. The story of vipika is exactly how i want to be in the show. You are a really good writer. You wrote from the perspective of abhay and ut was wonderful. Loved it.😍😍😍😍

Please do write more in future😊

I am glad that you like it.

Thanks for reading 🤗

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Originally posted by: Anuprerna_fan

So here is a lil glimpse of Deepika's view in form of poem...it will be sad too

In this chilling winter night here,

I am reminscing of a past, I left 40

yrs ago,

I am all here alone, no one is there

That past was of a pure hearted soul, I knew...

Which my attention never drew..

Somewhere the hands are still

waiting for me..

Wherever is he now,

Down in my heart

For once I crave to see..

Those hands were there by me to console,

I didn't saw,

Those eyes cried with me,

I failed to notice,

His smile, smiled with me

What was that then?

Why I looked for the demon,

Why I got into his talks..

Where is that demon now,

Perhaps living a life of wow...

That day, I made him walk of..

And I didn't see him, Oh! God

He was the friend I craved for,

And that feelings was so pure ..

My eyes are sored, hair are grey,

Yet, I hope to see him once

Before I meet the death day!!!

(She cries)

Deepika's view at age of 70

Beautiful Poem

This reminded me of my favorite song. pretty obscure the movie and song. Do listen if u get change (movie Mr singh Mrs Mehta)

Baarhaan Dil Mein Ik Sawaal Aaya

Aaj Socha Toh Yeh Khayaal Aaya

Do Kadam Saath Bas Chale Tum Hum

Hum Safar Toh Na The Kabhi Tum Hum

Baarhaan Dil Mein Ik Sawaal Aaya

Kisane Socha Tha Din Yeh Aayenge

Apane Saaye Bhi Chhut Jaayenge

Main na jaanu Mujhe Khushi Hai Ya Ghum

Humsafar Toh Na The Kabhi Tum Hum

Thanks for the Tag Kri❤️

This was so beautiful 🤗

I kind of see Dhadkan's residents ending up in a similar fashion like you posted here.

Loved how you were able to illustrate Abhay's feelings through a Diary. Shreya would have been such an understanding partner & I would love to meet their daughter & ruffle her hair probably.

All of this was kind of serene & the lines used in the end summarised all so well. Splendid 👏