The Revenge OF Love || Thread 2 || Chapter 16 updated 24th december

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyz my previous thread was incomplete and as i was not updating mods has clpsed tht thread so i am opening new one ..
Heres the Previous thread link
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3900734/ll-the-revenge-of-love-ll-chapter-14-updated-at-pg-93-on-31st-may
This was my dream stry so i will try my best to continue it .. So heres chapter 15 ..

CHAPTER 15
Karan took Manyata out of the village forever ..Manyata wasnt in her sense .. He had to take her to the hospital as she was bleeding ..They were in a truck which had given them a lift as soon as they reach the town they will get down of the truck...


Uday was admitted in the nearest hospital by the local people "Holy Care" was the hospital ..He was bleeding hard..

Holy Care was the only hospital which came first reaching the town ..Karan got down from the truck along with the senseless body of Manyata ...He rushed in the hospital as fast as his legs could and made Manyata admitted in hospital ..He couldnt bear manatas situation after all he loved her ..

Udays situation was critical ..He had lost alot of blood .. Giriraj had already reached the place ...

Doctor came out of the chamber making sure tht manyata was safe and was out of danger .. "she is fine you dont need to worry..i gave her medicines and bandaged her wounds.. She will recover soon..She need proper rest just" , doctor said to Karan.. "Can I go to her??" "Yes sure u can " "Thank u doctor " said karan...

"He has lost alot of blood ..He need some more blood nurse!!" "Whats his blood group" " O negetive " "Oh No!! The rarest blood group!! GO bring it early from blood bank!! He is losing his heart beat!!!! "

She opened her eyes..Who else can be more happy than karan ??!! Manyata felt someones hand on hers and thought it to be Uday .. She murmured "Uday" ..Karan was little disheartened hearing UV's name still he controlled himself and said " No its me Karan, manyata" "Oh ! where are we ?? " " In a hospital" .. Tears rolled from manyatas eyes, she said " I left the village na ?? where i will live now .. I dont have any place to live!! "

small update ri8 but dont wrry frm now i will try to update the stry everyday 😳 too busy in my life so i dont get enough time to think abt it 🤢 but still i will try to continue it




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chap 16- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/4536256/the-revenge-of-love-thread-2-chapter-16-updated-24th-december?pn=6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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heyy sis wowww... 😊
that u r continuing it.. 😊
im really happy atleast u listened to me that i told u to continue it as ur concept was unique as i think and i really love it... 😊
but sis itni jaldi yeh khyaalll kaise aya.. 😛 really that was super-fast... 😃 😛
anyways i muchhh muccchhh thank u Radika sis... 😊 😃
and one request now dont leave it... or eslei wont talk to u..😛
waise bhi itni kahan baat karti hn... i think 3 to 4 times in a month [:([ life hi asi hogayi hai... ufff itni hell tough hai yrrr... i just wanna cry and die yrrr kyun life itnii tough hai... 😭
and yeh toh 4 saal chalega so tab puri pagal hojayhongi aur mein hi patient ban jaungi khud hi... 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Radhika, tu story likhti thi ? ? ? ! ! ! 😲 . Thread 2 start awsum. Hope Uday gets saved.Continue soon. Bt don't need 2 give update too soon. Xam is going so concentrate on it first fir jab tym mile tab likhna. All the best 👍🏼.I really lyked it v.much bt a bit upset tu mujhe iski baareme kabhi bataya nahi. 😔.💔. Running 2 read thread 1 . 😛 🤣.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha

heyy sis wowww... 😊 thnx 😳

that u r continuing it.. 😊 happy to see u happy 😃 😆
im really happy atleast u listened to me that i told u to continue it as ur concept was unique as i think and i really love it... 😊 thnk u 😳
but sis itni jaldi yeh khyaalll kaise aya.. 😛 really that was super-fast... 😃 😛 hmm thought to finish the stry 🤔
anyways i muchhh muccchhh thank u Radika sis... 😊 😃 u r most welcome 🤗
and one request now dont leave it... or eslei wont talk to u..😛 i will try my best
waise bhi itni kahan baat karti hn... i think 3 to 4 times in a month [:([ life hi asi hogayi hai... ufff itni hell tough hai yrrr... i just wanna cry and die yrrr kyun life itnii tough hai... 😭 i also dont like my life 🤢 so dont cry 😃 we r same same 😳 😆
and yeh toh 4 saal chalega so tab puri pagal hojayhongi aur mein hi patient ban jaungi khud hi... 😭 aise nhi bolte 😒 😭

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekra101

Radhika, tu story likhti thi ? ? ? ! ! ! 😲 . Thread 2 start awsum. Hope Uday gets saved.Continue soon. Bt don't need 2 give update too soon. Xam is going so concentrate on it first fir jab tym mile tab likhna. All the best 👍🏼.I really lyked it v.much bt a bit upset tu mujhe iski baareme kabhi bataya nahi. 😔.💔. Running 2 read thread 1 . 😛 🤣.

agar to kya kar leti kamini 🤔 oshaddho shadhon 🤣 hmm thread 2 padke comment bhi dena 😳 🤣 nhi to lath padegi bum pe 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: munia.ash2015

Interesting...

Will read it Asap

thnk u deari 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: perfection

agar to kya kar leti kamini 🤔 oshaddho shadhon 🤣 hmm thread 2 padke comment bhi dena 😳 🤣 nhi to lath padegi bum pe 🤣


dodt, manyan kar de. uday ek number ki kamine. teri taraf se mein manverians ki sub joote , chappal ,tomato hug kar lungi aise🤗. tu mera uday ki liye raha pyar ko nafrat mein badal diya. unda bana de, uday rahe uss sex-worker ko leke, aur manyat rahe sukh pe. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekra101


dodt, manyan kar de. uday ek number ki kamine. teri taraf se mein manverians ki sub joote , chappal ,tomato hug kar lungi aise🤗. tu mera uday ki liye raha pyar ko nafrat mein badal diya. unda bana de, uday rahe uss sex-worker ko leke, aur manyat rahe sukh pe. 😃

😳 atto typos dekhti kya kar sakti hu me manveer ke sath 🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oye Radhika ki bacchi, tune mujhe kaha tu mera bam pe lath marega, issliye tujhe mujhse milna padhega aur tu pehle thodi yaad kar tu mujhe milega tou mein kyan karunga ? Tera paisa se tujhe aur mein Canada jaunga aur uski baad... 🤣 😆. Kya kehte hain,haan sikar khud chalke shikari ki paas aa gaya. Ho ha ha ha 🤣.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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R Radhika tui bolchili na oshaddho sadhon er kotha? Sun,eta Ananta Jalil er kaj, Ekrar na.🤣. Medical Science ekhono eto unnata na je ami heart ber kore felle ami beche jabo. Antoto tor biye r 'jamai chara baby' dekhar jonno holeo bachte hobe. He he 🤣. R tui amr bam e kick korle,ami korbo tor main point e ... 🤣🤣.
Luv u babes ,pura hridoy upachaye pora valo basa🤗🤗🤗.

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