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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone
I m anushruthi
Some of you know me ...

this is my first manveer os
please be kind
I hope You like it
I dedicate this to Shahista01

Shahista didi this one is specially for you

INTRODUCTION :

I wrote this OS keeping manveer in mind but U will find that no names
are mentioned here as it is written in first person POV view and suits the concept of this OS better .

This is from Manyata's POV . It can b read as a diary entry or simply as her thoughts Manyata has flashbacks of the past and can remember little uday but not his name or his face .

while reading this OS , keep in mind this quote


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BEING ABLE TO WAIT IS A SIGN OF TRUE LOVE AND PATIENCE
ANYONE CAN SAY I LOVE YOU
BUT NOT EVERYONE CAN WAIT AND PROVE ITS TRUE .
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Without further ado i give you my First Manveer Os Happy reading


WAIT

One word . Four letters . It seems all I do is wait . Wait for the Dawn . Wait for the sun to set . Wait for a change . Wait to complete a task. Wait to know the outcome . The word is short . But wait can both be short and long . The greatest , Longest wait I have ever had to endure is to wait for YOU to enter my life . To light it and make it bright . I will wait to see the dawn break with you by my side . I will wait to watch the sun set in your arms . I will wait to spend every moment with you . Even now , every moment I think of you . You haunt my thoughts .

I don't know who you are , where you are , how you are , but for you here I wait . I don't know if you exist but you exist in my thoughts . You exist in my every breath , in every heart beat .

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WHATEVER IT TAKES
OR HOW MY HEART BREAKS
I WILL BE RIGHT HERE WAITING FOR YOU
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I know not when we will meet , how we will meet , where we will meet , IF we will meet ; but I wait . I have thought of You several times . Infinite times actually . I have thought and imagined different scenarios with you . It seems as thought they will never happen. Part of me feels as if they have already happened . It seems as thought they are not mere imaginary scenes but visions of the past . Visions belonging to a different time , a different era and perhaps a different world . They could be visions of the future . Those beautiful pictures in my head might actually happen . All i have to do is wait for you .
I KNOW NOT YOUR FACE ; YET I KNOW YOUR SMILE .
I KNOW NOT THE COLOUR OF YOUR EYES ; YET I COULD RECOGNISE THEM THE SECOND MY EYES MEET YOURS .
I KNOW NOT YOUR NAME ; YET I CAN PICTURE YOUR NAME LEAVING MY LIPS AND YOU RESPONDING TO MY CALLS .
My heart calls out to you . I know that your heart can feel it . I will wait to hear you say that your heart beats for me .
I KNOW NOT YOUR VOICE ; YET IT SEEMS TO BE A MELODY .
I KNOW NOT YOUR FEELINGS , YOUR EMOTIONS ; YET I KNOW YOU WILL LOVE ME .
I KNOW NOT IF YOU ARE PERFECT ; YET I KNOW WE WILL BE A PERFECT FIT .
When I meet you , I will know that you are the one meant for me . You are mine as I am yours . So long I have been alive , I have existed ... But I will start living the day you come into my life . I am not hoping that you will sweep me off my feet. I just want to walk with you by my side . I don't care where the road leads , the journey will be beautiful as long as you are with me . I will wait for the day when our paths will cross . I cant wait for this wait to be over . But at the same time I could wait for YOU , FOREVER ...

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I HATE WAITING BUT IF WAITING MEANS BEING ABLE TO BE WITH YOU ,
I WILL WAIT FOR YOU AS LONG AS FOREVER TO BE WITH YOU
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THE END

so thats it people
You have reached the end of this OS
do tell me your thoughts and don't forget to like and comment
and sorry if i wasted your time ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
hey annu di
how are you
woa your first os
and i am the first to comment
it was truly awesome
i loved it really
it was too good
the quotes were just awesome
i think you should write more
huggs
anni
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS Anu...It was very thoughtful...it reflected the pain n trauma of a person who waits for her lover endlessly!..👏👏...Tell me have u been waiting for someone special that u could write it so beautifully?😳

The concept was very different n a very good try..Shahi must be very happy to see this OS👏...

Keep writing more😊
Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
It was so beautiful
Thx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your os was just wonderful.
Though only one persons pov was written yet they way you portrayed the emotions the way you wrote it was fabulous.
The word "wait" you described it perfectly and explained it very well.
I can't believe this is your first os because it looks like you are a very good writer, its like you have written many things.
Loved it loads.
Beautifully written.
I want another os from you that too soon.
So do write more.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS !
The title and quote were the best part of the whole thing !
Loved it 😳
Great work ... 👏

Do write more !
Thanks For the PM !

anushruthi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: annabh

hey annu di
how are you
woa your first os
and i am the first to comment
it was truly awesome
i loved it really
it was too good
the quotes were just awesome
i think you should write more
huggs
anni


Hey Anni
I m good
I m glad you like this OS
I may write more in the near future ...

HUGS
anushruthi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Manveerangel

👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
It was so beautiful
Thx for pm


Thank You
i m glad u liked it
and your welcome


Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice OS !

The title and quote were the best part of the whole thing !
Loved it 😳
Great work ... 👏

Do write more !
Thanks For the PM !


Thank You so much Vidhi
As for Writing more ... we will see ...
But I surely will PM you if i write anything else
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
anushruthi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanah12

Your os was just wonderful.Thank You
Though only one persons pov was written yet they way you portrayed the emotions the way you wrote it was fabulous.
The word "wait" you described it perfectly and explained it very well.
I can't believe this is your first os because it looks like you are a very good writer, its like you have written many things.

This is not the first thing I have written but it certainly is my first manveer os
Loved it loads.
Beautifully written.
I want another os from you that too soon.
So do write more.
i may write more soon ...
Thanks for the pm.YOU ARE WELCOME .


Thank You for such a nice comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow really awesome!
loved the os

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