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BREAK UP another os by me guys i think some of my previous os was very heart breaking but today i want to treat all my readers by a funny os i hope you all find it funny as me sence of humour is terrific still i tried so here i present my os it starts on the day of manveer marriage in DEK but here jai comes but to appolozise read futher

BREAK UP

The entire Devgarh palace was crammed with guest and relatives and everyone seemed busy doing different works. Few were looking after the guest and few were handling the media it was the most auspicious day in the history this two kingdom finally after so many hurdles manyata and uday veer was going to tie a knot every body was happy about it except for the bride herself ,yes manyata sat on her bad in a beautiful pink wedding gaggra with heavy diamond jewels and henna decorated hands with his name on it she looked at it a wave of emotions ran in her mind she was confushed weather she loved him ,or hated him but there was a thing she was certain about she has nothing to do with Aryaan or Akash now for her he was nothing more than mr manju a waste piece of her past and nothing else just when she was drown in thoughts there was a knock in the door it was her best friend Unnati ,she came and sat beside manyata and said

UNNATI:what is the matter bhabhisa are you not happy with this marriageb?

MANYATA:i do not know unzzie i am so confushed

UNNATI;confushed about what bhabhisa oh come on you do know babhisa that dada loves you a lot although he is hell angry on you for meeting that majnu on the mehendi day he is so angry that he might murder you ...you are right babhisa give it a second thought ARE you sure you want to marry my dada

MANYATA:yes unzzie i know he is angry and now his state is like a angry charging bull but remember i am the same chawl wali who scarted the yuvraaj uday veer singh on the very first meeting so i know how to cool his anger

UNNATI:really bhabhisa tell me na who will you cool his anger

MANYATA:i do not know but i will surely think about it later for know unnati there is something else that i want to know from you

UNNATI:what is it bhabhisa?

MANYATA;unnzie do you think i mean do you think unzzie please be truthful to me do you think this color suits me

UNNATI:not at all bhabhisa but there is n back up now you have to wear this only poor you bhabhisa i tell you dada choice of dressing for a girl is horrible

MANYATA:i know even i rejected to wear it but then he gifted it to me i could not reject him

UNNATI:you could not reject him means...bhabhisa are you in love

MANYATA;that is what i am confushed about unnzie i do not know

UNNATI;ok bhabhisa i have an idea ok close your eyes and whichever guy you see first will be your love

manyata did as directed and closed her eyes

UNNATI;babhisa whom did you see?

MANYATA:i am seeing unnzie i am seeing salman khan

UNNATI;what is wrong with bhabhisa you was supposed to see dada whats wrong with your eyes...by the way is he shirtless

MANYATA:yea the scene form dabaang 2

she blushed and opened her eyes in fraction of seconds both the girls were lost in thoughts of this actor but soon manyata pulled a serious expression and asked unnati

MANYATA;unzzie do you think your dada loves me

UNNATI:He does bhabhisa you are his love ,his passion ,his ashique

MANYATA:hey ashique is going to release na'

UNNATI;yes the hero is soo cute na

MANYATA;yes i and your dada planned to go together first day and first show

just then jai raced into the home as both the girls say in chorus

"Here comes the villain of each fairy tale jai nandidni'

ust then jai raced into the home as both the girls say in chorus

"Here comes the villain of each fairy tale jai nandidni'

JAI;Oh please guys i know i am a bitch but can't we just pretend that i am so called good sister

MANYATA:let me think ...NO

JAI:fine whatever here i did not come to listen to your shit ok

UNNATI;then have you come to talk shit

JAI;guys please uday is in trouble

MANYATA;With a girl like you stalking him it is ver much predictatble that he is in trouble now say where did her go to hide from you

UNNATI:i guess it is bathroom that is his favourite place

JAI;stop you both he has been kidnapped ok

both manyata and unnati in chorus

'WHAT WHEN HOW HEY WE SPOKE TOGETHER SOME ONE IS REMEMBERING US"

with this they started counting on there fingures

JAI;JIJI STOP she said hey not hi so that will make a 2 not3

MANYATA;you are sure

JAI;i am and now we have to save uday

UNNATI;from whom as far as i believe RA One was killed by sharukh

MANYATA;she has got a point

JAI;what point we ahve to save him from manju from that akash he kidnapped uday ok

MANYATA:really he kidnapped che uday got kidnapped b him like this toh he keeps man handleling me and see he got caught by such a abla narri

JAI;so are you ready to save him

UNNATI;but there is a problem

JAI:now what

MANYATA;we do not have proper clothes for you know saving operation

JAI;then we will go shopping

all the three girls cheered in happiness and headed towards there car

HERE IN THE TEMPLE

Only jai ,akash and uday was there uday was tied to a pillar and trying to get ride of the rope while jaggat sat and akash was doing to and fro

JAGGAT:did they come?

AKASH;not yet

JAGGAT;they know na that we are here

AKASH;Of course i personally called and said them the address

JAGGAT:it is over 30 minutes and yet they did not come

AKASH:its ok we will charge an extra coke with free pizzas

you are right in above conversation they were talking about the pizza order they gave before an hour now scroll down and read futher

UDAY;YOU JERK leave me

AKASH:but we are not catching you it is the rope that is doing

JAGGAT:yes uday we are not even touching you

UDAY;Actually you both are right you foolish rope leave me or see what i do i will cut you into pieces and tie you around garbage and throw you in gutter you do not know i am a royal and i get what i want

JAGGAT:that is better by the way i do not get a thing akash you are engaged to tara then why are you still running back of manyata and capturing uday

AKASH;i am doing so because i do not know yes right i do not know but i like it you know seeing thing destroying gives me immense fun

UDAY;you physco you have no reason behind tourturing me huh

AKASH ;You are right

UDAY;well that a cool idea i will try it out on princess some day

time flew as the three girls appeared in party dress manyata went and caught akash by his collar

MANYATA:you where is my uday

UDAY;princess i am here

MANYATA:oh shut up uday let him say now he is supposed to give his dialogue shristi arya will kill you for messing her script

UDAY:sorry princess majnu continue kaar

AKASH;he is there

MANYATA:leave him i warn you leave him

AKASH;As you wish go and untie his rope i am getting late for a meeting

MANYATA:ok bye do come in our wedding

AKASH;sure

saying this akash goes away from the scene with jaggat as jaia nd unnati untie his rope and leaves manveer alone as manyata runs to uday and hugs him she say

MANYATA:i love you uday i love you a lot

UDAY:but i want a break from you i want to break up

MANYATA;but why what have i done to you

UDAY:you have not worm the wedding dress i choose for you

MANYATA:i am sorry i was wearing it but then to save you i had to change

UDAY:you changed your clothes for me? i love you so much

they both hugged each other and felt each other love forever

done

guys chappal maat marna

i hope i could convey my humour

sorry no manveer scene just an os to laugh at

an os to all the readers who almost cried during reading my sad os

wid lots of love and luck

annesha


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cherry.parul0 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh!!! Its an os...while reading the heading..i was thinking ''ab kiska break up ho gya??''
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HELLL GOOD...
I WAS ROLLING ON MY BED LAUGHING...
UDAY KIDNAP HO GAYA AUR MANYATA KIDNAPPING SE CHUDANE KELIYE SHOPPING GAYI...
LOLZZZ
JAGAT AKASH PIZZA ??
AWESUM...
UDAY TOH FULL ON PAGAL...
LOVED IT LOADS ANNESHA...
Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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ooyyee Jaldi Post kario dear..
m waiitng n mujhe pm karna
mat bhulio...😳

tab tak ke liye...


RES...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH MY GOD ANNIII WHAT IS THISSS I M ROOLING ON GROUND LAUGHINGGG THAT WAS SOOO FUNNY THE PIZZA SCENE WAS AWSSSMMM AND UDAY AND MANYATA CONVERSATION WAS PERFECT THE SALMAN KHAN SCENE WAS PERFECTTT LOVE U YARAAA
Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Ye kya tha Annesha dear😆😆

I can't supress my laughter...
I liked that Shristi Arya wala dialogue
🤣🤣🤣🤣
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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awesome OS annesha as always!!!
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Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

ohh!!! Its an os...while reading the heading..i was thinking ''ab kiska break up ho gya??''


no its an os
and i hope you like it
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Originally posted by: -Zina-

awesome OS annesha as always!!!


i am gald you likd it but i beleive you just read half of it
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coomment edited on pg 1
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