hey vibha...🤗see, this time i m way too early in giving my comment.😆
just noticed today, tht i had not given my precious comment 😆 on ur story frm,,,, well chap-7 onwards.
i m sorry but what to do yaar ??? l m really v busy nd occupied with college nd work.
newyz,,,, but m gonna amend my mistake nd
now i will give u such a long long comment tht will bore u to extreme. trust me😈😆
First of all, all the capters frm 7 to 10 were really A.W.E.S.U.M nd G.R.E.A.T .
Enjoyed reading thm to bits. I m really loving ur story alot.👏 👏
Chapter -7
it was really a very AWWW chapter.
Fr they ver first time, veer called mayta as "MANYTA" which was really very thrilling fr her, awww
loved gthe way he went to MC'D nd brought "BARBARs"😆 for manyta.
thnxx alot vibha fr accepting my request. u r truly a darling nd sweetheart. remeber, in my last comment of chap-6 i requested to show u some phusical tensions b/w manveer😳 nd in the next chap u fulfilled my commenet. thnxxx deary
i really loved the way uday went tounguetied whn he saw manyta in tht beautiful red saree.
thn comes the most favourite nd loveliest part of mine of this entire chapter.
Seeing mayta said, he called manyta as "PRINCESS" nd then Their "JUST KISS" scene,,,,,,,😳
aah so sweet nd romantic yaar.
i wonder, if ds has not had come in b/w manveer in tht very moment, could they really have actually kissed each other.
lovely chapter vivha,,,truly lovely👏
Chapter-8
Again a very mindblowing chapter.👏
i really loved all the confronatation between everyone be it manyta-ds or veer-manyta.
The way Veer confronted manyta whn he gt to knw tht she is indeed a princess was executed really well by u vibha.
Well done !!! great job.
i M glad ds showed akash his right place nd refused to lend him any prize money or whtever.
finally, manyta came to knw abt the past of veer nd hw he hs been raised.
so, now Veer had agreed to drop manyta at her place.,,,,,oh i meant palace... 😉
but ek shikayat hai tumse VIBHA.
i thought, u would show tht manyta wuld be staying at veer's place fr some more days nd teaching him his "ANGREZI"
but yahan toh asisa kuch nahi hua...so i felt a bit bad fr this
but never mind, i m still very happy... u know why ????
Because, u changed the whole way round.
I mean, now instead of manyta, Veer would be staying at manytas place😉
not bad ,,,huhn😆
Chapter- 9
This chap was asusual very nice.👍🏼
i really loved the scene whn tht cabbie driver blessed manveer whole heartedly. again,, a very AWW ish kind of scene😳 . Manveer surely are a match made in heaven😳
earlier, i thouhjt tht in this story, there is no JAY but all my hopes dashed into ground as soon a s i read the next para of this chapter.😆
so, jay nd akash had setup tht trap fr manyta to defame her in the public. Nd bechara veer to usme aise he fas gya😆
overall this chap was really very nice one.
All the three chapters were really vrey great vibha.
awesum work👏
The analysis of chapter 10 is in the post down below.
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