Missing u...Ch 1 updt on pg5

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Hey Guyz!!!!!!!!!!!!

How r u all???????????

I have decided to write a ss!!!!!!!!

I have not decided the title yet but I have wrote the prologue'''''.

Here goes the prologue:

PROLOGUE

She just looked at the sign of the magnificent Uday Niwas hotel. She glanced up at the signboard one last time and entered the bar. She just weaved and elbowed her way to the bar. She made herself comfortable near a drunken loudmouth who was keeping gulping up the beer. She banged at the counter but the barkeeper showed no sign of attention. She just shouted at the top of her voice, "Hey you how about a service?"She hadn't given the order that the waiter placed a glass of red wine in front of her. She shouted, 'Do you think Im will drink this. Give me a glass of whiskey." A drowsy but melodious tone replied, "Just drink what u get." and ordered him a glass of whiskey.

She turned to look at the melodious speaker. He was just looking a couple years older than her. He had a smirk plastered over his face and a devilish look. He had a clean shaved face with deep brown eyes. They were not just deep brown but also very but also glowing and chocolaty rich. She felt herself losing over him.

Her mind tickled and she just shrugged off the feeling and looked at her drink, "Why don't u think u drink it yourself I think u will like it."

He replied, "Well, it's just too sweet for me and I will spit it out if I even have a sip or even worse."

She just raised the wine and drank it in a gulp. She just hated red wine but she loved white wine. She thought drinking alcohol is better than water. She sniffed again, "I have heard stories drinking with strangers in taverns." "Nice joke. But there's not a ship or a ocean here." He winked. "Do you always force people to drink this thing?" She poked at the glass near her table.

"Only the ones that I take out for a dinner. Come lets go around I have reserved a table over there." He said with a smirk.

She glanced around the bar, "Well, I'm waiting for my friends, so only it they can come."

He patted her, "Don't they always." He took her arms and steered her away from the bar before she could fight him.

She just shouted, "I never agreed to come with you."

"Yes but you're curious. Those brilliant eyes of your say so." With his usual smirk on his face.

"What do you want?" asked she in a serious tone.

He smiled, "What makes you think that I want something?"

She just shrugged off then he finally spoke, "I want a favor from you."

She replied, "Yes, I knew you were unto something but what do you want me to do?"

He just took out paper from his pocket, "In this crowd I found only one sensible person and that's you so can you read it for me?"

She just kept on staring at him blankly. He had worn such neat and expensive clothes and was wearing a very rare and expensive perfume.

She in a astonished tone, "Do you think I am a fool? If you can afford these clothes and the bills of this bar then can't you learn?"

He smiled at her statement, "You're not a fool princess but you are a literate person. Just please read it for me." He handed her a piece of paper.

She unfolded the paper to read its content and said in a annoyed tone, "It's just written 'Devil' in it."

"Can you fold it back and give it to me?" he replied in a strict tone.

She folded the paper and gave it back to him in an instance.

Just then her friend arrived at the spot. She went to the doorstep where her friend was standing.

The friend, "Hey, where were you? I have been searching you all around. Who was the guy you were sitting with?" in a confused manner.

She just smiled, "No one special. He is just a stranger. He just forced me to drink a wine. He didn't even told his name. He is a kind of weird. Come now let us leave this place!"

They both left the spot and went to their respective home.

Please hit the like button if u my SS deserves it😉

Please leave your precious comments😛

As this comments will encourage to write this SS.😊

Please suggest a English title for my SS.😃


Lots of love

Bhumika (Eyecatchers)😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for the character sketch
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yooohooo m first to comment.Its tooo Gud..LUVED IT DEAR 😊 Continue soon nd if possible pm me...👏 👏 👏
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Hey dea...asum prologue...!!
d guy gotta be uday (maybe)
u write really gud...
do update soon nd pm me if possible!!
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nice prologue. waiting for the cs
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nice prolouge bhumi love it cont soonnn
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loved d prologue...👍🏼👏
do cont soon...
n plz do pm me if possible...
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Very nice prologue Bhumika. I guess the guy was Uday , ... but is he illiterate 😕??? Anyways , please start it soon; I would love to read more😳. Thanx for the PM😊.

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