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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my first OS.Guys I hope you all like it.
It is of time when first time Manyata dressed as princess. Both are alone in the room.On the other side Vijay is making J jealous.
Uday comes out of the room to check what is going on downstairs. He heard all the Vijay and J conversation.
Uday to himself: Agar Manyata aur humara ek dusre ke sath busy hone ki baat isey itna jala sakti hai to agar isney hume aur Manyata ko ek sath busy dekh liya to ye to sucide hi kar legi. Agar isney sucide ki to Manyata Yuvrani ban jayegi aur Manyata ki shadi humse ho jayegi.
Uday go back to room and tell his plan to Manyata. Firstly she denies but then she agrees.
Uday told maid to tell J that Manyata want to have some conversation with her.
Maid told this to J and J headed towards Manyata's room.
J to herself: Pata nahi ye gutter ki rani humse kya baat karna chahti hai.Ho sakta hai ye apne chawl vapis ja rahi ho aur humse maafi maang rahi ho.
When she reached her room then she saw that door is shut and sounds of some moans and cries are coming out.
J to herself: Kahi Vijay Bhai sach to nahi keh rahe the kahi ye such me to ek dusre me busy nahi hai.
Then she take her ear near the door and hear the voices.
" More faster Uday , I need more"
" Manyata , Really you give me a lot of pleasure "
" Its our 9th time Uday but every time I feel that this is my first time."
" Manyata , How much lie we spoke to enjoy each other"
" Thank to Akash , agar uske liye main drama nahi karti to hum kabhi ek dusre ko feel karte"
J: Vijay Bhai , Where are you?
Manyata: Dekh Uday Gayi Jay Ghamandini apne Vijay Dinanath Chauhan ko bulane, Ab aayega asli mazaa.
After sometime, Manveer heard a footsteps , they again started to do their job. Uday is on top of Manyata.
They hear that door is open and they know who are standing on the door but everything is not like we think.
DS: Manyata Uday ye aap kya kar rahe hai
Manveer are dumbstruck. It is not what they expect.
M: Mataji,maa,Maharaj aap log yahan
Uday quickly get up from the bed and try to explain.
Uday: Dadi shaeb wo...
DS: Hume kuch nahi sun na Maharaj Giriraj hum Uday aur Manyata ki shadi ki aaj announcement karne ja rahe hai aur aap chinta mat kijiye Yuvrani Manyata banegi.
All go outside for announcement of their marriage.
Uday is getting dressed and then Manyata say
M: Uday mujhe tere bacche ki maa ban na hai.
Uday smirks and then lights off.

After 6 monthes

Aakash is in jail and remembering his Moniya. Then he see Uday is heading towards his cell.
A: Udayveer ke bacche . Sale Kamine kahan hai meri Moniya aur kya kiya tune uske sath
UV:Tum sach me jan na chahte ho hum ne uske sat kya kiya
A: Haan kaha hai meri Moniya
UV: Manyata
Then he see a lady in saree. She is looking like his Moniya. Then he saw the lady is none other than Moniya.
His first gaze fall on her forhead which has sindoor than his neck which has mangalsutra and in the end he see her belly which is bulged out. He doesn't take a minute to understand that it is a baby bump.
A: Udayveer ke bacche tune meri Moniya ka kya hal kiya hai , tuney meri masum si Moniya ko maa bana diya.
UV: Wo humari biwi hai to usi ko hum maa banaenge.
Akash touch Manyata' baby bump at which Manyata feel sudden harsh kick in her womb that make her scream.
M: Akash hath hatao apna mere par se
UV: Dekh Udayveer tere baccha tujh se jyada mujh se pyar karta hai kyonki Moniya mujh se pyar karti hai
M: Abey O Pagal sarfire ye kick tujhe marne ke liye tha kyonki halkat vede ke bacche bhi tujh se nafrat karte hai.
A: Bacche matlab kya
UV: Matlab ye ek nahi do do hai
A: Man gaye tujhe Udayveer tu to asli mard nikla, tune to ek hi jhatke me Moniya ko do bacchon ki maa bana diya.
M: Or kya sarfire Aakash ab main jaun agar teri mujh se milne ki iccha puri ho gayi ho
UV: Manyata is se puchne ki kya zaroorat hai yahan se chalo.
Manveer come out of jail and then they sit in the car.
UV: Princess , Now tell me who is real man?
M: Of course you.
Then Manyata feels a sweet kick.
M: See your children are also agree with me.
Uday leans forward to kiss her belly and then her soft lips.
That's end
I know it is worst topic by me. Actually Its my dream and I just do some changes to make it an OS.
Your all abuses are welcomed here.
Sanya😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yupp!! i am the first to comment!😛
what an OS sanya!! i really liked it!😉
ManVeer in love manking jay jealous was soo good!😃
and Manyata telling uday that she wants his child!😳
and the jail scene what a kick😆 2 kids!
loved all the parts!
it was awesome, fantastic, mind blowing and much much more!👏
LOVED IT!!😳
thankX for the PM!😊
Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was so good ohhh i loved it it was hillarious me toh has has ki pagal hogay u
very good i like akash manytas and udats convo and j and uday manytas also
lovely keep on writing this type of os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg haha🤣Hilarious Sanya🤣U crack me up🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelina6

it was so good ohhh i loved it it was hillarious me toh has has ki pagal hogay u
very good i like akash manytas and udats convo and j and uday manytas also
lovely keep on writing this type of os


Thanks Dear, I don't think that it is gud. But if u like it, I will write more os like this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

Omg haha🤣Hilarious Sanya🤣U crack me up🤣🤣


Hey thanx , it means it is funny
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: san.gar


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Hey thanx , it means it is funny


Yupp it is🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os
😆😆
well done ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pehale mujhe has lene do fir comment karti hu🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
OMG...sanya that was hillarious...OS
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣majnu ki halat dekhne layak thi...i was laughing like hell...OMG...superb yaar thanx for PM. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsssmmm sanya yar sixxer tha awsssmmm cant stop laughinggg

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