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Originally posted by: candy08

VERY VERY NICE AND DIFFERENT CONCEPT PAYEL JI AAP NE DIL JEET LIYA KHUSHI HUI KAY FORUM PAR ABHI BHI ASE WRITTER HAI JO BOLD AUR SEX JESI CHEEZ KAY ILAWA BHI BHOT ACHA LIKH RAHE HAI I LOVE THIS JUST FEEL GOOD TO READ IT PLEASE WRITE MORE👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: panchaali

Candy I will take it as a special complement...

I hesitated before writng it...coz its a fairytale and a simple love story
i love fairy tales and simple love storys ye buri nahi hoti i think every body loves to read that kind of stories and do,t be hesitate be confident you are doing good job👏😊

Originally posted by: candy08

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Payel 😊. This update was such a pleasant surprise.

It was very interesting and well -written. Jainandini's messenger was quite hillarious😆. A very entertaining character indeed. Varun trying was decipher the love-letter was superb ... I really enjoyed that scene. The king is pressurising his son to marry 😡 ... I really hope that marriage doesn't take place.

Loved the update Dear,

... do continue soon,

thanks for the PM 🤗 .

Originally posted by: pia.raha

oo woow,i likee varuuun!!!!!!!!😊😊 dono hot ladkee,,haaye update to suprb hona hi thaa!!!!! ha ha ha handwrtng ki kya haalat kar diya sab ka,dat was hilariouss!!!!! thaank god uday is actually nt intrsted in j, waitng for manveer meet!!!!!!!😊😊😊