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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: safia25

Hey guys unfortunately i can't access my lappy nd so can't update.. I m sorry.. I trying.. Hope for the best...


so aaj update nahi hoga😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyguys, me Back..As i said on time..😉
Hope this time i didn't disappoint you...
Well before a hour ago my damn Lappy wasn't accessing to IF..it sometime happens, don't know why but glad that it works and i m updating on TIME...😃
so, alot of my gittar pittar.. Let read this Chappy.. And here i m presenting Chapter 4...😳
Hope you will like it...

_____Chapter 14_____


I think its the time to return back to India ; to Devgardh palace.. Believe me , everything will be fine soon.. Once we get back to india, Ds will make everything perfect..believe me jiji...recommended Jai

But Jai if we return to india then Jaigardh will definitely come to know about Priyam's birth...Said Manyata

And all i want is that Uday come to know about his own daughter.. About Priyam

What?? Are u out of ur mind jai??

No , u r out of your mind jiji.. C'mon u can't take Priyam apart from Uday.. After all she is his daughter too..

But what devotion did uday pay on Priyam?? Hawn?? When Priyam had born , was he there?? Was he there to feel the first baby punch in my tummy, when his own daughter was he there?? Was he there yesterday when his daughter was in I.C.U?? And is he here when his so call own DAUGHTER is suffering from such a badly disease.. No!! He neither was nor is here with his daughter.. Only Priyam's mother is her with her..Asked Manyata...

He wasn't there because u didn't informed him about Priyam's birth and he isn't now because still u haven't inform him...

No!! I tried my best to tell him but he denied to even listen me once..

Did u tried again?? Jiji somewhere somehow its your mistake too.. Admit it..

No!! How can u think so ridiculous jai?? I tried till i gave birth to Priyam.. But at last Ds forbid me..

Yeah thats what u done wrong.. Well it was the mistake of all of us.. But on one path u done right thing and thats u care of your respect and didn't go back to that creep man.. Well now think , what u have to do next carefully?? And this time think for Priyam rather than for yourself.. Please!! Your life has been crushed but now don't let happen to this little life ; the same..😭

Jai , right now i m on that way which goes to two different paths and i m confuse at selecting only one of them..

Jiji, u spent your childhood without the love and support of both parents.. Thought u had a support of father in the face of Murari Lal but u hadn't the love of mother.. How had u felt for sixteen years without the love of mother?? In the same way, how would Priyam feel without the love of her father when even he is alive.. Wouldn't she ask u in future that why u didn't let her father know about her atleast once.. In all ways, u would e blamed jiji, no doubt how much u take care of her, give love to her, but in last i m damn sure that this will happen..

But jai, what if Priyam never ever come to know about his father?? We can lie to her..

How u felt when that Murari lied u about your family??

Yeah!! You are right.. But why always i have to sacrifice.. If uday came to know about his daughter then he would definitely take my life ,my priyam away from me.. And u know i can't live without her!!

Jiji, Priyam is suffering from Stomach cancer, we don't know that for how much time that little life could survive.. So , how much time she can survive , make her life the worthiest one rather than the worst one.. Please!!

Jai ,its hard ; i can't face the same person again who destroyed my whole life.. I can't jai!! I can't !!

Jiji mom taught us once something.. Remember?? That : a man can break down a woman temporarily but a REAL woman pick up the broken pieces, rebuild herself and come back STRONGER than ever.. And being a mother too, u have to be strong enough to fight with this world to make your baby's life worthy.. In last i just wanna say that please think once for that little baby's happiness..

Thanks jai.. But i need time please.!!
Take as much as you want Jiji.. But think for her first than for yourself..

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The doctors discharged Priyam but also send a health team with her..

Manyata beta , u don't worry.. Everything will be fine soon.. I think u should return back to India.. How much years Priyam is, she spend those plentiful days in Devgardh, and this is my wish.. Hope u wouldn't deny..

But dadi sahab, if we return to india then Jaigardh family would came to be known of priyam's existence..

Beta, i think now its time to tell uday about his daughter..
But dadi sahab...

Beta, believe me.. Its the right time.. Now the next decision is in your hands..

Yeah.. Dadi sahab i need time.. Bye..

Bye bete..

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Manyata made Priyam fell asleep.. After that she got into an immense deep thoughts.. She was thinking about of what Ds and Jai said..

"It doesn't take too long to change in TIME; and neither to FORTUNE.Things are now changed than before; but for me i'm changed than before.I know that i'm doing wrong to her and far as far to her future also.even i know that her FUTURE is not secure bucause after sometime she would be no more.As much as she could survive ,i wouldn't reveal anything about him to her. and as her mother i don't want to make her remaining life; a disaster."

Being in Canada is a safe and sound place for me and her and even he wouldn't know about us...

But what if in future Priyam blames me for separating her from her father.. No!! What father?? Which father ?? He didn't ever performed any duty of being a father!!

A reflection of her appeared behind her, she turn to face her own reflection..
The reflection said:
u are wrong here manayata.. Thought her father didn't devote anything, but the reason is that he is still unaware of his daughter .. He is her BIOLOGICAL father manyata.. And you can't deny it.. This is the truth manyata and you have to face it.. He has as much rights on Priyam as you have.. Understand manyata!! U can't deny it.. Priyam will blame you in the future for sure.. Don't do this manyata.. You can't do this..

Manyata put her hands on her ears in attempt to not to listen her reflection.. Stop it!! I said stop it.. Just stop it..

The reflection disappeared but because of manyata's thunder voices , it disturbed priyam's deep sleep.. And she woke up..

The baby cried and manyata ran and took her in her arms, she sits on bed and began to talk to Priyam..

Baby!! I m sorry, i waked you up from your pretty well sleep.. But you know baby, how much you are suffering from this disease, your mommy is also suffering from all the worries.. But believe me baby, everything will be fine soon.. I wouldn't let you go anywhere.. Till than i m alive, nothing will happen to you..

The baby continue to cry,

We will return back to India, to your Father.. We will baby , we will.. Its mama's promise..!!

Eventually the baby stopped sobbing which was nothing than a biggest shock to Manyata..
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Jai!!

Yeah Jiji.. Please come in..

Manyata entered in Jai's room..

Jai, i have decide something..

I hope it would be postive..

Jai, i want to return back to India along with Priyam.. Not because i have become weak but because i don't want Priyam to have her life like mine's one.. As being a mother i wanna fill all happiness of the world in my baby's life.. And if Uday grab priyam away from, i m ready for that..

I want my daughter to have all the privileges which she deserve.. As far as i know is that Priyam has a severe disease, it is only hoped that she may survive from this disease.. only i want is, Priyam get all the love and happiness of both the parents... and for Priyam i'm ready to sacrifice..

I'm happy with your this decision, and hope that it give benefit to Priyam...and believe me even Priyam would not live without you so i don't think that Uday will go against Priyam's will...

yeah..i hope so..

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In the morning,

You know na Jai that today is our flight to INDIA..

Yeah, i know but isn't it so soon??

naah..!! its already too late, we don't know how much that little life can survive..so its better time to take this decision..

hmmm...yeah!! okay then i will inform it to Jagat..

is he coming??

ohh!! yeah i said him to take care of here, as Mr. singhania's project is this week..but he is coming..how much i m forgetting things these days naw..

its because you are taking so much stress...

Okay..leave this all.. its getting late.. let's go.

Aren't you taking babysitter along with us..jagat asked..

Naah!! i wanna take care of Priyam myself thesedays how much time she is with us..

Jiji please, don't do disappointing talks..nothing will happen to Priyam and its good that you wanna spend some time with Priyam..

Lets go..

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The flight from Canada to back to India was of quite long which gave Manyata alot of time to think once more..

Once they reach Mumbai Airport Manyata denied to not to let media known of their come-back and decided to visit UDAY NIVAS mansion first, before making her first step in DEVGARDH Mahal...

Jiji, is it right time to go first to Uday Nivas before addressing at Mahal and thats too without asking to DS...

Its the right time jai...Jagat concluded..

Manyata passes a week smile..

Jai I want you to make every and each channel media to call them at Uday Nivas but make sure they reach after me...

what?? Jiji are you out of your mind?? till yesterday you were saying that Media shouldn't be aware of Priyam's existence...

Jai, when Uday is going to be known of the truth than why not the whole world??

This is the perfect time to let the world know about the next heir of DEVGARDH RIYASAT...

Thats like the real rajwada!! jagat concluded..

i think manyata i m seeing u first time in a Rajwada side.. really how much a mother strong than a women...jagat said gladly..

really Jiji, God will give you reward for this..said Jai..

and i hope the reward would be priyam's life..hope she get her life back...Manyata said..

Zaroor Jiji..zaroor hoga..we all are with you and Priyam..said jai.

This is the right time..okay ladies i m leaving and will see you at Uday Nivas..said Jagat..

Let tell the whole world about you Baby..Manyata announced to little priyam...

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So guys, here you the end of Chapter 14... i hope u like it.. and if u didn't then also press LIKE button and leave your comments...
Remember, the more Likes and comments , the more fast you will get the next update..😳
LOVE,
😊😊😊SAFIA😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved da chappy manyata change in character is amazing liked jai. poor priyam hopes she gets well asap thx for pm update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really liked it can't wait for next vhappy
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was just awesome. Loved it very much:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annesha18

loved da chappy manyata change in character is amazing liked jai. poor priyam hopes she gets well asap thx for pm update asap


Thanks dear..😃
Yeah Manyata had to change for Priyam..
She will get well soon...will update soon..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

i really liked it can't wait for next vhappy

Thanks for liking it...😃 well u have to wait for the next update a bit..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome chappy Safia...
hope man veer resolve their problems soon...
may the little angel survive...
felt bad for her...
but still awesomely written
loved it loads
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hai safia...😊

chappy was beautifully writtern.👏
loved it.😃

manyata is comming back to india
and going to reveal d existence
of yuvrani priyam to whole world.

loved dis new face of manyata.she
is a true rajwade.she is sacrificing
her selfrespect for her daughter.i
admire dis manyata.

loved j very much.so is changed.

i hope manveer will sort out their
misunderstandings soon.

i had a complaint.there was no uday

in dis chappy.plz add more manveer

scenes in next chappy.


all in chappy was fabulose👏.cant
wait.continue soon.

😃
Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
can't wait until uday and manyata meet

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