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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
awesome update pari! u rock!
i loved it to the core and it was so damn funny!
i really liked the scene when ManVeer fall on the chair i was totally in ManVeer fantasy! to to gud just amazing plz plz do update tomorrow aww poor manyata uday nay bechari ka mazak bna dia! please make it a bit more romantic shomantic! u know what i mean! *winks* thanks for the pm do update tomorrow!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
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awwwieee loveeely updaaatteee 😃 😃 😃
bicharaaa autooo wala 😛 😛 😃
keep it up darling 👍🏼
love u muaaah hugzzz ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Again hilarious update...I like the sweet moment of ManVeer you add in office and the scene where Riksha driver come and clear misunderstanding it was awazing...Jay Jagat scene was also cute...you r doing fab job... Waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Fabulous chapter Pari
beautifully written
bechara auto wala M ki purse lotane aaya tha
Manveer office scenes were super cute
great Precap
UV manao apni M ko 😆
cont soon
thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Maanveer ss:ajnaabi ehsaass
part-8...
Maneger'sir cnfrence..
Uday'arey kal hogi cnfrnce,leave me alone...
Sb chale jate h.,
uday apna sir pkad k beith jata h'arey main kya
kru?keise mnau ab...yar kitni gandi lgti h rote
huye...uff.itni gandi to meri mom bi ni lgti...
Uske cabin me jata hu,khin ghr to ni bhbg gai,oh ni
mujhe mnana pdega...
Wo bhaagta h manyata k cabin ki trf...
Jagat 'yar ye glt kiya,aise ni krna chahiye uske pure
kapde gile ho gye the,bt yar hot lg ri thi...i think sry
bolna chahiye...
Manyata headdown krke ro ri h,uday phuchta h...
Manyata..
Manyata apna sir uthati h,uske face pe abi bi wo
kaala daag lga hua h..
'aap kyn aaye h?jaiye,tassli mil gai sb meri bewkufi
pe hs rhe the infact main khud hs ri thi..
Uday feel guilt'i m sry,mujhe kya pta tha ki tum yhi
use krogi..
Manyata apne purse me se me new hanky nikalti
h'main nya leke aai thi,pr cnfrence rum me jaldi
jana tha to maine..wo rone lgti h..
Main sbke saamne ab keise jaugi..sb hsege..
Uday uske pas jata h'plz tum royo mt main sbko
daat dunga koi ni hsega..
Manyata'ye mera cabin h or aap yha se
jaiye...mujhe akela chod dijiye,aapko jo krna tha
kr liya,ab jaiye...
Uday'ni plz tum chup ho jao.
Manyata'apko kya farq pdta h,main roti rhu ya
chup rhu...
Mera face kaala krdiya aapne muh kaala krne ka
mtlb smjhte h aap...wo wall ki side muh krke rone
lgti h...
Uday uska new hanky uthata h nd use geela(wet)
krke manyata k pas aata h'manyata meri trf
dekho..
Manyata cryng'sir bp jaiye,meri mjburi h ye sb
shna kyki maim apki trh paiso wali ni hu...
Uday uske shoulder se pkad k apni trf krta
h,manyata apna face chupane jati h tbi uday uska
hath pkad leta h,nd wo wet hanky se uska face
wipe krne lgta h...
Manyata inocently use dekhti h nd wo apne hath
niche krle leti h or dhire-2 wall se touch ho jati h..
Uday uska face clean krta h,or manyata jeise-2
piche hoti h or uday aage hota both r vry closed
each other...
Both in eyecntct,uday uska face clean krta
h,manyata use dekhti h...
Uday'main janbujh k ni kiya,i m sry..
Manyata cntinueos look hm...
Uday'i m sry...
Wo uska face clean krte-2 uske close aajata
h,manyata dar k apne hath ko wall se touch krleti
h...
Uday use cutely dekhta h,both in romentic
eyecntct...
Manyata sudden wo apna face side krleti h...
Uday bi yha wha dekh k piche ho jata h'wo chahra
saaf ho gya...
Manyata'ha to ye main bi kr skti thi,aapke 7th kbi
aisa ni hua na isliye aapko...,
uday uska hath pkadta h or use bahar leke jata h
tbi uski chunni tble me fas jati h or fat jati h...
Manyata'hawww...meri ek hi din me muh kaala
krdiya meri chuni bi...wo phr rone lgti h...
Uday'arey yar ye ho kya rha h?i m sry wo main..
Manyata'aap jao,kbi achanak kuch krte ho kbi kuch
krte ho..
Uday phr manyata ko bahar leke jata h hath pkad k
uska...
Or bahar saara employes k saamne use khada krta
h..
Sb employes uday manyata ko dekhne lgte h...
Jagat jay k cabin me jata h,pr jay ne andar se lock
kiya h'jay tum andar ho...
Jay andar so ri thi..
Jagat again bolta h'jay tum andar ho..jay.
Jay dar k khadi hoti h'kaun?
Jagat'jay tum andar ho?
Jay'pta ni kha se malik h is cmpany ka ye'sir aap
puch rhe h ya bta rhe h..
Jagat'bat to shi kh ri h...r u al ryt na..
Jay door kholti h'yes sir i m fyn,sir aapka court..
Jagat'ah,thanku..wo so..ni kuch ni,main apna court
lene aaya tha...
Wo bolke chala jata h..
Jay'pagal,sory bol ni skta,bdla to jrur lungi..
Manyata uday ko dekhti h or udy usko..
'koi manyata pe ni hsega,iske k sath jo hua wo
meri glti h,us hanky me oil maine hi lgaya tha,or
ye chuni pe meri wjh se fatti h..
Manyata'ni wo..
Uday'ek min. Meri bat puri ni hui h'or jisko
manyata ka mjak bnana h wo ye ofice se chala
jaye abi...
Uday use dekhta h wid smile nd manyata ko smjh
ni aa rha h kya react kre...
Uday'i m sry,mujhe tumhein hurt krne ka koi
iraada ni tha,bt maine apni glti maan li ab koi ni
hsega tumpe,nd yes ek bat or rote huye bdi gandi
lgti ho tum so don't cry...wo bolke chala jata h...
Manyata use dekhti rhti h..
Wo phr muskurate huye cabin me chali jati h...
Maneger callng br'hello sir..
Br'haan anuraj boliye..
Maneger'br ko ofice ki bat btata h..
Br'kmaal h,uday ne sry bola or glti bi kabool
ki...wo to kbi aisa ni tha..
Maneger'sir wo sudhar rhe h.
Br'wht u mean sudhar rhe h.?wo sudhara hua
h...or jagat ki jo 2din se deal chal ri h uska kya?
Maneger'ha sir,wo hmare haq me h deal..
Br hapy'vry gud,yaani jagat kam pe dhayan de rha
h pr uday ki trf se hme ko khaber sunne ko ni
mili...
Khair abi 3din baaki h intzar krte h...maneger g
aise hi ofice ki news dete rhiye..
Maneger'g sir.
Cal cut...
Br'manyata uday ko ek aacha insan bnadegi...
Maya'mera uday aacha insan h,wo ldki use fsane ki
koshish kr rhi hogi.
Br'ni,manyata aisi bachi ni h...
Uday or usme ek simlarity h or ye ki dono ko
chalange psnd h..
Maya'jyada sochne ki jrurt ni h,seacretry h use whi
rhne dijiye..
Br'aap to bs aap h,hm to uday k liye weise hi...
Maya'khabrdar,mere uday jagat k liye meri pasnd
ki ldkiya ayegi..
Br'g jrur...


Jagat apne cabin me se jay ko phone krta h.
Jay'hello,sir..
Jagat'i m sry jay wo paani ni girana chahiye tha
mujhe...
Jay shockd'its its ok sir...
Jagat phone rkh deta h'oh god sry bolne pe itna
dar,itna to i love u bolne pe bi ni lgta...
Jay'waah,sry bol diya...
Uday in cabin'ye mujhe kya ho gya,main kb se sry
chup krana apni glti sudharne lga...
Bhagwan jaldi 10din pure kro,wrna tera bnaya hua
uay bdal jayega...
Precap-manyata fight wid maya road k bich me...
Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
awsomeee...update pari
?keise mnau ab...yar kitni gandi lgti h rote
huye...uff.itni gandi to meri mom bi ni lgti...🤣🤣🤣
awwwiii...manveer scene was awsomeee...
update soon.
Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Awsome update meri jaan 👏 👏 👏
Loved it to d core❤️
manveer scenes were fantabulous ⭐️
Uday ne sorry bola 😲 Ye kya ho rha hai 😉
jagat & jeh scene ws supa cute😛 I luv u bolne pe kya hoga 🤣
precap 😆
Gr8 job 👍🏼
LUV UH Kamini🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
ayee gazab!!!!!!!!kya update tha...super duper hit...⭐️...
nd precap...mindblowing..
hope for the best..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww such sweet update...Uday's dialogues was awesome...Uday n Jagat who never apologised to anyone today they said sorry and that too in cute way so i like it...Precap is not nice as Maya already doesnt like Manyata and now this fight ab to bhagwan he malik hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Maanveer ss:ajnaabi ehsaass
part-9...
Jay'are rh rh k akal thikane aati h mere sir ki,uff
kheir jo bi ho sry to bola usne...
Manyata'arey manyata ye kya kiya sir ko unke
employes k saamne beizti krdi...gandi bat...
Jagat'had h,glti krke sry bolne ki to aadat thi hi ni
meri,pr guse me kiya bi tojyada tha,to abi bi puri
trh sukhi ni thi...
Wo bus me ghr jayegi ni ni aaj bi main hi chod
deta hu...
Uday'oh god,ye kya ho gya?main boss
hu,or...maine jb sry bola tb wo hsi ni rply ni
diya,wo mujhse abi bi naaraj h kya??
Wo bhaagta h,uske cabin me wo ni h..
'maneger g,manyata kha h?
Maneger'wo to abi bahr gai h...
Uday'ok,wo bhaagta h,or bahar jake apni car me
beith jata h or manyata ka wait krne lgta h...
Jay apni shrt thik krte krte bahar nikalti h..
Nisha(one employe)'ofice me sote ni h jb jagat sir
jeise handsum saamne ho..
Jay fake smile'jb unse jyada sudar hu to mujhe
unhe dekhne ki jrurt ni h,jo sundr ni h na whi us
fatitur ko dekhte h..smjh gai ya abi..
Nisha attitude me chali jati h...
Jay'bat krti h,chalne ki abc ni malum mujhe sikha ri
h...wo saamne dekhti h jagat aa rha hota h..
'ye wapis kyn aa rhe h?court to wapas krdiya h..
Jagat uske saamne aake khada ho jata h,jay smile..
Jay'sir wapis kyn aa gye?
Jagat'mtlb,ye mera ofice h jitne bar aau jitni bar jau
tumhein kya?
Jay'ha to aap rukiye main chalti hu...
Jagat'ek min wo main...
Jagat'jay wo chalo main tumko ghr ghr chod deta
hu...
Jay'ni sir main chali jaugi..
Jagat'soch lo,abi puri trh sukhi ni hu bus me jana
agar thik rhega to chali jao...
Jay'ha bat to ye bi shi kh rhe h,thik h sir
chaliye..mujhe kya mujhe to fayeda hi hoga..
Jagat'ek min.fayeda kaun sa fayeda?
Jay'wo kuch ni sir chaliye na...
Manyata aati h apni chuni ko sambhalte huye..uday
use dekhta h..
Manyata smile krte huye aati h,or uday apni car me
se use smile krte huye dekhta h...
Uday blush krta h'guse me drawni or rote huye
gandi lgti h bt smile me to awosum lgti h...
Manyata aati h wo uday ko ni dekhti wo aage jane
lgti h..
Uday'oh,wo car se utrta h,o manyata..
Manyata pichd mudke dekhti h'sir aap..
Uday'wo wo chalo sham ho gai h main ghr chod
deta hu...
Manyata'ni sir main hmesha isi tym pe jati hu..
Uday'ni wo actualy mujhe lga shayed tum abi bi
naaraj ho to..
Manyata smile'ni sir its ok,aapne sb k saamne jo
kiya wo kaafi tha...thanku...
Uday'phr bi agar thik samjho to main aaj bi
40rs.bchana chahta hu...
Wo jake car me beith jata h...
Manyata bi kuch sochti h nd wo bi beith jati h...
Manyata'socha 40rs.bcha hi lu,bs hanky purse me
h...
Both laugh...
Uday manyta trafic me ruke h,tbi ek uncle aunty ko
apni goad me utha k le ja rhe h tarfic par krwa rhe
h...
Uday'ye aadmi pagl h kya?aise kyn is aurat ko
goad me utha k ld ja rha h..
Manyata'arey ye kaun sa tarika h bolne ka,dikh ni
rha aapko un aunty k pair se khun nikal rha h,or
uncle jaldi me h..or kya aadmi aurat lga rkha h,wo
pati ptni h..
Uday'ok ok,itna gusa kyn?tumhein keise pta pti ptni
h?
Manyata smile'ek budhe uncle kisi or ko to bchane
k liye apne aap ko ni thakayege,itni jaldi ni krege,koi
apno k liye hi khud k jeene ka tarika bdal dete h...
Uday'kamaal h,na jan na phchaan avi hi stry
bnadi..
Manyata'wht u mean stry bna di?ye dono ekduse
se bhoot pyar krte h tbi to uncle ne..
Uday'wait a min.oh plz ye pyar wayar mujhe
smjh ni aata,sb bkwas faltu ki cheez h..
Manyata'hmm..apni apni soch h.
Uday'yaani pyar pe tumhein bharosa h.
Manyata'ha bilkul,pyar to bhoot khubsurat hota h,
uday use dekhta h'jeise..
Manyata'jeiset pyar agar sucha h to apne parter ki
ek muskuraht kaafi h,wrna to pura din bekaar,kho
to wo kuch bi ni,pr agar wo ni to zindgi ni..
Uday drivng kr rha h nd use cutely continuos dekh
rha h..
'or bolo..
Manyata'or sir,pyar aa,aa sir saamne dekhiye.
Uday dekhta h saamne cyclewala aa rha hota
h,uday apni car dusri trf mod deta h...
Manyata'kya sir?40rs.bchane k chaker me 40000
lgwaoge kya?
Uday'cntinuos boli ja ri ho wo dikhai ni deta
tumhein..ab chup chap beithi rho..
Manyata'sir mujhe aaj isi mall me jana h,meri
aunty mera wait kr ri h..aap jaiye main aunty k
sath chali jaugi...
Wo jane lgti h'weise sir ek bat bolni h,pyar pe
aapko yakeen ni phr bi pyar ki baatoin me kho
gye..mtlb khin na khin pyar aapko bi pasnd h...by
sir..
Wo chali jati h...
Uday'ye ldki pyar jeisi baatoin pe bi yakeen
kradegi...
Manyata mall me jati h'aunty kitni saariya leli..
Komal'arey 2hi li h,or sb mehngi h..
Manyata'arey wah aunty ye orange wali saari lelo
kitni pyari h..
Komal'beta ye mehngi h..
Maya whi khadi hoti h apni maid k sath,wo hsti h.
Manyata'isme hsne ki kya bat h,aunty aap lijiye
saari main payment krti hu..
Komal'beta phle rate to dekh lo.
Manyata'of oh,srf 35,000 ki to h..kya?itni costly..
Maya'ha to le ri ho tum ye saari..
Komal'g ni aap lelijiye..
Maya attitude smile krti h..
Komal manyata ka hath pkad k lejane lgti h.
Maya'pta ni keise-2 log aa jate h,apni aukat bi ni
dekhte...
Manyata'o hello,aap apni aukat dekhiye phle khne
ko hi amir h aap phr aadhe kapde phne h,blouse k
aadhe
Kapde to gayeb hi h,or kya aukat aukat lga rkha h,aap khud kharid k dikhaiye ye saari..
Maya guse me'ye saari pack kr dijiye..
Shopkeeper'g,mam..
Manyata'kya g mam?paise to lo..
S.k'man,in man ne hmeshat 1lakh se jyada ki shoping ki h,to inse paise maangne ki aukat hmari ni h...
Maya'sun liya,tum jitni bholi dikhti ho utni ho ni,kheir hm tumhein ye saari khairat me deti hu rkh lo..
Wo manyata ko saari deke jane lgti h,tbi manyata uska hath pkdti h'ye pkdiye apni saari,itne paise hote huye bi agar ghamand ho to use amiri ni khte...
Aap rkhiye mahngi saari hm apne aukat k hisab se kharid lenge...
Wo bolke chali jati h.
Maya guseme'bttmeez,itna bda mall h ye or yha itne chote log...,
continuos
pari

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