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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey hi Pari...
I am very happy to see your new FF and starting is awesome...Character sketch is good and first chapter was nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MANVEER SS:
AjNaBeE EhSaAs..
Part 2

Jay'manyata akash sir mjak kr rhe the na?
Manyata'kis baare me..
Jay'wo ldka akash sir ka chota bhai..
Manyata'arey wo loafer lg rha tha,koi bhai wai ni tha,agar bhai hota to hmein saabashi kyn milti?
Jay'ha ye bat to h..
Arey tujhe pta h aaj mujhe bi ek fatiture mila tha,maine uski akal thikane lga di...

Manyata'arey frnd bi to meri h.
Jay'nly frnd ni bst bst frnd.
Manyata'ha ni to.
Both laugh..

Uday'jagat bhai,agar apni beizti ka bdala lena ho kisi se to keise lu?
Jagat'ldki h ya ladka..
Uday'ldki.
Jagat'tb to bhoot raste h...
Uday'or agar ldka hota to.
Jagat'tb ek hi rasta tha.
Uday'kya?
Whi andhare me lejake marna..
Jagat uday laugh..
Uday'pr such bhai,jis ldki se aaj kha suni hui wo thi bhoot alag,
Jagat'bat wo h na,maine kisi ko btaya ni pr tujhe btata hu,mujhe bi ofice me ek ldki mili thi bahar bttmeezi kr ri thi..
Uday'wo bttmeezi kr ri thi..
Kmal h.
Jagat'mtlb maine km bttmeezi ki,jyada to usne ki.
Uday'jb se..

Akash'jb se tumhari maine tumhare takker ki ldki ki bat ki h tb se duniya me taker ki ldkiya aagai..
Uday'yes bhaiya main bi yhi soch ri thi..
Jagat'kya bhaiya?ab taang mt khincho...
Tara cum'bhai hm to taang khichege,phle btaiye jis-2 ldki se takker hui wo dekhne me keisi thi..

Jagat exicted'bhabhi ye hua mtlb ka swal thi to bhoot item..

Akash'chote tu bta.
Uday'weise mujhse to smart koi ni,pr bhabhi bttmeez ldkiya hoti hi smart h..
Tara'aacha wo uday k kan pkdti h'mtlb main bi btt...
Uday'aap sundar thodi ho aap to cute ho..
Akash'weise Remand aachi lgi..
Uday'bhabhi..
Tara'bs kro na..
Jagat'bhaiya aap ne us ldki ko btaya to hoga na ki chote aapka chota bhai h.,
Akash'btaya to tha bt wo mjak me legai hogi,jb tk such saamne na ho tb tk trust hi ni krti..
Uday'mtlb?
Mujhe mr.uday sahgal brijraj sahgal k bete ko apni phchan krani pdegi.
Tara'aisa thodi hota h..
Ni chote g phchaan mt kraiye,chodiye.
Uday'ni bhabhi phchaan to krani pdegi wrna kal phr dhake deke bahar nikalegi..
All laugh.
Akash'to jaiye btaiye aap kaun h?
Qki hm to kh kh k mar jayege lekin wo manegi ni..
Uday smile...

Manyata'aunty weise u r ryt jo bi ho bechare ko daatna ni chahiye tha...

Jay'arey jo mujhse takraya tha,wo to paiso ki dhosh dikha rha tha,maine to tb daata...
Manyata'lekin wo pyar se bolne pr bahar ni ja rha tha isliye maine suna diya.
Ha ni to.
Komal'kbi socha h,agar wo chota bhai nikal to
Jay'to kya nai naukri dhund lenge...
Manyata'ha aunty aap avi hi tnsn le rhe ho.
Mujhe kuch ni krega wo.
Gr'ary ha ye manyata jis din chup rhe na bole us din smjh lena koi bat to jrur h...
Manyata'wo din kbi ni ayega...
Uncle.
Love u both.
Gud nyt.
Jay'gud nyt tc...

In nxt mrng...
Uday sbse phle taiyar hoke,sbse phle hall me phuch gya...
Br newspaper pdhte-2 aata h uday ko dekh k shockd..
Br'vry gud,i m impress,kha jane k liye ready huye h chote sahaab...

Akash'hy dad meri ticket aagai..
Wow,chote ful 2 ready.
Maya.'ek ldki ki daat ka itna jyada farq pda...
All lookd uday.
Uday fursted'bs ho gya na,main aaj ofice use hi sunane ja rha hu..
Tara'aacha,aaj
uday 'ha Aaj kyn?

Br'master g ko hafte me or kisi din ofice jane ka man ni krta to wo apna sunday k din bnate h..
All laugh..
Uday'o shit aaj sunday h.
Unanti'ha ab daatne wali ne to btaya ni... Tha na ki aaj sunday h...

Uday childish'shut up,i m going again sleeping...
Wo jane lgta h..

All laugh..
Maya'arey sun beta
Koi bat ni kal smjha lena use.
Aaja..

Jagat.'hy bhaiya ticket kha ki h?
Akash'main ja rha australia,ek project h.
Tara sad ho jati h.
Unanti'project kitne din ka h.?
Akash'1din ka kam h..
Jagat'rukoge kitne din?
Akash'5din.
Uday'to bhabhi ko bi lejao na,jb se leke aaye to tb se ghumane ni leke gye.
Inshort honeymoon pe ni gye..

Tara blush...
All said'yes,ryt...
Tara ko bi lejao.

Akash shout'ok ok.
Chaliye mam packng kijiye.
Bt wo 5 din 10din ho jayege.
Jagat'9 problem.
Akash'or meri absent me mera ofice.dad ko akela to.
Uday'jagat bhaiya sambhal lenge aapka kam...
Jaga'dad 10din tk aap bi ghr pe rhna,aapka kam uday sambhal lega...

Uday'ni main..
Wo chup...
Uday thout'10 din tk secretry k 7th panga lena...
'ok bhaiya,aap jaiye hnymoon pe,dad tb tk ghr pe aaram krege..
Or hm kam krege...

Br'realy.
Uday'yes...
Akash'dad promise me aap bilkul stres ni lenge..
Br'promise beta.
Hmari bhu ka khayal rkhna...
Akash'obiovisly dad...

Precap-uday manyata nxt meetng in ofice..
jay slapt jagat...

Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hello pari
i love ur writing
thanks so much for updating regularly
the update was very nice
i loved it
the precap was intersting
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome update pari!
i enjoyed a lot! update soon i am to eager to read! lets c wt happens between manveer!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
what an writter u are tumne to two update me mi mjhe apna fan bana dia. plz update sun
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Mind blowiiig love it funny scene was dat jb uday ready ho kr hall mein aajaata hai aur pta chalta hai ajj sunday hai :p pari ho skhey tlu pm krdiya krna pleaseee :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Pari meri jaan 🤗
Rapchikrapchundas update 👏 👏 👏
Awe poor uday sunday ko tayyar hoke office ja rha tha😆
Jagat ko thappad or uday abhi bhithark ka peepa hai secretary k saath 10 din 🤣 Tara akash on honeymoon😉
Loved the update😃
Luv uh kamini🤗❤️
Edited by Sanarasheedroxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awsomeee...update pari
hahahaha...uday ka toh popat ho gaya sunday ko ready hoke niklpada...update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Superb update Pari i just loved it...love the way all teased Uday...all r so sweet and naughty...eagerly waiting for next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome update pari
do continue soon

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