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Posted: 12 years ago
Maanveer ss:ajnaabi ehsaass
part-12..
Uday ghr aata h bt lyts of hoti h...
'dad,mom,gudiya kha ho sb,or itna andhera...
Wo lyt on krta h,weise hi clapng start hoti h..
uday surprized'wow,ye kya?
Mom'wht ye kya??
Hmare bete ne itna aacha kam kiya h,hmari
cmpany ko nu.1pe kiya h,hmara sapna pura kiya
h,to ye choti si party to de skte the..
uday happy'hy dad,i think maine 10days me apne
aapko saabit krdiya h..
br emotinaly'im proud of u my son...
Uday'hy dad,don't cryng finaly mehta hmare
saamne jhukh gai h...
akash'exctly,u do it...
Uday'o my god bhaiya bhabhi aap log..
Tara'bs itni aachi khabr hmare ghr me khushi ka
muqa or hm na ho...
Uday'thanx all of u...
to phr saare ofice employes aate h,'congrats sir...
Sb aate h,bt manyata ni aati h,uday dekhta h'wo
bahar jake dekhta h...
jay aati h'hello sir,aap..
jagat'jay,party me to tym se aajati ho,ofice k tym
kya ho jata h..
jay chup.'jb dekho tb chilana shuru..
Uday'wo bhai aapki secratry to aagai.
Jagat'ha to.
Jay'ye manyata ka wait kr rhe h qki wo inki
secretry h.
jagat'ha pta h.
Jay'to puch kyn rhe ho?
jagat'tum...
Uday'arey jay manyata kyn ni aai?
Jay'sir uski tbiyet thik ni thi,wo isliye ni aai...
uday sad...ho jata h...

.Wo sbke sath hs bol k baatein krta h..
unanti'chotu..
uday'kya h?
Unanti'cgrats chotu..
kya bat h udas-2 ho..fake smile or real smile me
frq krna janti humain...
Uday'aisi koi bat ni h,main hs rha hu..
Unanti'wo to mujhe bi pta h,btao na plz i promise
main kisi ko ni btaugi...
Uday'yar gudiya meri manyata ni aai..
Unanti'meri manyata kya bat h?10din me dil me..
uday'ay,aisi koi bat ni h,mera mtlb meri secretary
manyata..
Unanti'bt aap use kyn mis kr rhe h,ha ye bi thik h
jagat bhai ki secertry aagai or aapki..
uday'of oh,tu smjhi ni,ye acheivment meri akele ki
ni h uske bina yekhushi adhuri h..
unanti'jra detail me btaiye na..
uday phr use saari bat btata h...
unanti'o my god,dad ko..
Ok maine promise kiya h ni btaugi pkka..to aap
jake bula laouse...
Uday happy'hy,gud idea,pr wo ayegi..
Unanti'arey aap lene to jao,jrur ayegi...
uday'ok,bye..sb sambhal...
Maya annoucement krti'ladies nd gentlman hm aaj
aapsbko is khushi k mauqe pe ek or khushi dena
chahte h..
Uday jagat aap dono yha aaye..
uday preshan hoke jata h jagat bi jata h..
Maya smile'ye mere dono bete,jagat or uday..
Aaj in dono ki wjh se hmari cmpany nu.1pe aagai..
br smile'ni ni maya g yha aapne bolne me galti
krdi,jagat ne bi hmare ofice ko progres dilai h pr
uday ka hi main hath h is cmpany ko nu.1bnane
me...
Maya luk hm rudely'hme malum h pr..
jagat'ryt dad,mom uday phhle wala uday ni rha..
maya'of oh,ok uday ki wjh se hmari cmpany nu.1
pe h..
Pr asli khuskabhri ye h ki hmne apni dono bhuye
dhundh li h..
piya nd priya aao dono yha...
Wo dono aati h..
jagat uday unko dekhte h...
both passes hr fake smile...
nd mere bhai ka beta karan( aman varma(sry agar
nam glt h to)jisne bhagban me big b k bde bete ka
role kiya tha)
bi aaya h,jo bilkul hmare bete ki trh h wo bi stage
pe aa jaye...
Wo bi aata h..
Continuoes...
pari
Edited by maneet.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update pari
do cont soon

y dint manyata cum?????
wat happnd 2 her?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum pari luved it loads
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...manyta ni ayi...thats nt fair
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why didn't manyata cum
I hate maya witch
Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was short n sweet update...Not only Uday missed Manyata but me also missed her anyways its good she didnt come so that Maya n Manyata didnt come face to face...Piya Priya Aman entry eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update pari love it update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome chappy pari!
I hate this chudail maya...aww uday feeling sad cz manyata didnt come how sweet...and what he said meri manyata that was my fave scene...
U are an awesome writer pari never think to stop...
Update soon..
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx ol of u buddies..
@zina lol chudail..maya h hi gandi..
Thanku sweta..
rythm... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
@pooja thanx 4 cmnt dear...
Nd aman yha karan nam h aman verma ka amar verma real name h..
Ya ryt manyata maya ko ni milana abi...

pari

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