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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: princessSonia

AWESUM CHAPTERS SANJU 👏👍🏼

SORRY DINT COMMENT BE4
DO CONT SOON
N PM ME IF POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!


thanx.. i'll pm for sure..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: pia.raha

it was superbb,last two updates eksath padi!!!!!! uday sherlock holmes😊😊 campwali ladk,their teasing and mission were superbb!!!!!😊 do pm me agn!!!!!!!


yup sure babes.. i'll pm u again.. i am glad u liked it.. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: psp.pari

gr8 & awesome updates dear, loved it to the core

do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MAHI1198

e bhari hota...
plz jara mothe update de na with full of only manveer...
luved it...


thodya wel thamb ga... asa jara gud scene create karayla ohije na manveer romance la... pan long dein me.. okie??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys... here goes the next chap... hope u njoy...

CHAPTER 4

It was a long weak. Neeraj was busy in convincing J. J finally agreed. Then uday and Neeraj sorted out there matter. It was sure that they had to do something vry fast. It was a beautiful Friday. The college ended in a few hrs as today was a halfday for them. Uday wantd to enjoy it now rather than working hard to get to know about Manyata. Manyata askd wther he had been on the nearby hills. As he had not, they decided to go trekking. Both set out on the hills. They had fun watching the scenic beautiful of the hills. Uday sumwher in his mind had the prick that he was hiding the biggest truth of his life from his bestfriend. He wanted to reveal it that day. They came to a nice place, gud 1 to settle. He sat down there and Manyata besides him.

U: princess, I wanna tell u sumthing

M: hmm go ahead'

U: but sumwher I am feeling that u will not believe in what I'll say

M: kyu aisa kya kehne waale ho tum??

U: ohk' Manyata.. I am not Udayveer singh

M: what??? Kaun ho tum' tumne toh mujhe tumhara asli naam Udayveer bataya tha'

U: haan baba' mera naam Udayveer hi hain' par sirf Udayveer nai hain

M: matlab??

U: Jaygadh ke Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh'. ye humara asli naam hain.

M: hehehehe' gud joke.. aur batoy na.. waise yaha baith ke kya karenge'

U: PRINCESS'''.. I am damn serious. I am the Yuvraaj. A true blue blooded royal'

M: accha'?? Waise tumhe bhi pata nai hain ki main ek Rajkumari hoon. Rajkumari Manyata jo jald hi yuvraani banegi

U: WHAT????? U NOE IT ALREADY?? Seriously??

M: OMG' ye tumhe sach laga'?? Ye mera sapna hain, aisa kuch nai hain.. how can I believe ke tum Yuvraaj ho

U: wat?? U don't believe me?? Tumhara mujhpe bharosa nai hain?? (He said patting his chest)

M: aisa nai hain uday..

U: toh kaisa hain'?? Wait a minute' (he launches net from his cell. Google's his name. as the pg loads, it shows his wiki profile. He goes on it and shows the screen to Manyata. )

M: o teri'. Tu sach much ka Yuvraaj hain' tere bare main toh maine kabhi suna nai tha??

U: dats bcuz mera naam jyada business economic cheezo main aata hain aur jyada tar sirf maharashtrian ppl noe me.

M: ohh' dats why' hehehe.. wow dats so amazing.. a Yuvraaj is my bestfriend'how are the royals uday?? My frenz say to me dat I bhave like royals. Like very sophisticated, and like dat' so.

U: yup'royals are just like u. but the difference is dat, unhe jazbatonki fikr nai hoti. Wo dil se nai dimaag se kaam lete hain

M: hmm' bas itna hi difference. Ye bhi mai mita sakti hoon

U: nai' ye bacchanki bas ki baat nai. Rajwaadonko hi aati hain. Dil ke jagh dimaag se kaam lena is vry difficult.

M: excuse me mr. Yuvraaj, impossible is nothing' I too can use my mind instead of my heart' did u just get that??

U: accha' we will see'

M: we shall see'

U: hmm'.

Uv's pov: sorry princess, I just didn't want to change ur heart from gold to bronze. So sorry main tumhari kasm khata hu (saying this he keeps his hand on her head) main tumhe ek aisi yuvraani banayunga jo condition ke anusaar khudka dil aur dimag use kar sake. U will rock' dear' u will rock. U will be the best rulr eva the world has seen

Manyata was a bit taken aback wen uday widout any reason kept his hand on her head'after uday finished thinking he moves hi hand down to her shoulder, brings her close and wid odr hand makes hr head rest on his shoulder. He then strokes her head Manyata confusedly gets up and asks' "wats the matter, suddenly aisa kyu kia??" to which he replied'"kuch nai yaar. Waise aaj sham ko free ho?? Lets shake our legs' yaha pe ek awesum club hain waha jaate hain." "ohk Yuvraaj ji jaisi aapki aagya." She replied. "plz don't tell any 1 dat I am a Yuvraaj plz'" he added a bit frightened. "ha baba chill.. chale ab??"

They did not talk a word. Finally they reached near the car. They both got in and uday dropped Manyata home.

Neeraj called uday'

N: hello bhai.. aage kya karna hain'

U: hmm.. u right. Kuch sochna parega?? Wat if hum ek postman ko bheje'

N: wat' kya khaya hain abhi???

U: kaam ki baat karo yaar'

N: areh kaam kihi kar raha hu'. Postman ko kya bheju pagl ho gaye ho kya??

U: areh haan' wo jayega' itna bada mahal dekhega aur poochega kya aap kahike maharaj hain kya?

N: aur tumhe lagta hain uncle brij kahenge haan hum devgarh ke maharaj hain..

U: nai re.. kuch ghabraya hua chehra hoga na' wo chehra wo postman aake kaisa tha ye batayega'

N: very poor idea'. Mere paas ek idea hain' dad ko amul buttr pasnd hain na..

U: haan'. Ab dad ko makkhan se hi nehlate hain

N: gud idea tum unhe maska maaro(baton main lapeto) aur fir shayad kaam ho jayega'

U: lets try Neeraj.. I'll tell u latr wat happens. Abhi dad ko cl karta hun.

N: ohk chal bye bhai..

U: hmm.. bye..

Uday rings giri immediately.

G: areh.. hello beta'kaise ho aap. Dad ki yaad ani band ho gayee kya??

U: aisa nai hain dad. Kaise ho aap. Waha sab kaise hain??

G: all's fine.kya hua?? Achanak se fone kiya..

U: dad'apse baat karne keliye ab hume bahana dhoondna padega kya??

G: aisa nai hain beta..

U:'aisa hi hain dad.whateva' waise kisika b'day paas aa rahahain

G: ohh' toh ye baat hain. Bhaiyone milkar baap ko lootne ka plan banaya hain kya?? Har saal aapne maanga aur humne diya.iss saal bhi yahi hoga. Aisi koi cheez is duniya main nai hain jo maharaj Giriraj apne betonkeliye naa laa sake.

U: dad..hum hum dono ki baat nai kar rahe. Humare baad kuch hi dino main kisi aur ka bhi b'day hota hain.

G: accha? Kiska?

U: iss saalka toh aur bhi jyada imp. hain kyunki wo shaks 18 saal ke hone wale hain.

G: ohh.. aapka koi khaas dost hain kya??

U: DAD'. Devgarg ki iqlauti, pyaari, long lost beti' Rajkumari of devgarh herself'

G: (a bit serious) hmm' toh kya beta..

U: how cud u say this dad'.? Wo devgarh ki beti hain. Koi toy nai jo aap chaho jitni der chupake rakho. Taqdeer use kheechke wapis devgarh laayegi. She is born to rule. She is a born royal. True blu blooded only heir to the huge grand devgarh' aap aise laaparvah kaise ho sakta ho?? Unka haaq hain devgarh ki gaud main soneka, unka haq hain devgarhpe raaj karneka, Unka haq hain devgarh ki mitti main rang jaaneka, unka haq hain devgarh ki har galiyonmain ghumne ka, unka haq hain devgarh ke aangan main khelne ka, unka haq hain devgarh ki jameenpe thirakne ka(kinda dance), unka haq hain devgarh ke pahad aur dariyon ki khuli hawa main saans leneka. Ye unqe janmsiddha haq (birth rights) hain. Aur is duniyake kisi bhi shaks ke paas yeh cheenneka haq nai hain, yaha tak ki unke khudke daadi, maa, pita, rishtedaar, bhagwan ya khud devgarh ke paas bhi nai. Samjhe aap? Aur hum aapse kya ummeed rakh rahe hain ye aap ye sab sunaneke baad samajh gaye honge?? Rite? Ya samjhana parega??

G: aap thik keh rahe hain. Hum raajmata se baat karenge aur unse brijraj se baat karne keliye bhi jaroor kahenge.

U: bye dad' bas yahi kehna tha'

G: thik hain.. bye beta.. khyal rakhiyega..

U: hmm..

Uday disconnected the fone. His throt had dried by giving his dad such a long lecture. He calls Neeraj

U: hello Neeraj'

N: bhai' app ki awaz aise kyu aa rai hain?? All rite na?

U: haan.. all right' bas makhan jara jyada ho gaya'

N: ohh.. I understand' bahot lecture diya na unhe'

U: hmm'

N: bolo bhai' ab kya karna hain'

U: dad jab devgarh mehel jayenge tab tum unke saath jana. Wen u go der.. just cl me' I'll tell u dat time. Jyada tar mujhe lagta hain wok al subah jayenge'

N: ohk.. jaisa aap chahe' bye.. tc'

U: hmm bye bro.. tc..

Uday disconnects the fone and goes off to sleep. It was around five we he slept. In the evening bye 7 he woke up bye his fone's ring

U: hello kaun hain bhai'

M: bhai nai.. Manyata'

U: ohh' bolo princess'

M: kya bolo princes' clb nai jana??

U: oh yeah' par wo das baje jayenge

M: mom dad itni der tak allow nai karenge. Hum 8 baje chalet hain..

U: (luking at the clock) ohk' bye I'll cum 2 pick u up'

He ends the call and gets up to be ready. He picks up manyta and they go to the club. Manyata had wore a beautiful knee length one piece and she was luking cute in the attire. They reached there and uday's naughty mind started to work as the heads of the gals started to turn towards them on there entry. He asked m wedr she wanted to groove. But she refused and uday headed to the floor. As soon as he stepped in, girls were attracted to him as iron wud to a magnet. He occasionally peeped from between the gals to look wher m was

M: halkat wede khasmanu khane'gadhe.. hopeless useless shameless characteless' oops charactrless nai' Yuvraaj hain.. but still.. Yuvraaj ko kya ye shobha deta hain'I cant get jealous' main dil se matter le rai hu.. no.. main dimaag se lungi.. accha Yuvraaj ji' jala rahe hain aap hume?? Main jalne walo main se nai hu' ruko..a b aapko hi jal ke rakh bana de ti hoon. Uday at that time was nt luking at hr. wen next time he lukd at her, he did not find her there. He was frightened. He excused himself and went to find her.. to his surprise, she was just beside the big circle of gals beside him clinging to a boy'. As predicted by manyta.. he was burning wid jealousy. He came near them and said.."excuse me mr. can I cut in between." The boy reluctantly agreed. Though Manyata was happy from inside, she showed as if she was sad.uday locked his hands around her waist, and manyta locked her hands round his neck.their chests brushing, Uday askd Manyata

U: ye sab kya tha??

M: kuch nai' naach rai thi' tari aankhe hi hain na?? ya marbles hain?? Dikhayee nai deta??

U: excuse me.. mere hote hue tum us ladke ke saath kya kar rai thi'

M: yess' mr.yuvraaj is jealous'.

UV: (pov) oops'. Ye kya tha??? Kya main jealous tha?? Hain main tha.. this is not rite'.

U: wateva'

M: ab kya hua'. Mere hote hue how cud u dance wid odr gals??

U: toh aap bhi jealous ho??

M: noh'. Main dilse nai dimaag se leti hu'

Naow it dawned upon uday how this all had happened. He was happy that at back of her mind, she was jealous. Around ten they left. They dined outside in a seven star restro. Uday dropped manyta at her house and drove away happily'.

precap: its conformed that brijraj is maharaj

Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
yayy 1st one to cmnt...
it was really gud and sweet...
hope to see a biggg update next tym!
keep rocking!
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
res.

weldone swty
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loved it continue soon
thanx for pm

pari
Edited by maneet.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
the update was late but no worries i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva

the update was late but no worries i loved it



sorry... might be i'll update this friday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Very nice update sanju.
So sweet. Do continue soon.

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