**The Unknown Truth**ManVeer SS chapter 9 pg 91 - Page 68

Originally posted by: arna753

<font color="#660000">interesting promo. really eager to lnow ho yuvrani manyata became piya.</font>

<font color="#660000">cont. soon.</font>

Originally posted by: princessSonia

LOVELY N AWESUM PROMO

zinu

do cont soon dear

waiting 4 d update

Originally posted by: Priya46

want piya in yuvrani manyata form in front of uday could just imagine his expressions

Originally posted by: swetsurati

OMG...gr8 promo zinu haillaaa...giri uncle ko pata chal gya piya ke bare me cnt wait for next part plzz..update soon.

Originally posted by: pia.raha

<font size="3" color="#ff0033">oh my god,giri uncle is also cnfused like uss!!!!!!😆 lovelyy promo!!!!!!!!!!!!</font>

Originally posted by: cnibir

Dear Zina,

I have just started reading ur ManVeer SS and couldn't believe myself as i finished it in one go😛!!! The SS was beautifully written with ur ideas, concept, feelings, emotions, character's portrayal - everything was perfect. ⭐️

This SS was truly intriguing to me and i just couldn't stop reading (i still wouldn't have stopped if the SS didn't go upto chapter 8 😆).

U know the best part i like about ur SS is the fact that although it is a sad story of Princess Manyata it still has humour in it to lighten the mood. It was amazingly structured and spot on with all the comedy. 🤣 While reading one of Piya and Uday's conversations i nearly feel off my chair cause i was laughing sooo much.

U are an amazing writer 👏. i can't explain how good this SS is> btw have u considered writing professionally. i mean with a little touch up with grammar and development of key themes u could actually publish this. I mean i would read it!!!!! Heheheheheheh

But seriously what u r writing is of an ACE standard and can not wait for more.

If it isn't a bother could u PM me for your next chappy!! eagerly waiting for it. I really loved the first poem on the last chapter.

How do I mend a broken heart?
My entire world has fallen apart.
How do I find hope in a brand new day,
when the one I love has gone away?
My mind overflows with memories of you,
of all that we've shared, all that we knew.
I long for your touch and your warm embrace,
the look in your eyes, the smile on your face.


I wake and cry for all that I miss.

I wake and cry for all that I miss.
How do I mend a broken heart,
when my one true love and I are apart?
My heart knows to love only you, it won't let go, what do I do?
Our moments together were precious and few,
but I cherished them all more than you knew.
I loved you then and I love you still.

Really nice poem and loved the emotions that came through. What else can i say jitna bola jaye kam hoga 😃!!! It is a Flamboyant, humorous, imaginative and an EPIC rendition of our classic ManVeer love story. Anxious for more!!! Do continue and PM me PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!👏

WELL DONE ONCE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏