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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys mahi could not update because she is a newbie
this is all her work
please do read and comment


CHAPTER 3
he next morning manayata woke up and suddenly her phone rang
sam:hey sleeping beauty watss upp
M:goooddd morning (in sleepy tone)nothing mei bus abhe office ke liye nikal rahe the
S:okay so madam today is a party at uday niwas hotel do u remember and u and prem ,vijay ,jay has to come
M:ya i know but dear today vijay and sam are busy in some kind of project
S:wat so u are not coming(in sad tone)
M:hey dont be sad i and jay will come ab to khushh ho jao
S:acha yeh bhe sahe okay so meet u at the hotel bye
M:bye...manayata went to freshenup and then she getting ready for office
then she went downstairs and saw that prem and vijay was gone to office and jay was having breakfast.
M:good morning jay
J:good morning sisi so are u going to office
M:yess and ya sam has invited us at his party .bro or vijay to gaey huey hei to hum dono chaley gey
J:oks di so mei shopping pey chale jate hun
they both wentoff.
there at uday niwas uday as getting ready and was thinking of manayata,unnati came
un;good morning dada
uday didnt reply
un;dada hellooo ddada (she shook him)dada ap thhek to hei kis key barey mei soch rahey hei
U:haaa wooo mei kuch nhe wo bus office key kaam key barey mei choti and
U:dada mere baat to suney arey...before she could say
he grab his key and went o and ff ,drove the car to the office .while driving he was feeling something that someone is close to him he ignored and then he saw manayata talking on phone on the other side of path then he shout her name
U:fm radio..then manayata saw him and she smiled and the then the air start to blow and the uday closed his eyes to feel that what air want to say and then when he open his eyes manayata was not there day dreaming
U;(to himself)offf hooo din mei bhe sapney magar he sapney hotey barey achey hei dude wat are u talking stop it aesey to tera dheehan kaam pey bhe nhe lagey ga so better yeh sub chor or kaam pey dheehan dey and then he reached office he was moving towards his cabin when everyone was lookimg at him in a shock way and they were laughing he asked
U:wat hapened mere shakal mei joke likhahua hei(he shouted)BACK TO WORK
when he enter his cabin rahul was waiting for him when rahul turned ro see him he get shocked
U;good moning what happen and suddenly start to laugh loudly and uday was asking wat gappen but he was continously laughing and then he calm himself
R:ohhh dude (still calming himself)wesey aj kuch zada garmi ho rahe hei na
u:tu kya kehraha hei mujhey kuch samajh nhe araha plz bata kiya hua sub bhar bhe hass rahey they or tu bhe hass raha hei
R:Beta uday to apne pant kya washoom mei bhool gaya tha or agar pant nhe phen key aey ga to sub hasey gey na
Uday bend down to look and is legs was open so he immediately close it and said
U:i yr aesey kesey mei bhool gaya mei to kabhe nhe bhola ..then in his cabin he always kept some clothes so he went and took the pant and wore it
R'dude i think tere yaadash bhot kamzor ho gae hei so mei soch raha tha key to na ghajini 2 banjha wat say (winked)
U:shut yr
R:acha mei chalta hun mujhey simmy key sath jana tha
U:bye .rahul wentoff and then U to himself
U:wat the f**kKK man tu pant phena bhool gaya and he remember how he was thinking of manayata and he forgot to wore the pant ohh god yr yeh larki mujhey pagal karkey reh gae aj to had ho gae hei us key barey mei sochtey sochtey sub udayveer pey hasey now stop this and concetrate on work ..then the manegar came to uday and said that in uday niwas is a party so u have also invited as guest because u own the hotel uday agreed because his mind will also be relaxed
at night
manayata AND jay
then they both reached the hotel it was decorated beautifully sam welcome them
S;u both hot chicks are looking just have no words
Mand J:thank u sam
uday was getting ready and he was wearing his casual clothes and then he saw manayta from the 5 floor she was talking to sam and j(the party was in hall so from the top uday was saw her)uday to himself;wat the yeh yahan bhe party mei no no dude tu dobaar sapna dekh raha hei then he rubbed his eyes hit his head with the wall but she was there the a man was passing he asked him,U:yeh wo jo larki hei wo wahan pey he na ,koi sapna to nhe na(pointing towards manayata)
p;(confused)hennn ji wo larki ji wo wahna per hei
U:thank u now u can go ...then a evil plan came to his mind (he was upto something)
he reached to the party and called a waiter and gived him some money and said something in his ear and the waiter agreed and went away anduday smirked ,,manayata was talking with sam just then her phone rang and she exuse her self and when she was going the waiter spilt the drink on her dress
M:oh goddd
W:sorry mam i am really sorry
M:iits okay
W:no mam its not okay ap abhe ise waqt isey wash kar ley warna daag lag jaey ga mei nhe chata key mere waja sey kise ko pareeshani ho plz (then manayata agreed)ap wo 5floor pey room 234 pey chaley jein wo guest room
she went to the room and it was open when she enter the room it was dark then she suudenly light get on and uday was there he was not wearing his t -shirt and his hair was wet and the water droplets were droping from his chest which was making the atmosphere hot :P
M:(shocked)tum yahan ...tum yahana kya kar rahey ho
U:smirking:yeh sawal to mujhey karna chahye tha yeh mera room hei
M;tumhara but that waiter...then suddenly the room get locked from outside
M:wat the fu-- yeh door kisney lock kiya ..uday wore his t shirt and said
U:(acting)kya door lock hogaya kis ney kiya?from inside he was happy
precap:
uday and manayata having romance and some more mirch masala
uday getting jealous

Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
manayata was wearing this
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jay was wearing this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
chapter 4
Then manyata get very tensed
M:mei bhar kesey niklu ge ab
UV:tumheyy merey sath rehney mei problem hei kya?
M:wat do u mean
UV:matalb key tumhey kha tohre jau ga jo tum itne pareshaan ho rahe ho
then uday was staring manayata and was thinking oh god she is so hottt :O
then uday got up and start to move towards manyata ,manyata was standing near the window when he reched near her he was like drunk he thought yeh larki toh nasha hei ,His eyes stuck on her.Forgot about all things he get busy in adoring her natural
beauty ,then uday with a jerk make manyata turned towards him ,manayata got scared she was upto say when uday locked hie lips with hers and her finger travel towards her back and he was unzipping the zip to make it fall manayata was trying not to respond his kiss but he was forcing her so she also respond to him the fork was fallen down and uday was just like shockes to see her milky and soft skin and he moved towards her neck and started to give bites and manyata was enjoying this,then uday picked her in his arms and made her lie i the bed and kissed her everywhere then suddenly manyata phone rang and she came to her sense and she pushed him and grab her frock and went to bathroom ,uday was shocked of a suuden view ,and then she came outside and answered the call it was sam she picked it
S:hey manayta baby where are u
M:oh sorry jaan (when uday listened jaam he was angry and jealous and furious to know who was it )wo actually i am lock in a room so tum kise ko bol key isey kolwado it is getting frustrated here looking towards uday .then after few minutes sam came with the manegar and opened the door and he apologise to her .
precap;
uday went to manyata house with the shagun
prem and uday fighting and some bitter truth will reveal in front of everyone
Edited by mahilove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awesome
i loved it
super short
precap sound super super interesting
loved manyata's dress
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome

i loved it
super short
precap sound super super interesting
loved manyata's dress

thank u i know but chapter 5 is special episode and super super long
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice update dear👍🏼lakin bohut short ha 😆manyata ka dress bohut

beautiful ha 👍🏼manveer scene awesum tha☺️superb precap plzz

cont soon and thnxxx for the PM🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: mahilove

thank u i know but chapter 5 is special episode and super super long



will be waiting for chapter 5
and it has to super long
at least 15 times more than this update
and when r u planning to post it?
and congratulations on being a groupbie
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: killerashish

nice update dear👍🏼lakin bohut short ha 😆manyata ka dress bohut


beautiful ha 👍🏼manveer scene awesum tha☺️superb precap plzz

cont soon and thnxxx for the PM🤗 🤗

thanku i know likin agal part bhot bara hei sath mei bhot sara suspense bhe so i will continue maybe tomooroww
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome..update manveer scene was beautifulll...
love it precape is intresting...dirct shagun leke pahonch gaya uday and konsa truth samne ane vala hai??????????plzzz...update soon and than xfor PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678



will be waiting for chapter 5
and it has to super long
at least 15 times more than this update
and when r u planning to post it?
and congratulations on being a groupbie

thankx actually mei new memeber nhe hun mei purani hun bus d bhol gae the or isliye new id banaye and ya i will post it tommorow and it is 1 hour 3o minutes special

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