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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

loved it
sorry 4 late comment
but had exam
got busy
update soon

thanks dear and its k...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry 4 commenting late...i was lil busy...well i have to say my dear lovely krishna jiji u really gave us such a wonderfulll, marvelous and great update...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ full of pure lovely emotions... i can take it as a gift of feb...😳

well manyata was really very sweet n cute...and i just loved uday's jealously...πŸ˜† both are on wild fire...

the whole chap was perfectly written...i hav to say there is so0o0o much perfectness in ur hands, in ur thoughts and even in ur writing styles...πŸ‘ i really praise it alot...the last scene when he comes in her ro0om was just out of this world...that was not that much romantic but seriously from my point of view i didnt read such a beautifull, full of emotions scene...😭 i was so0o0o happy after reading it...

again thank you so0o0o much 4 that much thrilling chapter...do continue so0o0on and thanks 4 the p.m. also...love u 😳.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

sorry 4 commenting late...i was lil busy...well i have to say my dear lovely krishna jiji u really gave us such a wonderfulll, marvelous and great update...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ full of pure lovely emotions... i can take it as a gift of feb...😳


well manyata was really very sweet n cute...and i just loved uday's jealously...πŸ˜† both are on wild fire...

the whole chap was perfectly written...i hav to say there is so0o0o much perfectness in ur hands, in ur thoughts and even in ur writing styles...πŸ‘ i really praise it alot...the last scene when he comes in her ro0om was just out of this world...that was not that much romantic but seriously from my point of view i didnt read such a beautifull, full of emotions scene...😭 i was so0o0o happy after reading it...

again thank you so0o0o much 4 that much thrilling chapter...do continue so0o0on and thanks 4 the p.m. also...love u 😳.

aww thanks mimi...πŸ˜ƒ..thanks a lot bacha...its always glad to read ur comment...πŸ˜ƒ...love uπŸ˜ƒ
Manveer are two wild flowers who will cancel eachother once they meetπŸ˜ƒ...
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 27



Yawningly she welcomed the morning and opened her eyes with a cute smile..Ya she was happy today not bcoz of good dream but bcoz she had started enjoying the life of Manyata.

She had started enjoying the love of family and Yuvraj Udaybeer Singh..ahh no Uday...what have you done to me..I tried a 100 times to close my door in front of you and my family still u all won and me loze... she whispered while cold water showered through her milky skin giving her pleasant shivers..Ya this is one thing which never changed a wash in cold water..she had loved it from childhood and having a cold wash at a place like shimla seems a crazy thing for others but for her it was always magical...Mansi had always argued with her for the same...regarding this habbit but she enjoyed that scold and never considered that advice of mansi...

Once a cold wash is done the very next thing is to move out in a towel to room and spend some quality time dancing to her favorite songs in front of mirror..though the song selection depends on her mood dancing in rhythm remains the same...


Moving out she felt so much freshness and the very reason was absence of Uday..Ya since day 1 he always enters her life like a wind and hence she peeps out a min 5 times to ensure he is not in the room but 2day she didn't need to as he is out on a tour..


A blushing smile came to her face by the very thought and she moved straight to the mirror humming the song of emptiness...Switching on the player she took her favorite comb all prepared to start her day brightly..

But..

But...

But...

The fate was something else..Yes it was to happen the very same day. Embarassing in front of him shit..It was deadly...


He was starring, starring at her in awe starring at the new roop of his princess Manyata Kumari...


He was in white that day with a bouquet of red roses at his right hand..His eyes met hers through mirror..Unknowingly her hands moved up to cover those exposed milky skin of hers..but how much how much can a poor hand help to hide her..where where to hide..The towel is just above her knees exposing her sexy thighs and and her back neck shoulder everything was bare dripping water drops..


She cursed herself for pinning her wet hairs up, atleast they would have helped a bit...

Her eyes soon dropped in fear and shame..Even though in her own world she is not less than a Jhansi ki Rani, in front of others she used to be shy silent and reserved..Her face which was already pale turned redder sensing his foot steps. She hold on tightly to the towel with one hand and crossed her chest with another..


She still didn't had guts to look whats happening around and remained with eyes closed until she felt something warm round her..Her eyes opened to see whats happening with a shock that he saw his lips touching her cheeks through the plain mirror. Yes his lips did touched her reddened cheeks ...


She was now covered, covered with a sheet which is held by him.His arms round her body covering it.


For a split of second she forgot her state and looked at him in surprise. He moved closer to her and b4 she could react he was on his knees'.


Forwarding the roses he stated loud and clear..Happy Valentines Day Princess'


She was dumbstruck ..She couldn't react for a while..He smiled at her innocence and responded in a gentleman voice ..Princess now speak something...Pls don't get this much embarrassed..Its not a dream..Iam here..Ya I was to leave last ni8 but thn I remembered it was my first valentine with you and I want to wish you face to face rather than on phone..now please be fast and take this roses...'Iam really getting late for my flight'


It didn't took time for a second thought and she forwarded her hand to take it still being at some other world'


He happily stood up and hugged her..I love u princess bye'Giving a final kiss on her forehead he rushed out'..


She blinked her eyes in shock trying to figure out whether it actually did happened or was just a mere dream''''.


But the flowers never lie...She turned back with a light smile and looked at herself in mirror taking off the sheet..Ya her whole body was reddened by the time.It didn't took time for her to realize it was his effect on her.

She soon got dressed up for college even though her mind shouted to stay back and enjoy the day at home...



To be continued...

Hope you enjoyed...Leave back your opinions and suggestionsπŸ˜ƒ

Sry guys i know it was too short but thats all for now..will update ch 27 part(ii) 2mrw

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry no PM as of now...will pm after updating 27(ii)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...happy valentines day!!!! Sooo cute...princess is falling for his prince...update the 2nd part di..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

awww...happy valentines day!!!! Sooo cute...princess is falling for his prince...update the 2nd part di..

2mrw dear..this was just for the day...rest of it will be done 2mrw...πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot sweaty😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks mahiπŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update Krishna! Really sweet & cute 😳 !!! Please update part 2 soon😊

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