*~*Forcefully Yours FF*~* PRECAP OF CHAP 9 PG 127

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@thejazzgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

umm.. m here for my comments :D

;et me start with:

Superb, different concept

i love tht bubble manyta!!

i love the Bro-Sis bond...

loved the mother daughter bond too..

eww!! akash the Goon! :/ :P

rohan is soo sweet :)

loved rohan n Mnayta scenes too cutee :)

Hehhe ! soni -chikki UV's maid's :)

Y DID UV kiddnaped her ?? y did he marry her FORCEFULLY ??

wahh!! UV is sooo sooo sooo Heartless here... y soo ??
im sure he Loves Manyata .. hes just showing off the hatred

he almost .. aaww.. rape Manyata ??
haww e UV ko kya hojata haiii

uff... Rohan n Unnati Saved her

m sure something is related With Unnati

Y did he Want to stop Ayan-Kriya's wedding ??

... so ayesha n kriya knows all about this ... bute they dont know the MAN they want to kill..

kriya knows tht man very well.. haye ayesha drooling over the man..

poor manyataa..

OMMMG ... Manyata's Family Knows uday :O

then y did he marry her force fully??

y did he want to Stop Kriya-Ayan's Weding?? if hez Kriya's Frnd

aaahhh!! What a
Re-Entry of Uday in poor Manyta's Life... tht too on the day she tried Chaning herself

ohh poor manyat

sarah.. i req.. dont show UV this Heartless

Waiting for the Reason for this Kidnapping n forced mrg

urghh J despooo

uumm.. guess thrs nothing to do with Riyasat rivalry..

haye poor manyta... i feel my heart out for her

i was literally trembling reading the last part..

wanna read MOREEE

Last but not the least.. i LOVE this MYSTERIOUS FF <3

do cont sooon Sarah

plzzz

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Singularity

@Singularity

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

W.O.W!!! According to me, this is DEFINITELY your best update!!👏

It's good that Manyata expresses her feelings and vents out her frustration in her diary. I think a diary is one's best friend, it'll always listens to whatever we have to share without giving its opinion of our actions or trying to scrutinize us.😊

Aww, Ayesha's helping Manyata forget that incident and move on in life!!! Way to go, gal!!⭐️

J is such a 🤬. How can she be jealous of her own younger sister just because she is Ayaan's pet?? Chi!!😡 And how in the world can she think Uday will be hers?? She definitely can't force her will over others. Uday is NOT a showpiece!!! And he's sane enough to look through her and see how much of a fake she is..😡.

Uff, the way you built up the chapter to the climax was brilliant!!👏 And the M-UV meeting was ELECTRIFYING!!😃 He kissed her hand...and smirked!!! OMG!! OMG!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

Thanks 4 the pm!!!🤗

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: swetsurati
OMg omg omg omg...its damn good...
what manyata's family know uday?????
u evil evil evil... i tell u...bachho ki jaan le rahi ho...
vijay bhai is too much...damn funny
urghhh..that churail J...hate her sooo..much...
last scene was very good...awww...uday kissed manyata's hand.
ahhha...ab bahot ho gaya plzzz...aur mat tadpao aur jaldi se suspense reveal kardo...plzzz...update sooon and yaa i m waiting for the precape thanx for PM.

thankx surati yeap they know uday from his childhood hahahaah im evil and i know it😉
hehehe suspence reveal hojayegaa chill pehle manveer hi i hate you like i love you story to enjoy kijiye😉😉😉😉

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: andy.a
I have no wrds to say after readinp this update. My hrt literally stopd beating reading it. Kripa &aysha r so supportive.Uv has finally come back. It likely to add spice to the story. What really happed to aysha? What will uv again do.do reveal them in the coming chapters.j will always be j she wont change.thanks for the pm.u r a great writer.

yea they are like sister to manyata i have cleared it in the update what exactly happend to ayesha she faced accident manyata thinks uv ix behind her accident like he planned it but she dont have proof soon ull know guys wot she thinks is right or not😊

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: shana0127
it was long and handful...loved the family update...now have to see ye UV maharaj ab kya gul khilayenge

i know it was really long it took me 2 hourx to write it 🤢
lol yuvraaji ab bohat kuch karenge☺️

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: Manveerfan123
Its an awesome update as usual!!!👏 But humein ek baat samaj nahi aaye, hume lag rha tha ki ayaan ki shaadi ayesha se hone wali thi!!! Agar nahi, to ye ayesha sirf manyata ki frend hain????😕 Anyways continue soon!!!😃

thankxx sweety! arrey mene aise to kabhi nahi bataya k ayesha was about to get married to ayaan i have mentioned in the character sketch that kripa ix ayaan fiance😊yeap shex manyatas best frnd.

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel
amazing update..nd tum ek baar komal ke dilagoues dhayan se pdhna ek jagah pr serious dialogue thoda cmdy ho gya hai..dont mind it pls meri baat ko negative way mein mt lejana..do cont it nd keep rocking

thankx i have read it twice but didnt felt any error in komalx dialogue do telme u r takng abt wich one n dont worry m happy dat u r telling me i will never ever mind 😊

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: arna753
fantastic update !!

poor manyata she's still suffering thinking about the incident with uday ...
i really liked the way you described her feelings ... my heart literally stopped beating reading the last part ... Uday back to the scene ...

thanks for the pm ...

thankxx sweety yeap uday ix back for his dear wifey😉

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira
wow wow wow wow wow wow wow
what an awesum nd amazing update it was sarah,,,,,,,👍🏼
completely loved it to bits nd pieces... i jst fell in luv with this chap yaar... it was amazing...👏
i really loed how u have the story forward nd showed the leap pf 6 months nd gave us small small hints of wht happened during tht tenure...
i just loved the last part to the core yaar,,, it was famulous...
there udays voice sent shivers on her body nd here i was having goosebumps on my body reading the last part...
just loved uday -manyta meeting after 6 months,,,,,
i just wonder wht will happen next ????
will she faint in his husbands arms seeing him in front of her eyes once again 😳or will run away frm there...???
why it had to end yaar,,,,, i wanted to read further...
thnxxx sarah for this awesum update 🤗🤗 nd now plz plz plz plz update next part soon...nd better it be longer part...😈
waiting impatiently,,,,,,🤗

thankss alott nira m glad you liked this chappy so much🤗🤗
lol if she faints everyone will know something ix up! the second option ix great 😉
next chapter has alot of manveer screnes hope ull enjoy next chappy too will surly update soon😊