10th fan-made epi!! no break and 45 min special :)

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We see J reaching the Party she was very happy she had finally met her match; she was going to confess her love to AD today.

J- I'm very happy finally humhe hamare type ka ladka milgaya aur woh bhi Uday seh acha' I'm sure Abhay humhe dhekar aaj humhe propose karegha auseh pehele hum auseh apna pyaar ka izhaar kareghe

J entered the hotel

There was loud music on and everyone was dancing Abhay was drinking by the bar

J- Abhay hum agaye how r u?

Abhay- Hum hamesha ki tarah perfectly fine hai I'm very very happy today aaj humhe hamara sab kuch milgaya gai

J- (Happily) Humhe bhi hamara sab kuch milgaya hai aaj

Abhay- Kya milgaya hai J

(She knelt down and proposed Abhay)

J- humhe tum milgaye ho hamara pyaar hamaari khushi hamaara sab kuch humneh kabhi nahiye soacha tha humhe sach mein pyaar hojaygha'.. I love you Abhay aaj hum sabkeh saamneh kehteh hai I LOVE YOU ABHAY!!!!

Abhay got J up

J- tum kuch bole kyun nahiye rehay ho Abhay

Abhay- Awww J hum kya kehay hai ab hum toh he aiseh sab Princesses ko humseh pyaar ho hi jatha hai I have that affect on girls (he laughed)

J- You said tum humseh pyaar (interrupted)

Abhay- what when did I say that' I'm so sorry Princess Jainandani tumhe koi galth phemi hui hai hum tumseh pyaar nahiye karteh look at yourself your so arrogant and stubborn who would make a mistake of falling in love with you'.. tum hamare type ki nahiye ho aur nahi tum bansakthi ho tum sirf chalthi phirthi fashion ki ek magazine ho ok'.. tum hamre mehal ki Maharani baneh liake nahiye ho samji

J- Yeh tum kya kehrehay ho Abhay tumneh toh kaha tha (interrupted)

Abhay- come on Jainandani abhi bhi samaj mein nahiye aiyah don't worry hum samjathe hai no actually I will show you

Abhay got the mike

Abhay- Everyone can I have your attention please today I have thrown this party to share with all of you the biggest happiness of my life.. I have decided to finally get married'' hum bahuth he jald shaadi karneh waleh hai to Rajkumaari Minakshi the love of my life please join me on stage

Rajkumari Minakshi came on stage and Abhay knelt down and proposed her and presented her with a diamond ring

Abhay- will you marry me Rajkumaari Minakshi

Minakshi- Yes I will marry you Yuvraj Abhay

Abhay put the ring on Minakshi

J had finally realized all this was a plan he was only using J for his riyaast plan now he had found someone else' J was heartbroken how could he do this to her she loved him'. She went outside crying' she had finally realized what goes around always comes back around she had rejected Jaggats proposal and then she was just using him to get back at Manyata'. So now she's in love with Abhay he done the same thing he rejected her and used her for riyaast.

J- (Cryingly) I deserve this I'm such a bad person humneh Jaggat keh saat bahuth borah kiya hai isliye hamare saat yeh sab hua

Meanwhile we see Uday and Manyata in Devgar palace

Manyata- Uday tum agaye hum kabseh tumhara intezaar kar rehay teh

Uday- Sorry Princess aapko intezaar karwaya hai woh dharsal hum Dad keh dost agaye teh toh unkeh saat betnah parah

Manyata- so Uday tum humhe ek phone bhi karsakteh teh ya bbm message bhej sakteh teh na' but you didn't now I'm very angry with you

Uday- Princess humneh aapkeh liye aisa surprise plan kiya hai woh dhekar aap bahuth khush hojayghi aur aapna sara ghusah bhool jayghi

Manyata- Uday ab hum nahiye janeh waleh samjeh hamare paas time nahiye hai tum joa

Uday- Princess aise maat karonah humneh itni mehnaat seh yeh surprise plan kiya hai humneh kaha na I'm sorry please humhe maaf karodona ab dheko humnhe kaan bhi pakarliy hai' aindha seh kabhi late nahiye honge

Manyata still wasn't listening

Uday- toh tike hai Princess tum nakreh karoh hum Yuvraj Udayveer Singh hai hamare saat koi bhi ladki chaligayi she wont even think for a second hum ja rehay hai ab

Manyata grabbed his arm

Manyata- aisi kaise chali jayghi tumhare saat hum ausekeh haat pare tordenghe auseki aankeh noch lenghe' agar kisi bhi ladki neh tumhare taraf aank autakeh dekha'. Tum sirf mere ho samjeh

Uday started laughing

Uday- Princess seh seedha jungle billi baneka iraada hai chaloh acha hai

Manyata- hum princess ho ya jungle billi halkar vede khasmunu khane hum tumhareh hai samje now don't make me swear at you' ab chaloh humhe hamara surprise dekhnah hai chaloh

Just the Vijay Bhai came

Vijay- M Bhai Uday bana kahaan janeh ki tyaari ho rahiye hai itni jaldbaazi mein humseh mileh bhi nahiye

Manyata- Vijay Bhai hum Uday keh saat bahaar ja rehay hai he has planned a surprise for me

Vijay- surprise kaise surprise?

Uday- Vijay bana ab yeh hum aapko nahiye batha sakteh because it's a surprise for my Princess

Vijay- acha Uday bana aap kuch zydah he surprises deh rehay abhi toh shaadi bhi nahiye hui

Uday- ab kya kareh hum apni Princess seh bahuth pyaar karteh haina right ab hum chalteh hai warnah bahuth late hijaygha

Manyata- aur haan Vijay I will be late hamara intezaar maat karnah

Vijay- M Bhai if you're not back by 9 hum guards keh saat aapko leneh ajayghe aap ache garoh ki betiyaan itni raatko bahir nahiye rehethi aur haan Uday bana abhi aapki shaadi nahiye hui honeh walhi hai toh please kuch toh sharam kijiye

Manyata- Vijay Bhai hum 9 she pehele ajayghe ok don't worry ok

Uday- aur agar humhe late hogaye toh bhi its fine kyunki hamaari shaadi honeh walhi hai aur hamara haq bantha hai Princess par end of the dat we are engaged so we are allowed to go out ok Vijay bana so please aap chintha maat kijiyeh

Vijay- so aap dono 9 seh baad he aiyghe

Uday- jee haan ok ab no questions humhe late ho raha hai chaliye Princess

Vijay- are you guys sure?

M/U- Yes we are sure

Vijay- acha hai ab hum bhi apni Unnati keh saat bahaar jayghe date par ab toh auseka Hitler bhai bhi nahiye hogha great

Uday- Vijay Bana aapneh kuch kaha

Vijay- No hum kya kehenghe jayee humhe aapi book parni hai enjoy your day

Manyata- bye Vijay Bhai

Vijay- Bye Manyata Bhai

Now we see Uday and Manyata in the car

Uday- patha nahiye hamaari Choti neh Vijay Bana mein kya dheka itneh boring hai hamesha hi books parthe rehethe hai

Manyata- so what it doesn't matter how a person is what he likes or dislikes auseka dill acha honah chahiye aur hamare Vijay Bhai ka soneh ka dill hai he really loves Unnanti to bits I know that ok ab hamare Bhai ki buriyaan karnah band karo warnah hum naraaz hojayeghe

Uday- ok ok Princess kuch nahiye kehenghe Vijay Bana ko ab hum agaye

Manyata- Kya naadi mein Uday yeh sab kya hai

Uday- Princess hum boat mein jaiyghe ok ab chaloh

Manyata- Uday hum gir jaiyghe

Uday- Nahiye giroghee ok hamara haat pakroa humpar bharosah haina

Manyata- haan Uday tumpar bharosah hai khud seh zydah

Uday- toh chaloh aao

Now we see Manyata and Uday on the boat and now we see a beautiful island with a beach and a beach house.

Uday- this is the island of Manveer

Manyata- Wow!!! It's beautiful yeh kab kardi tumneh aur iseh hamara naam bhi diya

Uday- for you Princess because you love the beach aur haan ab come with me I have another surprise

There was a little ice cream shop there

Uday- This is the famous unlimited ice cream machine now I will make my princess her favourite strawberry ice cream sundai

Manyata was very happy

Uday- here's your strawberry sundai

Manyata- my favourite strawberry sundai best surprise ever Thank You so much (she hugged him)

Uday- anything for my Princess (he kissed her forehead)

Uday and Manyata stayed for ages on the beach

Manyata- Uday this is the best surprise ever rather than going to a posh restaurant I prefer this I love it

Uday- I know Princess you would love this that's why I brought the whole island just for you and named it Manveer' now let's go inside

Manyata- this beach house is beautiful too I love the lounge

Manyata sat on the sofa and so did Uday

Manyata hugged Uday

Manyata- Uday thank you hamareh liye itnah beautiful surprise plan karneh keyliye I love you

Uday- I love you too Princess

Manyata and Uday talked for hours and they fell asleep in each other arms

Meanwhile we see J drunk and crying

She went towards her car and she was driving very badly suddenly someone came in front of her car and J turned the car and hit the tree she hurt her head and we see J unconscious. Just then Jaggat was driving past he saw J's car he stopped his car and went to see her, he saw J unconscious.

Jaggat- Jainandani aankien khuli yeh aapko kya hua hai

He picked her up and took her to the hospital

Meanwhile it's 10pm Manyata woke up

Manyata- Uday humhe ghar chalnah omg its 10pm hum idhar he sogaye jaldi utho

Uday- Princess itnah acha sapna dhekrehay teh humhe jagha diya acha tike hai chaloh ghar chalteh hai

Manyata- I'm sorry lekin ghar janah hai chaloh

Now we see Manyata and Uday in Devgar

Rajmata, Brijraj and Komal were awake they were very angry

Vijay and his Mom were also awake

DS- J abhi takar ghar nahiye aiyi hai isse ladki neh toh haad ki kardi hai

Komal- hum baat kareghe unseh unka phone nahiye lag raha hai

Brijraj- Hum khud hi baat kareghe apni beti seh kisi party mein hoghi

Just then Uday and Manyata entered the kingdom

Manyata- Sorry DS humhe dher hogayi

Uday- hum Princess ko bahar lekeh ghe teh

DS- Beta hum aapki wajah seh pareshaan nahiye hai hum J ko lekeh pareshaan she's not answering her phone

Manyata- Kya J abhi thak ghar nahiye aiyi hai

Just then Manyata's phone rang it was Jaggat

Jaggat told her about J's accident

Manyata- KYA J KA ACCIDENT!!!!!!!!


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this was a little treat from CC as today there was no break like
yesterday 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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YIPPEE!! First one 2 comment...though I cheated by reserving the post😈..oh well..😃

WOW!! 45 minutes special update and no break!!ā­ļø
Coming back to the episode...poor J, must have been REALLY heartbroken😭...Abhay is such an 🤬!! How can he treat J like dirt..she is much better than him in every way (nowadays!!)...he really deserves 2 be with that Minakshi...a made 4 each other couple!!šŸ˜†
Aww, Uday!!šŸ¤— Manyata aur apne liye ek island kharida aur uska naam ManVeer rakha!!ā­ļø Manyata loves strawberry sundaes!!😊 I too like 2 have them once in a while...as strawberry doesn't appeal 2 me as much as chocolate does!!ā¤ļø
J, we accept that ur heart is broken, but that doesn't mean that u have the liberty 2 drink away🤢...ur sorrows will only get multiplied, and dissipate...dekha na, ab hospital ka kharcha bhi dena padhašŸ˜†..umm, actually, u don't need 2 worry bout da expenses, cuz u r a Rajwada!!😃 On a more serious note, u really shouldn't waste ur life on that scumbag, who didn't even deserve u.😔
Hawww, kya filmy entry thi Jagat ki, yaar!!šŸ‘ Pakke hero ki tarah J ko apni bahon me utha le gaya hoga hospital tak!!šŸ˜‰
Manyata, tumhe J ke liye itni chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi..she is safe in Jagat's loving arms!!😳
P.S Phew, that was one long comment!!šŸ˜‰
Edited by FireNIce - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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j gt hurt,dat was sad!!!!! uday and m jst a prfct couple!!!!!!!!! such a lovely surprseee uday gave m!!!!!!!
Edited by pia.raha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...poor J...and manveer boat house scene and island was just superb...
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Dhomki se dar gaya ho keya tum sob jo bina break ki aur ek episode de di? Very good. Keep it up. The episode was beautiful. Feeling bad for j. Btw, kafi time se anju ko nahi dekh rahahu. Kaha hai vo? Bhag gaya? Hehehe...
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good job guys! thanks for the update.
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Loved it!!
Uff kya ta!! bechari j!!
Now that's sad!!
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Great update Saira.šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Loved today's episode.šŸ˜›
Great job dear.šŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: FireNIce

YIPPEE!! First one 2 comment...though I cheated by reserving the post😈..oh well..😃

WOW!! 45 minutes special update and no break!!ā­ļø
Coming back to the episode...poor J, must have been REALLY heartbroken😭...Abhay is such an 🤬!! How can he treat J like dirt..she is much better than him in every way (nowadays!!)...he really deserves 2 be with that Minakshi...a made 4 each other couple!!šŸ˜†
Aww, Uday!!šŸ¤— Manyata aur apne liye ek island kharida aur uska naam ManVeer rakha!!ā­ļø Manyata loves strawberry sundaes!!😊 I too like 2 have them once in a while...as strawberry doesn't appeal 2 me as much as chocolate does!!ā¤ļø
J, we accept that ur heart is broken, but that doesn't mean that u have the liberty 2 drink away🤢...ur sorrows will only get multiplied, and dissipate...dekha na, ab hospital ka kharcha bhi dena padhašŸ˜†..umm, actually, u don't need 2 worry bout da expenses, cuz u r a Rajwada!!😃 On a more serious note, u really shouldn't waste ur life on that scumbag, who didn't even deserve u.😔
Hawww, kya filmy entry thi Jagat ki, yaar!!šŸ‘ Pakke hero ki tarah J ko apni bahon me utha le gaya hoga hospital tak!!šŸ˜‰
Manyata, tumhe J ke liye itni chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi..she is safe in Jagat's loving arms!!😳
P.S Phew, that was one long comment!!šŸ˜‰

Thank you so much for your long comment😃 šŸ¤—I'm glad you enjoyed the epi... lol yh Abhay is 😔disgusting deserves to be with minakshišŸ˜† yh island of Manveer😃... yh i guess all rajwada drink when their upset so poor J at least ek faidah toh hua Jaggat has come to her rescue... lol yh thats true M worries for no reasonšŸ˜†

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