SS:COMPLICATED FRIENDS Chap:4(pt-2)+Chap-5(pt-1)PG:15(pt-2)PG:16 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it do cont soon
thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lilybabes

love it do cont soon

thanks 4 de PM


thankoo n glad that u like it:)
Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER-2
Uv:hey princess lets watch a movie..
M:hmmm but which one?
Uv:umm dont know.
M:what?
Uv:hmmm now lets go yaar.
M n Uv walked for sometime n finally reached to the theatre.when suddenly M see a girl to kiss her bf(boy friend).M smile a bit.n then Uv asked
Uv:why r u smiling ha???
M:mujhey mat dekho udhar dekho sab samajh ajayga..
N then Uv turned to the couple n he also smile.
M:such a cute couple na..
Uv:hmmm like us:p
M:what???
Uv:ah nothing...ouch...
M:what happened..
UV:UMMM i m a demon for u right.
M:yeah..
Uv:n my arms r now hurting so pliz kiss me na princess.
M:what????
Uv:what what ha?i mean look maine parah tha ki jab bhi demons ko chot poochti hai toh they need someone to kiss them or need someones blood...so pliz..kuch dedey gabbar toh yeh demon khush ho jayga.
M:hehe very funny.now lets go...
Uv:one kiss..
M:shut up n lets go.
Uv:ok then u will pay.
M:ok ok kanjoos..
n they both left.
Uv's Pov
we ontinued walkong to the cinema.she paid for two tickets.shoved one in my hand n walked into th cinema.I sniffed n following her n then i begged her to buy me large coke with popcorn n three packs of M&M.
"U eat to much"Manya grumbled as she paid for my food.
"WHAT?"I asked?my mouth full of popcorn?eyelashes of the cashier is in me.Ok now itz creepy or i say very creepy so asked Manya
Uv:M is something happen with her eye?i whisper
M:No she iz flirting.she said
N then suddenly the girl wincked at me.I smirk n wincked back.n then
BAMMM.Ouch Manya slapped me.well she always slapp me when i m trying to flirt with my Hot,slim n sexy teachers.but this new.Itz really hurts yaar.dont know ki yeh actually jhappat tha ya jharu n yeh Manya thi ya yumraj.oh god this girl ughh.
n soon my chain of thoughts get interrupted by Manya.
M:hey what r u thinking ha?
Uv:nothin ab chalo.ab achey se sochunga toh bhi kya fayda.thappar hi milega.so lets go.
M laughd a bit n i shrugged n we entered in n settle down in the back.
"frank u princrs for getting me fast food"i said,my mouth full of popcorn.
Manya sighed n muttered,"please let me disapper right now".
"Manya bear"I said sounding like a little boy n hugged Manya.
M break the hug.
M:tu bhi na.
Uv:btw i attend a call from ur dad mr.Dhanjani.
M:oho not dad step dad man.
Uv:yeah yeah faraaq kitna hai in main,han nahi toh.
M:bohout.Dad dad hotey hai n step dad,dad nahi sirf kuch steps hote hai kuch hassil karney keh.
Uv:ok ok.
M:so what he told u?
Uv:nothing just to take care of u.
M:really..
Uv:yeah..
flashback
Uv:abh kiska phone hai.
n Uv attend the call.
Uv:hello who iz thiz?
Mr.K:me.
Uv:me who me..?
Mr.K:Manya's dad Mr.Kapoor u idiot.
Uv(to himslf):W*F man isne call keun kiya.Uv tu toh aj gya.
Uv:yes uncle how r u??
Mr.K:vo sab baad main.abhi time nahi hai toh meri baat dhayan seh sunno n bhoolna mat.
Uv:kya uncle..
Mr.K:meri beti s durr rehna n baki batin main tumain text kar dungi abhi rakho phone.
Uv:yes uncle
FLASHBACK END
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok hope u guys like it.I know itz a pakao update.actually itz not my best as i m so tired na.but phirbhi if u like it then pliz hit the lik button n do comment.
PRCAP:Uv n Manya in Mumbai airport n their first kiss.
ok guys just want to know do u guys want some ahem ahem.well not in my next chapter.but if u then pliz tell me:)as i m confused.n GUYS SO SORRY I CANT PM U.as i m really tired.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
awesome update loved it so nice the dialogues the everything and manyata has a step father goodstory swini ,loved it please update soon and ofcourse yaar we all want ahem ahem scenes😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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read both the chappy's awesome updates... really like their friendship n their so free with each other fun dialogues r so good... so manyatas got a step father n UV lied to manyata of what his step father said seems like her step father will b the villian of the lovestory... precap sounds interestin... plz pm me nxt time u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update CSP.The dialouges r awesome.Pliz cont soon chapchor:p
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum update yr.😃
plz do cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
yaar Swini awesome update
loved their frndship and care free attitude

UV lied to M abt deir phone convo
ab ye step dad consa naya character hai ???
do i sniff a potential villian ??!! hmmm


i dont think v need 2 answer ur ques
u know us so well 😉

cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
do cntinuee soon!!!!!!!! it was nicee!!!!!!!

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