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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

It was a very nice update. Loved it! Do continue soon and plzz make it long because i really love this ff. Plzz pm me if possible

thnx..glad you loved it...will try my best :) aww glad u love it 🤗 ohhkk i will :):)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

nice short update

who was forth frnd.
is it uday.

continue as soon as
possible.

will b waiting for ur
next update.

😆

thnx...ya itz uday...will try my best :) will update soon :):)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Awesome update, is the fourth friend Uday?
Thanks for the pm and do update soon

thnx :D yaa its him...
ur welcome...will tryy...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annesha18

awesome chappy
thanks for the pm
do continue asap
waiting for manveer meeting

thnx anni :D
no probzz
will tryy...that will be in next chap ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice update anjika bt to short
uday kyu manyta ko chodkar chala gaya??
Thanx fr pm n wting fr nxt update

thnx...sorry about that 😆
u will come to know that soon :)
no probzz...will update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sami "usse chodo . Manyata tumhe pata hai Jay ka aaj subah call aya tha"


Manyata came out of her thoughts and all got engrossed in talks. After some time , they went to their apartments and the rest of the day went in studying.


Next morning they had their breakfast together . Then Rahul and Manyata went to the uni together while Sami and Meera werent going as Sami wasnt feeling well and Meera wanted to stay and take care of him.

Rahul "Let's go" he said while playing with the car keys . Manyata giggled .


Rahul "kya hua "


Manyata "shoes to pehen le "


Rahul looked down and then smacked his head "abhi aaya"


The ride to the uni was fun . Rahul cracked many jokes and Manyata was no less . They reahed the uni and Rahul just like a true gentleman opened manu's side's door as he always did . They went together laughing and gossiping but even when manyata was laughing she was having an uneasy feeling...as if something was about to happen .

They walked in and saw a group of boys standing and talking .

Manyata "who are they ?" She asked pointing at the group .


Rahul looked there "ohh they are of the same batch as ours . They had gone for some competition and were representing our uni."

Manyata "okk"


She gasped and stopped in her tracks as she saw HIM in between them talking and laughing .


Flashback of the last day they met -

Manyata and Uday had just come back from the seven day camp they had gone to and were getting in Uday's car who was going to drop her to her home . After completing near Half of the journey Uday got a call . He stopped the car at the side and got out of the car .

Manyata saw Uday's shocked face and then sadness all over . he cut the call and came inside the car and started driving rashly .

Manyata "Uday kya hua ?" She asked worried but he remained silent . She tried asking him again….many times but he remained silent . They reached Manyata's home after sometime .

Uday "go"

Manyata "parr"

Uday "Manyata jao" he said angrily . She walked away slowly shedding silent tears . Her best friend was in pain and she couldnt do anything.

She turned back once only to him also crying . She was shocked . He never cried but today she could see the tears that were flowing continuosly .

He didnt look at her once and went away . The next day she went to meet him only to find the house locked . When she asked the neighbours she came to know that he had gone away at night only...

Flashback over (this was from Manyata's POV)


She wiped the tear that was threatening to fall and pointed at Uday . "Rahul vo kaun hai ?" She asked in a small voice .


Rahul "that is Aditya . Uni mai sabse popular and most talented . Pata hai college mai tumhare aur Meera ko chodkar aisi shayad koi ladki nahi jo iske saath atleast three months naa rahi " He said staring at him then looked at Manyata "are you crying ?" he asked shocked ?"

Manyata "nahi...its just...something got into my eye"She lied and started moving .


Rahul " Manyata umm tum 2 minutes ke liye wait karna , maine kisiko apne notes diye the , abhi vapas lekar aaya "

Manyata "okk " she said as she smiled.


She stood in the ground waiting for Rahul . After playing games in her mobile for a few minutes i got bored and started looking here and there and noticed Uday...oops Aditya standing with his friends . At the same time that she looked at him , he also saw her .


She turned my eyes away and started searching for Rahul . She didn't want to talk to him now . Rahul was still no where to be seen . Her eyes again went to the place where he was standing even though she tried hard not to look there .


She started feeling nervous as he came near herand started walking at the opposite side. She stopped as she reached the wall and turned back . Good he wasn't following her .


She sighed and leaned at the wall . 'uff kahan marr gaya ye Rahul' She thought and decided to message him . 'Jaldi aa naa. Im at the front door' She messaged him .


She turned to go only to find him leaning at the wall . She tried to walk away silently .


"Manyata" he called "ruko"


She tried to ignore and walk away . He followed her calling her again "Manyata suno to "


She just wanted to go out of there now . She started walking faster but in the next second found herself being pulled by him .


He caught her wrist and pulled her near him . He needed to talk to her. She fell on his chest due to the force. She looked up to find his intense eyes staring hard at her .


She tried to free her wrist and succeeded too . "Manyata we really need to talk " Uday said.


Manyata didnt know what to say . Did he talk to her before leaving from India without even telling her once ? She shook her head "i dont want to talk Uday"


She wanted to meet him since the time he left . She was soo upset before coming here but everything got well after coming here . She was happy now . Why did he have to come ? She started walking only to be pulled back again .


Manyata " Uday...ohhh sorry Aditya mera haath chodo"


Uv/Adi " nahi pehle tum meri baat suno"


Manyata felt helpless and tried to free herself . "Uday bohot ho gaya . Mujhe nahi baat karni tumse ." She said in a low voice as she felt a lump in her throat and tears threatened to fall anytime soon now.


Thats it for now . Thanks for reading . Do like and comment if you want pms :)

Edited by Anjalika13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update fungi. Pm ke liye bohut sara thnx
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Posted: 12 years ago
well writtern.amazing update.
loved it a loads.

so manyatha and uday met.
but y uday changed his name
to adi.

continue soon.next time plz
give a long update.eagerly
waiting for ur next update.

danxs for d pm.
Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing chapter 👏
But it was very short !
Loved it 😳
So finally they met each other !
But i am a bit confused ...
As to why did Uday change his name ?
And yeah why did he leave her (WITHOUT TELLING) ?
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 update anji
manyata n uday met eachother wow nice ha ...
Thanx a lot 4 pm n cntinue soon

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