A hate story manveer SS pt 1 updated pg 2 - Page 3

👏👏thnaks.awesome...loved it...brillaint...👏👏

WOW! So both of you are awesome in maintaining suspense. huh??

wow, superb

awesome!!
Ur lil sis writes soo well ..i mean the way she is narrating the story is beautiful
she got some excellent writing skills like U :)
Cont soon :)

Beautiful Update Cham! Ur Sis is Really Talented Jus like U... ManVeer Was as usual Beautiful! Suspense! Ahh no probs will b waitin 4 ur next update! Yeah u talented sissy don't Forget to update hun ! Ty 4 d pm 🤗

it is really nice sounds interesting would love to read it... ur sis also pretty talented jst as u seems writing skills run in ur blood u guyz r too good👏👏... i know i m commenting late sorry abt that i jst got stuck with a test😡😭 ur sis is already convinced & i m glad she is cuz its really awesome...
jst read chap 1 & my word that was jst amazing i loved it so so mch cant tell how mch i loved it.. its really awesome fab fantastic really wanted it to go on & on😳.. this is amazing & ur sis was thinkin of not writin more of it keep on writing dear cuz its really mind blowing... loved all the scenes firstly udays entry was jst fab really loved it.. the party scene manveer dance so good oh that moment nice one😳😳... the way uday told his friend all abt it was really fab loved that & love their nok jhok towards the end... well i loved each n every scene😆... the precap sounds really really really really amazing cant wait for nxt update😃... thnx for such awesome update & thnx cham for sharing this with us🤗🤗🤗...