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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update! oh gosh hope they can find Manyata soon!

Thanks Shonali😃 keep reading to find out
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 49

The next day we see everyone on the breakfast table

Manayta comes downstairs

Manyata- bye everyone

Everyone was shocked

Uday- Princess no cornflakes today aise kaise you can't go without breakfast

Jhanvi- Manya seedhe seedhe beth jo warnah acha nahiye hogha eat your breakfast then go to work

Viraj- nahiye no nashtha chaloh Manya

Jhanvi- Viraj yeh aap kya kehrehay hai breakfast is the most important meal of the day

Uday- haan Princess you never leave cornflakes for anyone nashtha karkeh joa kya jaldi hai it's enough time

Manyata- No nashtha today Uday aaj Viraj Bhai humhe nashteh keh liye bahaar lekeh ja rehay we are going Subway ok so I will see you in the evening bye

Uday- lekin (interrupted)

Viraj- Uday hum haamari behen ka ache seh kyaal rakenghe don't worry

Manyata and Viraj leave

Jhanvi- aaj Viraj ko kya hogaye hai bina coffee piyeh chaleh gaye aur Manya ko nashtha bhi nahiye karneh diya

Uday- Princess didn't have cornflakes kuch baat to hai

Jhanvi- I don't know Uday aneh do Viraj aur Manya ko phir dono ki khabar lethi hoon… tum nashtha karo

It was 4pm

Shaina- Jhanvi hum abhi Birmingham ja rehay hai Viraj keh dost keh ghar mein function hai…. Raat ko ajayghe ab chaloh Krishy bacha jaldi she tyaar hojo

Krishy- I don't want to go Dadi I want to stay here with Bua and Prince Udayveer please I will be good

Jhanvi- bacha Papa bahuth daanthe ok so u have to come

Krishy- No I am not going Prince Udayveer tell them I want to stay home me and you can watch Batman and Robin

Uday- Bhabhi Krish ko ghar reheneh dijiye aur waise function mein bore hojaygha hum isska ache seh kyaal rakenghe promise

Jhanvi- ok fine Krishy be good bacha ok

Krishy- I will Mama

Shaina- Viraj will directly meet us there…. Aur haan Uday Manya ka phone aiya tha she's gone with Remisha and Rajbir to the jewellers… Rajbir auseh ghar chordehgha tum chintha maat karnah ok… aur haan Vijay, Unnanti and J bhi hamare saat ja rehay hai

Uday- tike hai Aunty

Everyone leaves only Uday and Krishy are at home

After a while Manyata also comes home

Manyata was shouting

Manyata- where is everyone? I'm hungry no food

Krish- Bua there all gone to Birmingham Daddys friend's house party function, Daddy, Mummy, Dadu, Dadi, princess J, Princess Unnu and Prince Vijay also gone... I'm hungry too but don't want this sabzi

Manyata- Where's Uday?

Uday- I'm here Princess kya baat hai bahuth ghuseh mein ho

Manyata- Its 7pm everyone's gone without telling me

Uday- Princess it was a function and you weren't home they told me to inform you when you come back... right so Krish shall we watch Batman and Robin I made pasta also

Krish- yes Prince Udayveer

Manyata- I will make chocolate cornflakes

Krish- Yes Bua yummy

(She went to the kitchen opened the drawer no cornflake left)

Manyata started screaming

Uday and Krish ran to the kitchen

Uday- What happened Princess?

Krish- Bua what happened?

Manyata- Uday, Krishy no cornflake left

Uday laughed

Uday- Princess just because of cornflakes you started shouting omg now please don't start crying

Manyata- shut up Uday I want cornflakes now

Krish- me 2 Prince Udayveer

Uday- ok ok I will go get it from the shops Princess agar cornflakes insaan hotha you will surely marry him

Manyata- how I wish he was anyways abhi lekeh aao ok agar nahiye mileh go to other shops don't come back till you buy cornflakes

Uday- ja rehay Princess tum araam seh betho hum abhi lekeh athe hai cornflakes yeh sach mein hamara sabseh barah dushman hai cornflakes agar insaan hotha toh hum iseh chorteh nahiye

Manyata- joa abhi don't call my Mr Cornflake dushman he's my everything

Uday- toh phir hum kaun ha I thought I was your everything

Manyata- tum bhi ho lekin pehele cornflakes ok you are last ab joa now!!!

Uday- ab nahiye jayghe hum last aur yeh cornflake first ab toh kabhi nahiye jaighe

Manyata- Uday abhi joa now warnah hum tumseh baat nahiye kareghe

Krish- Bua, Prince Udayveer please stop arguing can you go buy cornflakes I will wait for you then we can watch Batman and Robin hurry up... Bua don't be mean to Prince Udayveer say please he will go then

Manyata- fine sorry Uday can you please please buy me cornflakes pretty please (she made a cute face)

Uday- Princess ab tumneh please kehdiyah hai hum abhi jakeh athe hai ok

Uday leaves

Krish and Manyata were watching TV together just then someone started banging the garden door... Krish got scared and went running to Manyata

Krish- Bua someone in the house

Manyata- Krish you sit here I will go and check

Krishy was hugging Manyata tightly

Krish- Bua don't leave me alone we will go together

Manyata- fine chaloh bacha

Manyata and Krishy went to the kitchen the garden door was open

Just then someone came from behind and got Manyata

Manayta- LEAVE ME!!!!

Krish- LEAVE MY BUA!!!!!!!

Krish got the kitchen brush hit the person on the head he let go of Manyata...both Manyata and Krish ran in the lounge.. he ran after Manyata caught her again and put chloroform on her mouth Manyata passed out..this time he pushed Krish on the floor and picked Manyata up and took her outside.

Krish hurt his head

Krish- LEAVE MY BUA!!!! (He ran outside after them but it was too late the car was gone and the house door was shut and Krish couldn't go inside the house)

He started crying

Krish- BUA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile we see Uday with cornflakes walking it home

Uday- finally milgaya yeh cornflakes went 3 shops

He saw Krish crying he went running to him

Uday- Krish Bacha what happened?

Krish- (Cryingly) Prince Udayveer he took my Bua someone tried to rob our house then he took Bua (he was crying and crying)

Uday picked him up

Uday- ssshhh Bacha I will find your Bua I promise stop crying

Uday didn't know what to do he couldn't ring Viraj or go home coz the door was locked he had no key, so he decided to go to Rajbir house.

Rajbir- Uday tum isse waqt Manya kahaan hai aur J… Krishy why are you crying bacha what happened? Andar aao

Uday told him what happened

Rajbir- Remisha Krishy ko upar lejoa

Krish wasn't letting go of Uday

Krish- I want to stay with Price Udayveer I'm scared he wore black mask he took my Bua (he started crying)

Uday- ssh bacha you're my brave bacha and strong so no crying ok here have some water… that's like my bacha get some sleep ok I promise I will find Bua

Krish went to Remisha she took him upstairs

Uday- Rajbir I need to find my Princess I'm sure that Arjun done all this aur ab hum auseh choreghe nahiye

He was about to go out

Rajbir- Uday we should inform the police you can't take matters in your own hand… if it's a kidnapping case they will surely ask for Ransom they should ring anytime soon

Uday- Rajbir this isn't a ransom case

Just the Uday phone rang

It was Viraj

Viraj- Uday its me Bhai we wont back till 2mrw evening I hope that's ok Manya aur Krish ka kyaal raknah

Uday- ok Bhai I will do bye

Viraj- acha zara Manya she baat karanah

Uday- she's in the shower I will tell her you phone bye

Uday disconnected the phone

Uday- I had to lie to Viraj Bhai just because of this Arjun

Rajbir- Who is this Arjun why would he kidnap Manya

Uday- it's a long story for now I need to look for my Princess

Rajbir- mein bhi chaltha hoon saat lets go raaste mein police complaint bhi kardenghe

Now we see Manyata locked in a garage

Just then Uday phone rang

Uday- Hello

Guy- mein bhole raha hoon now listen to me carefully agar Manyataaa zinda chahiye hai toh mujhe meri Jainandani do kal isse pathe peh ajanah warnah mein Manyataa ki lash tumhare paas poachdoongha…. This time I am very serious Udayveer Singh tumhaari aur iss Manyataa ki wajah seh meri bahuth bezaathi hui hai ab bas mujhe sirf J aur mere bacha chahiye agar police ko bataneh ki koshish ki anjaam bahuth borah hogha

Uday- ARJUN HUM TUMHE ZINDHA NAHIYE CHORNGHE AGAR HAMAARI PRINCESS KO ZARAH SI BHI CHOT AIYI… HAMAARI BAAT KARWAO ABHI MANYATA SHE

We see Manyata and Arjun in a garage

He pulled her hair

Arjun- TALK TO YOUR LOVERBOY JALDI I DON'T HAVE TIME

Manyata- Udaayy!!!

Uday- Princess aap tike toh hainah I will find you I promise

Manyata- Uday kabhi bhi iski baat na manah aur hamaari behen ko idhar maat lanah hum tike hai humhe kuch nahiye hogha

Arjun slapped Manyata acrossed the face

Uday- ARJUN!!! DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH MY PRINCESS

Arjun- agar Princess zindah chahiye hai toh kal he J ko hamareh paas lekeh aao samje

Manyata in the backgroud

Manyata- NAHIYE UDAYY ISKI BAAT MAAT MAANA

Arjun slapped her across the face again

Arjun- kyun nahiye maneh J is mines agar nahiye manegha I will kill you!!! RAGHUBEER ISKA MOO BAAND KARO... YOU HAVE TILL 2MRW

He disconnected the phone

Precap- Uday was in dilemma

Manyata or J

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Anam, though I haven't tried your FF till now... but will do so soon!!
Will love to read your work too!...
Just wanted to say your work is gonna come under my scrutiny too lol
so bachna aye writer!


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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing update anam 😃 i just hate that arjun plz do cont soon nw suspence is killing me that what will uday do nw
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsomeee...ohhh...good this arjun...pehle manyata ke pime tha ab J ke pi6e...this suspence killing me...cnt wait for next part...now what will uday do J or manyata...and if this arjun come back then what about J and rabeer..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful and awesome loved it i mean absolutely outstanding and marvelous the suspense is killing me now anam please update soon please please please and continue soon and this was so nice i wonder what uday will do now u rock anam and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Update Anam di! It Is Said That Every Love Story Has A Villan & So Do In This! Arjun Is The Villan For ManVeer & JRaj! Hope Everything Will Be Sorted As Soon As Possible! Ty 4 d pm & Update sooonn
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update di:)thanx di apne jaldi update kia..:)di Manyatha ko Arjun ne kidnap kia hai na..i hate him...di pls jaldi se next part update keejiye pls..
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG all da villains on one side
ugghh this is so annoying
hope uday makes right choice
thx 4 pm

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