manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 - Page 27

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Pari just wow👍🏼
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Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-) Part-48

Manyata,jay vijay ghr aate h...

Tara bhaagi-2 aati h
'cngrats both.
Aakhir ho hi gya.

Br'kya ho gya?
Vijay'complaint ho gai police station me.
Komal'hm khde ki tara ko hmne preshan ni kiya...

Manyata'ha khdena...
Police kbi bi aake pkad k lejayegi aaplogo ko..
Br'abi abi k cmplaint wapas le.
Wrna.
Jay'phle tara ko as a bhu accept kro.
Br'wo imposible h.

Manyata'ha to thik h..
Br'jb tk main apne kaano se ni sun leta tune case wapas leliya h tb tk main accept ni kruga.

Jay'aacha ruko.
Jay apna phone nikalti h'di kitna bl.
H apke cel me.
Manyata'2
Jay'mere me to wo bi ni h.
Vijay'are akash ka phone h na..
Manyata'papag rat ko sun lena...

Wo sb apne rum me jate h...

In uday's home.
Gr'maine aaj akash k parents ko phone kiya..
Uday'ha to.
Gr'wo aa rhe h..
Jagat'ha to..
Gr'phr akash or unanti ki shadi ki bat krege.
Uday-jagat'ha to.
Gr'ha to kya?
Agar ni maane to.

Uday'to ldke margye h kya?
Akash'yar tu to aisa mt bol.
Jagat'tere parents agar ni maane tb ki bat kr rhe h.
Akash'ni yar tumhare hote huye aisa ho glt h na,
Uday'aacha idhar la apna phone..
Akash'kyn?
Jaga'tere parents se bi ha kra denge...
Akash'phle hi 20 cut gye h..
Uday'phr chup rh bkwas mt kr.,.
Akash'aacha thik h le pr jayada ni..
Jagat'dena,tera baap itna amir kis kam ka h..

Uday calng akash parents...
Speaker on krke
'hello.
Uday'hello uncle g.
Kya hal h?
Manindr'kaun?

Uday'uday,giriraj ka beta,or akash ka dost.
M'ha beta bol.
Jagat'g uncle hm thik h.
Uday'akash k lye ldki Dekh rhe ho kya uncle g.
M'o na beta,samne to akash ki maa khadi h.
Uday'saale tera baap teri maa se hi teri..
Akash shoute'ni papag main maa se shadi ni kruga.
Manindar'o khote,jan se marduga agar aisa socha bi to.


Uday jagat laugh.
'uncle g,akash ko daamad bnane k lye koi mra ja rha h.

Gr,maya ds sb ajeeb tarike se use dekhte h.

Jagat'khun kroge kya?
Aise kyn dekh rhe ho.
M'o kaun h wo beta.
Jagat'giriraj kapoor.
Uday'maya ka pati uday jagat ka baap.

M'lekin keise?
Uday jagat again laugh
'akash,ye pkka tera hi baap h.
Uday'uncle mere pitag bheekh maang rhe h ki akash unanti ki shadi krado.
Gr shockd'arey maine aisa kb kha.

Akash'kha uncle g ek min. Chup.

Manindar'kya?
Giri such me akash unanti ki shadi k lye taiyar h.
Jagat'ha ng wo kya h khud ya hmse to akash shadi kr ni skta.
Uday'to unanti hi bchi..
Manindar'main aa rha hu 2din bad.
Uday'g chalo bye,aana or shadi krake hi lejana.

Manindar'o changa.
Bye.
Cal cut.
Akash jaldi-2 apna phone leta h'hawww 40rs.cut gye..
Gr'khote chup rh,maine kb bheekh maangi.
Uday'ha to aapko ha krana k lye bi to yhi bola tha.
Bheekh to unhone ne bi ni maangi thi..
Ha ni to.
Wo bolke chale jate h.

Gr'hy bhagwan ye keise gunde bache dediye...
Had h..

Manyata leti h nd smilng remembring uday love cnfesion..
'pura pagal h.
Gadha khin ka...

Jay'di jagat se phle to maine ilu boldiya..
Manyata'kuch bi ho feeling bdi aachi hoti h.
Jay'di,jagat se phle to maine ilu bol diya.
Manyata'i love u alot.
Jay dhaka deti h manyata ko di.
Manyata'arey kya hua?
Ab tune bola ho
Usne pyar ho gya na.
Ha ni to.
Tara'ay manyata police station phone to kr...
Manyata'arey ha..
Wo br k pas jati h.
Papa,ye pkdo phone main ja ri hu police station...
Complaint wapas lene.
Br'lekin mujhe phone kyn de ri h.
Manyata wo wha se police wale phone krege..
Uthalena...
Wrna tbi andar jaoge..
Ha ni to.

Chalo..
Yha wo jate h.
Or yha uday jagat akash inke ghr pe,

Tara rum me jati h,dekhte hi chilati h.
Uday'pagal h kya?
Hm h hm.
Tara'tum sb yha kya kr rhe ho?
Jagat'mood ni lg rha tha,aagye,kuch jruri bat krni thi..

Uday'kha h sb?
Tara'wo tumhare ghr gye h...
Jagat'wht?
Akash phone de apna.
Akash irritate'ni..
Uday chin leta h phone de wrna shadi tudwa dunga.
Ha ni to.

Uday calng manyata,pr manyata apna phone br ko deke chali gai h.

Br pick up d cal'hello...
Uday voice sunke darke phone chod deta h.
Jagat'kya hua?
Uday'yar ek bar awaaz sun k dekh mere kan bj rhe h ya such me awaaz itni bhaynak h.
Ya tera phone hi kbaada h...

Jagat bi phone uthake bolta h'hello.
Br'hello,
Jagat bi darke phone chod deta h.
'bhai,apne baap k jeisi awaaz lg ri h...

Akash'phone to cut krdo.
Uday'ruk ni.
Again phon pic krta h'hello,kyn be kaun bol rha h?

Br'g inspector shaheb main br bol rha hu.
Uday'inspector,
Tara'ha inspector bnke bat kr.

Uday'ha aaj se wo bi bngya,kya kr rha h tu?
Br'g aap case bnd krdo,main tara ko bhu bna lunga..
Uday'btau tere ko,tara ko bhu ko bna lunga ka mtlb.

Br'arey sry sry wo to meri bhu h.
Uday'chal thik h.
Rkh phone.

Cal cut.
Uday'o god,main to dar itni najuk awaaz itni bhaynak Keise ho gai..
Jagat'abey ha yar,akash apna phone apne pas rkha kr.
Akash'tumlog chinlete ho.
Uday'kasam khate h ab ni lenge.
Pkad apna phone dra diya.

Tara akash k phone leleti h ruk unko phone krke bula leti hu.
Akash took jagat uday.
Jagat'kasam hmne khai h,tara ne ni.

Tara calng vijay.
'hello.
Tara'vijay yha aajao,uday sb yha aye h..
Vijay'kya?
Tara'itni tej mt chilaya kro,main ek bar bolti hu jo bolti hu.
Ha ni to.
Chilate aise h,jeise bijali lg gai ho.
Bye.
Cal cut...

Weise tum log kyn aye?
Jagat'arey shadi ki bat krni thi yar.
Tara'shadi kiski?
Akash'meri
Uday'kamine,tuhi mariage krega,hm kya kuware marege..

Tara'apni shadi ki bat,kiske 7th.
Uday'zahir teri saas to shadi shuda aurat h.
Jagat'uski do betiya h to unse hi krege...

Tara'wow.
Mtlb uday manyata se
Jagat jay se.
Uday'kamal h ldki smjhdar ho gai.
Jagat'unse to puch le,ds aayegi phr shadi ki bat krne.

Akash'uncle-aunty ni ayenge.
Uday'ds pasnd krlegi bina kisi swal jwab k.
Jagat'wrna papag to swal puch puch k ldki ko mardalega...

Tara'ha ye to shi kha..
Jaldi..
Haayee..

Vijay'manyata wo sb wha tere ghr phuche h.
Jay'kya?
Chalo.
Manyata'chal,unki taange todti hu,o teri mera phone papag k pas h..
Wo uday phone krlega...
Hy bhagwan chlo jaldi.

Precap-ds cum manyata home uday jagat ka mariage purposal leke...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Cool update really nice ur precap has made me reallly impatient plzzz update soon... Luv ur ss
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Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-) Part-49.


Manyata,jay nd vijay cum home.
Br'manyata beta meri bat police se ho gai...
Manyata cnfusd'ha,mtlb.

1lady cum brijraj home
'g yha brijraj g h!

Sb dekhte h...
Manyata jay vijay shockd.
Maya'g aap kaun?
Ds'g maine suna h aapke ghr me 2pyari-2 betiya h.
Br'g h pr..
Ds'main apne bacho k lye aapki betiyo k lye shadi ka rishta leke aai hu..

Manyata shout'kya?

Uday jagat in rum'oye lgta h dadi bi aa gai wo bi aa gai.
Wo phr door se dekhte h.

Uday loudly'oye hoye ds jwan lg ri h.
Jagat'sexy.

Maya'ye keisi awaaz h..
Jay'kan bj rhe h...

Vijay dhire se'ye bal keise kale ho gye.
Ds'beta kbi kbi colour kr lena chahiye wrna hmesha buzurg teacher lgte h...

Sb tightly hste h..

Br'g lekin aapko keise pta mere ghr me meri do betiya h.,
Ds'jwan ldki ldke chupaye ni chupte na..

Akash'mtlb.
Uday'kuch ni beta,ye jwan logo ki baatein h..

Maya'g aap bethiye,main chai
Ds'g ni,main sidhe apne bete ko leke aaungi,rishta pkka krne.

Br cnfusd'pr bura mt maniyega,aap mere bacho k clge ki principal ki sakal apki sakal se milti h.

Manyata fake smile'papag budhe logo ki sakal same same lgti h.

Ds smile'she s ryt.
To main kuch dino bad aungi.
Br'pr aapke bache krte kya h?
Ds'crorpati h unko kya krne ki jrurt h.

Jagat'ha ni to.

Vijay'ye cnfusd bad me hona,phle shadi krni h chilate the,ab rishta khud aaya h to shave rub kr rhe ho.
Maya'ah,g bhan g aap jb aaye...
Ds'g main chalti hu.
By bacho.

Manyata hapy'bye dadi.
Br'dadi.
Jay'papag such me aapke kaan kache ho gye
Dadi ni kya kha tha?
Manyata'of oh maine to srf bye baby kha tha..

Vijay'arey chalo yar.
Sb rum me jate h..

Br'mere ghr me bda ajeeb ho rha h.
Komal'khud hi ajeeb ho.
Hato..

Manyata uday k pas jati h'oye ye kya jhol h sb..


He pic hr waist'wo kya h na kudiye,apni property pe jyada jaldi apna haq jmana chahta hu..
Manyata losly hug hm'hmmm.
To apne parents ko leke aa,tbi tujhse shadi krugi.
Uday'dadi aa gai na,ds ha pe adi rhegi,to mumy papa bi kuch ni khege.
Manyata'weise agar mere mumy papa tumhein dekh k ni maane to...

Uday pic hr chick'na g hmse handsum hoge to hi mna krne ki shkti ni h.
Or hmse handsum to koi h ni..

Jagat'ryt.
Jay'itne smart bi ni ho.
Jagat'hm smart ni handsum h.

Tara'bs sbkuch thik ho jaye..

Uday'tu bdi exict ho ri h,manyata jay chudail jeisi nand se chutkaara mil jayega.
Jagat'ha tb ye akele raj kregi..

Tara'oye aisi koi bat ni,main ni chahti mere dosto ki shadi meri trh h.
Ha ni to
Wo rone lgti h.

Akash'rone lg gai.
Uday'akash bhagwan ne hmein bi aankhe di h.
Jagat'dekhne k lye.

Manyata'tara,ye to pagal h.
Tu chup ho ja.
Vijay'agar koi ni maana to.

Uday'aise keise ni maanege,ni maanege to meri dhadkne ruk jayegi.
Manyata'dhadkno ko rukne kaun dega...
Uday'kisi ko paana h.
Akash'na mila to.
Uday'jo chiz maangne se ni milti tb to wo pkka mera h or use paane k lye maskat krni pdegi...

Jagat'chipkali naraj mt ho mere bhai ka mujhse waada h.
Jb khud shadi krege us din merei bi...
Jay smile.

Akash'uday ek bat bolu manyata or tere lye.
Jagat'abe soch smjh k boliyo.
Bol.
Akash'wo uday manyata ko dekh k lgta h jeise 2dil h or dhadkan ek..
Uday love hr so much.

Manyata'haww.
Main bi bhoot pyar krti hu isse shayed ise bi ni pta.
Uday'ha ni to.
Ruko main aata h.
Chal manyata chat pe.

Jagat'ek min.
Bhai kya khel k aaoge.
Uday uske kaan me kissi-2 kheluga.
Jagat'main bi kheluga.
Uday'apni wali k 7th.
Chal ja.

Wo manyata ka hath pkad k chat pe le jata h..
Uday'or g btao kya kr skte h.
Manyata nervous'oye akele h hm yha,chad mujhe
Chal niche.
He again pic hr hand,'ni,hmein aapke 7th kuch tym gujrana tha akele me.
Manyata janbujh k apna hath leave krti h'ni na chal niche.
Uday guse'tu ja main ni aata.
Or wo dur khada hojata h.
Manyata realize ki maine glt kiya wo phr bck hug krti h use'sry g.
Uday silent.
Manyata'ab jyada bhaav mt kha sry na.
Uday wha se jane lgta h,manyata apni chunni uske gle me dalti h,or apni trf khichti h.
Manyata'ye naraj wraj ki harquite to meri h,tu kb se.

Uday'haayee kudi,tere liye main kuch bi kr jauga...
Love u.
Manyata smile nd sudden wo uday k chick pe kiss krke bhaag jati h nd said'property apne nam kr phle tb pura haq milega..
Ha ni to.

Jagat'pinky ek bat bta tune mujhe purpose kiya h na.
Jay'koi shaq
Jagat'ha
Jay'kyn?
Jagat'tu kisy kisy ni khleti..
Jay'mujhe khelna ni aata..
Jagat use chick pe kiss krta h...
Jay smile'wo bi use chick pe kis krti h.

Manyata dekhti h wo sb.
Nd she thout'mujhe uday ne to kis kiya ni,main bi kis krwauga use.

Wo abi ye sb soch ri h or uday piche se aake use hug krta h
Nd wo bi use kis krta h.
Uday'man to tera bi Bi machlta h pr chal koi ni aaj itne se kam chla.
Hm to srf tere h..

Jagat'bhai,ye game nam bde mst hote h or usse bi mst khelne me..
Jay'jagat jao yha se rat ho gai h,akash bi chala gya h.
Uday'raato me hi to pyar jwan hota h.

Manyata'aacha,
Chup chap jao yha se wrna aisi jwani nikalungi ki budhapa kb ayega pta ni chalega.
Ha ni to.

Uday'chal bhai,milte h kal colage me..
Ha ni to.

In nxt mrng.

Gr'aaj clge se jaldi aajana,unanti ka rishta pkka krna h.

Akash'mere se.
Gr'or unanti beta tum akash se dur rhogi..

Akash'worid'pr kyn?
Jagat'hy bhagwan bimari h tujhe...

Akash'kya?kaun si?
Uday'AIDS

Gr'kya?
Maya'kya?
Ds'tum dono kyn chikh rhe ho?
Tum 2no thik ho.

Akash'ye kb hua?
Ni uncle g maine to abi check bi ni krwaya..
Gr'bttmeez,uday jagat tumhein keise pta is AIDS H.

Uday'wo to hmein kb se pta h.
Jagat'ha isme itna darne ki kya bat h.
Akash'mujhe bimari h or mujhe hi ni pta.
Ni.

Uday'tune hi to btaya tha.
Akash'kya btaya tha,jante bi ho aids kya hota h?
Uday'ha
Jagat'sun.
Uday'A-akash..
Jagat'I-love
Uday'D-deeply
Jagat'S-sexy unanti...

Dono bolte h.
In shrt..
AIDS'AKASH LOVE DEEPLY SEXYUNANTI..

Both laughng..

All shocked nervous...

Gr'bde bttmeez h maya tere ye bache...
Maya'ye such me aapke hi bache h.
Ds'ha ha ye tum dono k hi bache h...

Akash'kamino.
Jan hi nikal di.

Uday'saala aise sawal mt kiya kr wrna ek din hm kuch bolege bi ni or pagal hojayega.

Tere dost bi to bde sharrif h..

Akash'uncle g ye.
Gr'gadhe h.
Beta akash tum yhi rho aaj,parents aane wale h tumhare..

Uday'ha beta ruk tu,khatir dari kr.
Hm chalte h.
Unanti beta khayal rkhiyo,hm jaldi ayenge...

Akash'uday tum ruk ni skte ho kya?
Uday'mujhe aids ni lena.
Jagat'Charcterles boy..
Uday'ni yar,bat ye h na ki meri heartbeat to kisi or k pas h...
Chal bye.
Hm jaldi ayenge.
Bye...

Continuos

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Hillarious update Pari.🤣 🤣 🤣 My condition like this after reading the whole update.🤣
Great update Pari, so funny.😆
Poor Akash.😆 Loved UV n Jagay muahh.😉
Thanks for the regular n awesome updates Pari, I loved it.😛
Great job.👍🏼
Love u n hugs for you.🤗 🤗
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lovd it pari it was gr8 please upd8 soon...👏
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Lovely update Pari👍🏼

great going🤗

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Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-) Part-50

Maninde(akash father)
'o g hmein unanti pasnd h akash k lye.
Gr'g hmein bi.

Maninder'weise uday jagat kha h?
Ds'main isliye to boar ho ri hu.
Maya'g wo clge gye h.
Gr'aacha h ni h,wrna ab to shadi pkki krte ya tudwa dete.

Maninder laugh'kuch bi khiye,uday jagat h bde sharif.

Akash dhire se'sharif.
Bhoot. Kamine h ek nu. K.

Maninder'hm apni bhu unanti ko hi bnayege...
Gr'or kya chahiye hmein,hmari beti ek khushal ghr me ja ri h.
Maninder'lekin hmari ek shart h.
Gr'g khiye.
Manindr'shadi hm apne pind panjab se krwana chahte h.
Gr'o g ye to main bi chahta tha.
Manjur h,

Akash lookd unanti or wink krta h..
Unanti blushng...

Ds'lekin in sb ka clge.
Gr'pdhlikh k kaun sa job krege.
Maya'ha ye bi shi crore ki daulat h.
Gr'inki ni.
Ds'ni to tera baap to jeise tha hi ni.

Uday jagat cum
'kya?papag bina dadag k keise?
Maya'uday.
Uday'ok maa chup.
Shasiyakal uncle g,bde khushh lg rhe ho..
Manindar'ha beta akash tera jija bngya.
Jagat'o teri rishta pkka.
Arey wah.
Unanti hy hmari jan.

Uday'shadi kha hogi?
Gr'mandap me.

Sb hste h.
Uday jagat ko chodke.
Jagat'lakh baari kha h mt hsaya kro,hsi ni aati.
Uday'jgh puch rhe h kha hogi shadi?
Hmein bi pta h mandap me hogi,hwa me to hogi ni shadi.

Again al laugh.
Ds'punjab me.
Uday'kyn?dadi
Gr'kya problem h?
Jagat'pr yha kyn ni?
Akash'plz na yar.
Uday'dadi.
Aap to jante ho na.
Jagat'hm clge se tour pe ja rhe h..

Gr'kya kb?
Uday'zindgi bhar k lye ni ja rhe h 2din me aajayege...

Akash'hm bi chalenge.
Maya'ni aap Dono me se koi ni jayega.
Na tum na unanti.

Akash shout'kyn?
Manindar shout'idhar aake chilana sikh gya tu.
Uday'bttmeez
Jagat'sharm to jeise bech k aaya h.

Akash chup...

Gr'do din me aajana,shadi ki taiyari krni h..
Uday'yes dad,jrur.

Jagat'dadi,in 2dino me hmari shadi ki bi bat krlena...
Ds'ha beta jrur..
Lekin main akeli.
Uday'nly bat krna,hm jb aajayenge tb dekhne chalege.

Ds'phr,thik h..

Manyata'maa,hm clge ki trf se 2din k tour pe ja rhe h..
Br'ni ja skte.
Jay'kyn?
Br'kal hi to rishta aaya tha.
Vijay'ha jeise ki sb kuch fix krdiya.
Br'ni,picnic ni jana.
Manyata'hm puch ni rhe h,bta rhe.
Aap bs paise dedena..
Br'mere pas ni h...
Komal'mere pas h.
Lelena.
Br'lekin.
Komal'khud to kuch kiya ni,inko to apni zindgi jeene do..
Manyata'thanku maa.
Jay'maa ko honeymoon pe leke ni gye.
Manyata'punjab me ghuma rhe the..
Vijay'or ghumte-2 hm ho gye.
Br'ghr pe huye the tum.
All laugh...

Komal'jao apni packng kro.
Manyata'hm apni pckng kyn kre?
Saaman ki pckng hogi na...
Again al laugh..

Wo chale jate h...

Uday'dadi tbiyet thik ni h.
Jagat'bhai tujhe to fever h..
Ds'hy bhagwan.
Ye keise?
Uday ko vomet jeisa lgta h,wo washrum me bhagta h..
Jagat worid'dadi dr.
K pas chalo.
Akash'dwai leke aao.
Ds akash ka phone leti h.
Akash'dadi,km bat
Unanti'kyn?
Wo jyada bat kregi.
Akash'aacha thik h..

Ds calng manyata
'hello
Ds'hello manyata beta.
Manyata'dadi,hm tour pe ja rhe h...
Ds'ha beta pr uday ko
Suddn uday aata h nd phone leleta h'ha mendaki aache se pckng kr liyo..
Smjhi,bs akash ka bl.
Lutwana tha,isliye Cal kiya.
Manyata'uday tum thik to ho...
Uday'ha mujhe kya hoga..
Chl pckng kr rat ko niklna h..
Manyata'thik h..

Cal cut.
Uday'kya krti ho dadi?wo preshan ho jayegi,or meri care krne ki chaker me wo bi boar.
Wo khush h.

Or main thik hu..
Don't wory...

Akash'uday tujhe high fever ho gya h,aankhe bi lal h.
Jagat sad'bhai ye lo dwai.
Uday'abe jagat jb tk tu naugty ni bnega or tbiyet khraab hogi meri.
Dwai khake thik hojauga..

Ds'jruri clge me bheega hoga..
Unanti'ha dadi swimming krte rhte h.
Akash'yha nahana ni h,wha nahata h. Jagat'akash,km bol,taange tod dunga.
Tu to yhi se nhake jata phr bi wha nahata h or 2 ldkiyo k 7th.
Unanti'kya?
Ldkiyo k 7th.
Akash dar k'main kb nhata hu.
Uday'kamine tu chipk-2 k nahata h.
Akash'ni unanti ye jhuth bol rhe h,mujhe to nahane se dar lgta h.

Ds'dar lgta h mtlb..
Jagat uday'jhuth bol rha h,ye pdhne ni,nhane jata h.

Akash'arey main to yha roj nhake ni jata,roj washrum me paani girak aa jata hu,sbko lgta h nhaliya.
Phr wha kyn?

Uday'yhi bulwana tha tujhse.
Qki hmein pta tha tu ni nahta.
Ganda.
Unanti'roj nhane ki aadat dal lo,wrna shadi krne ka iraada chod do...
Ha ni to..

Akash'thik h..
Uday hme bi le chal na tour pe...

Jagat'ni
Unanti'plz bhai.
Jagat'ni unanti maa bi ni manegi.
Ds'rhne de unanti mujhe to trust ni ho rha h ki ye mere pote h.

Uday smile weekly mood'chal ja akash unanti pckng kro.
Akash'papag se to puch lo.
Ds'ja tu taiyari kr..
Wo inka kam h.

Both happy..

Manyata'kuch thik ni h...
Jay'kya hua di?
Manyata'uday ki awaaz uski tbiyet thik ni h.
Vijay'lekin tujhe keise pta?
Tara'ab tumhari tbiyet khraab hogi to mujhe pta chal jayega na,manyata preshan mt ho.

Manyata worid'tum pckng kro 7bje tk niklna bi h,main tb tk uday k ghr se aati hu...
Jay'main bi chalu.
Manyata'ha chal.
Tara.
Tara'ha main pckng krdungi.
Vijay'jaldi aana bhais...

Ds'uday beta ye garm dudh pile,aacha lgega..
Uday kidng behaviour'ni dadi,plz kuch ni kha skta,kdwa lg rha h.

Jagat'bhai,tour pe kbi or chalege,tbiyet thik ni h aapki.

Jay'kya ho gya?
Akash'o teri tum dono.
Jay'di ne ghr sir pe utha rkha tha,ki uday ko kuch to hua h..
Roti roti yha phuchi h.

Manyata'tour cancel,uday u r nt wel.
Uday'i m wel.
Manyata'apni aankhe dekhi h lal ho gai h.
Uday'wo to tumhein dekh k niyat bigad jati h.
Ds'of oh tu ye haldi wala dudh to peele aram milega.
Jagat'bhai pee lo na.
Akash'vomtng bi ho gai thi.
Manyata'kya?
Dadi dudh ka glas do,wo uday ko zbrdasti pila deti h..
Uday'chii.
Ganda.
Manyata'kya ganda?
Or khyal rkhna pdega tumhara ab.
Jagat'kyn?
Manyata'vomtng hui h.
Ds'to
Akash'to baby bi to save rhna chahiye.
Jagat'kamine teri maa se puchna pdega,teri maa ne paida kiya h tere baap ne paida kiya h.
Jay'vomtng to tbi hoti h na.
Uday'aacha,precaution lake do mujhe.
Manyata'ek paida krke dikha hi de phle,agli bar precaution leliyo.

Ds'aisi atrangi baatein to tumhare 7th hi ho skti h.

Uday'main thik hu,tum jaldi phuch jana bus na chut jaye.

Manyata hold hm hand'r u al ryt na.
Uday kissd hr hnd'i m fyn.
Chalo jao..

Jay'ok,bs me hmari seat rok lena.
Jaga'h hi kitni tu meri goad me Beith jaiyo..
Uday lookd hr'tu to dil me beithi hui h...
Don't wory..

Wo chali jati h...

Kuch deir bad uday jagat unanti akash tour k lye niklte h.
Maninder'akash unanti tum kha chal diye?
Uday'wo hme chodne ja rhe h.
Gr'aacha tym pe aajana.
Uday jagat wha koi shatani ni,uday apna khyal rkhna.
Jagat beta tum bi apna khyal rkhna.

Ds'bye beta.
2 days i mis u.

Me 2 dadi.
Bye every1.

Wo chale jate h.

Manyata jay vijay tara bi niklte h.
Br'sb apna khyal rkhna,or kisi se ldne ki jrurt ni.
Vijay'hm kya pagl h jo bewajh ldege.

Komal'bs,jate tym ldai ni,chalo aaram se sb jao..

Manyata'maa,tara clge me ni pdhti pr ye ghr me akeli boar ho jayegi.
Komal'hmm khayal rkhna apna...

Bye.
Wo bi chale jate h..

After Symtym
Wo sb ek jgh milte h.
Manyata check uday's fever'ab better h.

Uday'akash phone de.
Akash'tumne kasam khai thi mera phone ni loge...
Jagat'kiski kasam khai thi?
Akash'wo to pta ni.
Uday'jb kisi ki kasam khayenge tb mt diyo,tour pe jana h to de wrna ghr ja.
Akash phone dedeta h.

Uday calng gr
'hello dad,unanti akash bi hmare 7th ja rhe h,gaari driver leke aajayega.
Bye.
Cal cut..

Gr'ye bache bi na bat ni smjhte.
Manindar'koi ni ek bar shadi se phle ghum lena do..

Uday'pkad apna phone.
Jagat'ni kta jayda bl.
Chinta mt kr.

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gr8 update da...nw can't wait to read the tour sequence...update soon pari
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Lovely update Pari...Uday Jagat ki jodi to bemisal hai..bhai ho to aise...muze Akash ka character bahut pasand aaya wo bahut sweet hai...
Waiting for next dhamakedar chapter

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