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@Singularity

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

WOW!👏 Wonderfully written!! Great description of her feelings! Thanks a lot 4 the PM.🤗 How could I have not been interested?

Update the next part soon! Eagerly waiting 4 it!

P.S Your title almost "KILLED" me!!🤢

Edited by FireNIce - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

SIRF 2 PARTS MEIN HUMMESE KISIKA BHI DIL NAHI BHAREGA...HAVE TO UPDATE...SAMJHI TU????

NOW DO I STILL NEED TO SAY THAT IT WAS MIND-BLOWING!!!!NOW ILL BE VISITING THE FORUM EVERY HOUR TO CHCK WHETHER YUO'VE UPDATED OR NOT,SO UBETTER HURRY UP ADDIE!!!

LOTS AND LOTS OF LOVE...oyshee :):):)

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

good job adden amazing post 👍🏼now waiting for next part 😊

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Oh! my god this is amazing...I finally had the time to come back to forum and actually browse after a very long time and i came across this delight. this is a great piece of writing. all the guilt and hurt in M is potrayed so well. i jus hope she literally did kill UV...please continue

Blues

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Niha

@-Niha-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

amazing OS adden
loved it
nice start
thnx 4 pm :) x

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hi Addi, I have no words to tell u how much I love this OS.😊

How beautifully you describe Manyata's emotions & her pain.

Day by day, I'm falling in love with your writing.

Lovelyl OS. Pls update next part of this OS.I'll be waiting.

You are a great writer. you describe all the emotions so beautifully in your writing.⭐️

Thanking you.👏👏👏

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Inkpen4877

@Inkpen4877

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

I love it Add! I hope you continue soon!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

loved the os adden but for some reason all i do id pity her loved it continue soon

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@Being-Human

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

i like dit adden plz do continue and ya plz do pm me when u post it plz thank you

She always comes in my dreams and ever since one and half year I have had the same dream, "Manyata beta, don't give up, the day you'll give up, I'll die" ' she hugs me and then leaves.

i was going to cry after reading this lines

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Mahibeejay

@Mahibeejay

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Loved it yarr...it's so emitional... I was crying when manyata was talking abt DS...but it is nice to read such a lovely post... Please update soon dear and if possible please PM me...thanks

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