Unwanted Manveer FF Thread 1 Part 37 pg145 - Page 5

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Part 3

Everyone in the royal family was eating, besides Komal

Uday- Komal Aunty kahaann hai

Brij- aapneh kamreh mein hai unkah maan nahiye hai khannah kaneh kah

Uday- hum dekhteh hai

Uday went to Komals room

Uday- Komal Aunty aap please khannah kalijeh

Komal- Hum kaise kasakteh hamaari Manyata neh kuch nahiye kaya

Uday- Komal Aunty aap Manyata ki fikar maat kijiye abhi toh bahuth zid kar rahiye dekhiye thodi dher mein woh khalenghi aap aiyeh hamara saat

Komal- Beta hum Manyata ko aapneh hatoh seh khaanah khaleghe

Uday- Lekin aapko toh patah hai woh kaisi harkateh kar rahiye jabseh aiyi humhe baat karneh ka bhi mokah nahiye diya

Komal- Beta patha hai lekin agar hum ausekeh nazariye seh dekhe toh woh sahiye hai uneh kuch bhi patha nahiye hai keh woh kaise humseh alag hogayi hum uneh khud bateghe

Uday- aap fikar maat kijiye hum sab Manyata seh baat karenghe hai abhi aap chaliye niche.. Aur haan J aur Vijay baana arahaye hai agar aapko aise dekhenghe uneh acha nahiye lagegha... Niche chalteh hai

They go downstairs

Just then J and Vijay came

J/Vijay- ghama khani everyone

Every1- ghama khani

J- Mama (she hugged Komal)

Komal- J beta hum bahuth khush hai aaj hamaari donah betiya hamare pass

J- Haan Mama hum bhi bahuth khush hai keh hamari bhari behen Manyata Jiji agayi hai

Vijay- Haan Mamisa Jabseh hum dono neh suno keh Manyata agayi hai humari khushi kah tikanah he nahiye hai... J toh khushi seh jump mar rahiye thi Manyata Jiji agayi Manyata Jiji agayi loge humhe dekh reh teh bechareh keh reh hoghe kaisi paagal ladki hai I tell you (laughing)

Brij- aap toh janteh hai Vijay beta hamaari J kaisi hai

Vijay- hum jante hai Mamasa hum dono neh aapko bahuth miss kiya

J- Yes Dad (she hugged him) I missed you

Brij- Me too beta

Rajmata- J beta kaisi hai aap

J- hum ache hai Dadisab aap kaisi hai

Rajmata- Hum bahuth khush hai beta aaj hamarah parivar poorah huwa

J- Nahiye Dadisab abhi nahiye poorah hua humhe toh choteh nieces aur nephew chahiye tabhi hamara parivar poora hogha jo humhe Maasisa bhulaye kyun Jiju sa

Everyone laughed poor Uday was blushing

Vijay- Ab bas bhi kijiyeh bechare Uday bana sharmareh hai

Uday- Vijay bana hum nahiye sharmareh ab bas kijiye (Interrupted)

J- Jiju sa aise kaise bas kareh abhi toh humhe mauka mileh hai aap ko pareshaan karneh ka (she laughed)

Uday- J ab bas bhi karo warnah hum sab ko bathadenghe aapka top secret (whispered) shall I tell about Prince Arjun

J- (Whispered) No Jiju sa sorry please don't tell anyone

Rajmata- Ab bahuth maazak hogaya J aur Vijay beta aap apneh kamreh mein jayei aur araam kijiye

J- Dadisab mein toh bilkul tired nahiye hoon mujhe jald seh jald meri Manyata Jiji seh milnah hai

Rajmata- Baad mein beta abhi aap jayee aapki ki Jiji bhi araam kar rahiye hai

J- Ji Dadisab

J and Vijay go to their rooms

Rajmata- Hum kal subha he Manyata seh baat karteh hai aur hum auseh sari sachai bateghe aur humneh une logo ko bhi message deh diya hai ab hamari Manyata hamare paas hai.

Brij- Jee Maasaheb agar Manyata neh hamaari baat nahiye maani toh

Komal- Maasaheb hamari bachi bahuth tadap rahiye hoghi aisi haalat mein

Rajmata- Aap chintha maat kijiyeh humhe maulam hai unhe kaisa manana hai, aap donah hum par bharosah rakhi hai ab jayeeh apneh kamreh mein aur haan Uday beta bahuth raat hogayi aap aaj yahaan roke jayee mausam bhi acha nahiye hai bahar lagta hai toofan aneh walah hai

Uday- Jee Dadisab

It's 3am now

Uday couldn't sleep he was worried for Manyata he had tied her to the chair it had been hours, he couldn't even hear any screaming or crying noises he decided to go and check Manyata's room.

He opened the door and went inside Manyata was unconscious he quickly untied her and called the Doctor.

Uday- Doctor Uncle Manyata tike toh hai

Doctor- Haan beta woh isneh kuch kaya nahiye haina she's very weak humneh injection deh diya kuch ghantoh mein ineh hush ajaygha aap chintha maat kijiye

Uday- Thank you Doctor Uncle

Doctor- Your most welcome beta

Uday decided to stay with Manyata he sat on the floor holding her hand.

Uday- Manyata aap janthi nahiye hum aapseh bahuth pyaar karthe hai aur hum aapko kaunah nahiye chahateh jaldi seh tike hojayi

The next day we see Manyata awake and she see's someone holding her hand and sleeping on the floor.

Manya- What the hell is he doing here (she removed his hand from hers) disgusting this dumb idiot

She got out of bed and ran downstairs she opened the front door and went outside, she was trying to jump the gates just then someone holded her arm and got her down.

Uday- Where do you think you're going Princess?

Manya- I told you 1000 times I am no princess my name is MANYA M.A.N.Y.A MANYA so stop calling me princess… I want to go home it's been 1 whole day I been here 2^nd day today for god sake will anyone tell me what is going on? Why can't I leave this horrible palace and go home… I am a British citizen the minute the embassy find out they will arrest you all and you will rot in jail

Uday- Come on Princess if I go jail who's going to look after you everyone is going to say Princess Manyata sent her to be husband Prince Udayveer to jail. That's not fair Princess (Interrupted)

Manya- I tell you what's not fair being kidnapped from your country, being away from your mom and dad, not getting to work on your first day. The only dream I ever had was to be a successful lawyer and to make my mom and dad proud. So why am I here my mom and dad must be really worried, I just want to go home please.

Uday- I am sorry princess you can't go home because you are already at home Devgar is your home

Manya- Shut up I will leave this horrible Devgar you watch me now what I do

Uday- Don't worry Princess my eyes are always on you 24/7, for now lets go inside

Manya- I will not

Uday- Ok then as usual I will have to force you trust me I don't like dragging you to your own kingdom, but you leave me no choice

He dragged her back to the kingdom

Manya- Leave me you dog

loved it...and loved jay and uday convo...that was sweet...update soon...and thanks for the PM...loved it...

Nice update!! Continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:)

great update!!