Unwanted Manveer FF Thread 1 Part 37 pg145 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Niha-

loved the update, rly hate that guy now. he is distusting. poor uday, and manyata. both were injure :( at least their save now. hope they do something about that evil guy, he makes me so mad right now. anywayz beautiful update, thanks for the PM and keep rocking girl :)

Thanks Niha😃 yep Raghubeer😆 it sok ur welcome😊 I will update 2mrw insh allah 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏thanks..great job.awesome.hate that raghuveer...loved it...👏👏

Thanks😃 me 2 hate him😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it! amazing action packed update!

Thanks😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shals9

Superb update! Great work!


YEAY!! Manyata jealous! Pls update soon and thanks for the pm.

Thanks😃 I will do insh allah 2mrw... its ok ur welcome😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swini01

Nice one Anam.Cont soon n thanks for the pm.

Thanks😃 its ok ur welcome... I will update 2mrw insh allah😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 15

Manyata was fuming in anger

Manyata- LEAVE UDAY ALONE SHANAYA!!!!!!!

Shanaya got off Uday

Shanaya- Manyata darling what is your problem? UV is my boyfriend, so if I don't be with him who will? You now let's not go there you're so rude, I thought the door was locked you interrupted us, when will you learn to knock the door first

Manyata- (Angrily) Look Shanaya you can be with Uday as much as you want like I care, just don't hug him right now he isn't well he needs rest. Now move out the way (she pushed her out the way) right Uday what is this? What was the need to hit Raghubeer so much? Look at the state of you. What if something had happened to you? What would of happened to me?

Uday- princess calm down I'm fine come on that Raghubeer deserved it, I am fine nothing happened to me I will be home in 2 day s or so. Princess don't worry (interrupted)

Shanaya- UV don't talk too much you need full rest, Manyata I think you should leave now

Manyata- (Angrily) I'm going ok... thank god your ok otherwise everyone would of blamed me, Uday take care of yourself ok get well soon, I will come again and see you tomorrow... by the way Shanaya churail whatever that means you are coming too

Uday started laughing

Uday- princess you just called Shanaya a witch

Shanaya- UV stop laughing

Manyata- Right now let's go Shanaya

Shanaya- Manyata let me at least say bye so like can you give us some space, we need some privacy

Manyata- Sure Shanaya 5 minutes. Bye Uday

Uday- Bye Manyata

Manyata banged the door when she left

Shanaya and Uday couldn't stop laughing

Shanaya- Manyata is in a bad mood

Uday- I know but I'm still confused

Shanaya- UV darling don't be confused wait and watch what happens next (she kissed him on cheek) bye I love you

Uday- Me too

They both laughed

Manyata- J you're so right this Shanaya is such a witch

J- I told you Jiji since she has come she is after my Jiju sa

Vijay- your absolutely right this Shanaya is too much I tell you we need to do something about her

Raz- Where's Shanaya?

Manyata- Bro she won't get out the room poor Uday needs rest she is like disturbing him

Raz- I will go get her Viks the drivers come you take these lot to the car, I will bring Shanaya

Viks- ok Bro

Raz- Shanaya we need to go now

Uday- guys take care of Manyata

Raz/Shanaya- we will do don't worry you take care of yourself

Shanaya- UV don't forget what I told you

Uday- I wont

Now we see everyone in palace Raz had explained what had happened.

Komal- Manyata beta aap tike to hai

Manyata- Haan Ma I'm fine.. Mama can I sleep in your room today please

Shaina- ofcourse you can

Komal- bete aiyi khaana kayi hum apni beti ko apneh haatoh seh khilayghe

Manyata- Ma I am not hungry

Shaina- Manyata stop being stubborn come on sit down

Shaina and Komal forcefully made Manyata eat

Raz- good girl now go to sleep early ok you need rest I will see you in the morning I'm going to my room, good night

Manyata- Good night Bro

Shaina- Beta when you want to sleep come to my room

Manyata- ok Mama

Shaina and all the elders leave to their room

Now we see J, Vijay,Viks and Shanaya talking

Shanaya- I just phoned UV he's going sleep now so gave him his good night kiss

Manyata- Shanaya please keep the details to yourself

J- you are so shameless Shanaya you do know that Jiji and Jiju sa are engaged

Shanaya- let me make one thing clear your Jiji which is Manyata doesn't love UV, so he's single

Vijay- stop arguing ok J no point

Manyata- yeah I am not going to argue with you Shanaya you are right I don't love Uday so you can do whatever you want now excuse me (she went upstairs)

J- Shanaya you made my Jiji upset

Shanaya couldn't stop laughing

Vijay- why are you laughing I didn't even say a joke

Shanaya- you guys are so dumb come on do you really think I will go after my best friend's fianc

J- yeah girls like you would

Vijay- agree with J anyone intentions can change seeing a handsome prince

Shanaya- no I am not after UV. I'm trying to help UV Manyata might realise her feeling for him, if she see's UV with someone else she might fix up and admit her feelings.

J- so all this is a plan

Shanaya- yes it's all my plan

Vijay- in that case I think your plan is working a little Manyata is kinda jealous and angry

Shanaya- I know now wait and watch what happens next

J- ok Shanaya you best not change your mind

Shanaya- I won't don't worry too much drama for one day for now I'm going sleep good night

V/J- goodnight

Now we see Uday in hospital he was awake

Uday- (to himself) princess hum bahuth jald aapko apneh pyaar ka izehaar karaeghe, aap ek baar Yuvrani ban jaye aur phir hum aapko hamaari Maharani banaghe. You might not love me but you care about me a lot and I'm sure one day you will fall in love me

Manyata was asleep in Shaina room it was 3am.

Manyata- Ahhh (Manyata was crying badly)

Shaina woke up

Shaina- Manyata what happened? Beta have some water

Manyata- Mama I saw him again he's here, he's here

Shaina- no one is here (she gave her water) beta please stop thinking about it just a bad dream ok, don't worry no one is coming

Manyata- but Mama (interrupted)

Shaina- you go to sleep I'm awake no one is coming ok

Shaina convinced Manyata to sleep

The next day we see everyone at the breakfast table

J- where is Jiji?

Shaina- in the kitchen

Komal- Kyun nashtha lago hua hai kitchen mein kya kar rahiye

J- hum dekteh hai

Manyata was in the kitchen preparing breakfast for UV

J- Jiji what you making? It smells so nice

Manyata- Breakfast, French toast, hash browns, pancakes, just getting the fruits now, I'm going to hospital to see Uday

J- Jiji so much food for breakfast lucky Jiju sa

Manyata- J it's loads some for you as well you eat I'm going now, you coming

J- no jiji you go I'm going to eat the breakfast you made

Manyata- ok I will serve everyone then I'm going

Servant- Rajkumari sa humhe dijiyeh

Manyata- No I made it so I will serve it

Manyata served everyone breakfast

Manyata- I hope you guys enjoy breakfast I'm going hospital to see Uday I made breakfast for him, I will be back later. Don't worry I'm taking security and driver

Komal- tike hai jayee

Shaina- ok beta take care of yourself

Manyata- I will bye

Now we see Manyata in hospital

Manyata- good morning Uday, how are you?

Uday- good morning princess, I'm fine much better than before I'm going to be discharged in the afternoon

Manyata- (happily) that's great I brought breakfast for you I made it myself I hope you like

Uday- princess why did you make me breakfast? You're a princess (interrupted)

Manyata- Uday I made breakfast for you to say thank you for what you did for me, I really appreciate it. Regarding breakfast I have lived alone in university so I can cook breakfast ok, see I use to make breakfast, then Raz bro and bhabhi Nishimah use to make lunch, and then Viks and Shanaya dinner. So we all had turns so I can cook ok now enough talking now eat it and tell how it is, I will cut some fruits for you.

Uday ate breakfast

Manyata- you like it

Uday- (Angrily) princess I don't like it

Manyata-(sadly) what you don't like it?

Uday-(happily) I love it best breakfast ever

Manyata- you scared me then everyone loves my breakfast thank you

Uday- I should be saying thank you I think I should stay in hospital for couple more days at least you will come see me and have breakfast together

Manyata- Uday you need to come home as soon as possible remember you promised me you will help me with my Yuvrani training its beginning soon

Uday- I know Princess I will be home soon

Manyata- now eat fruits I will go and get your medicine

Uday- ok princess

Manyata- here's your medicines

Uday had medicine

Uday- It's yuck

Manyata- I know tell me about medicine are disgusting remember that day you made me have injection, trust me medicine is better than injection

Uday- princess I don't mind both

Manyata- I know you don't end of the day you are rajwade you know your famous line I am Yuvraj (she laughed)

Uday- (he laughed) princess if yuvraj you are going to become yuvrani your highness, then we will see your attitude.

Manyata- I won't have that attitude ok

Uday- princess, how's Shanaya?

Manyata- (angrily) Shanaya the beauty queen is asleep any message for her

Uday- no message

Manyata- oh yeah in the evening we will be coming jaigar to see you

Uday- that's ok then I will meet Shanaya then

Manyata- Yeah... Uday I'm going to go home now I will see you later

Uday- bye princess actually I have message for Shanaya tell her I said hi and I miss her

Manyata- I will tell the witch anything else

Uday- yh I love her

Manyata- ok anything else

Uday- no that's it bye princess

PRECAP- MANYATA VISITS UDAY IN JAIGAR

I hope you guys like the part I had no time to proofread it, im in a hurry right now got loads to do gta go and cook now I will PM everyone later

Edited by Anam Ali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOw Anam...just wow...👏.!!!! I loved the way Manyata gets jealous of Shanaya...lol😆 Update asap...!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was really nice please make manyata also have a boyfriend just to make uday jealous please

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