manveer SS- Love feeling:give new birth parts-3rd to50th(page-1 to 58) - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

462

Views

94.7k

Users

31

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

LadySosostris thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Hey Pari yaar abhi main kafi better hoon.n yaar tum kya ho?din din tumhara ss itna romantic,cute aur funny hota ja raha hai.i mean its just awsome yaar.n the kiss uff yaar kiss kiss.ok sry yaar manveer k time main out of control ho jati ho.anyways awesome yaar.cont soon n thanks for the pm.aur thanks yaar mujhe methe fruit(ss)ki liye jada wait bhi nahi karna para.love u so much sweetheart.
fia21 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Loved it. It was so cute and utterly romantic 😍
Thanks for the PM. Update the next part soon!
sirjee thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#83
how cute...specially da last lines...n dat dupatta wala scene...its awsum...plzz continue soon...
-JEHAN- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awww...that was nice i like it...
akshi_t thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#85
hey m back...😛...m soo sry fr commenting after such a long time but was pretty busy...anyways coming to ur updates...m totally loving M's stay at UV's house...she should stay there fr ever 😆...loved wen UV apologized to M fr the 2nd time 😆...oh and the bedroom scene was awesome and too cute...omg wen UV tried to scare M 🤣...and the manager scene...lol...the moment he tried to hold M's hand i knew he was going to be dead 😆...and wen the manager told UV maine to uska hat bhi pakad liya 🤣...usi waqt usne apni shamat bulali 😆...i can't believe the party's come up so soon...nw she'll go bck to her home...😔...maybe nw she'll realize tht she misses him!! 😍...can't wait fr the next part...update soon dear!! 😊
Shazzie thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Superb update!! Loved it!!

Will M go back once the party is over?? NO!! I really like M staying in Uday's house and then ends up in his bed! ☺️

Pls update soon. Thanks for pm.
rythm... thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-15
Vijay calng manyata.
'manyata bhai,mujhe bi apke 7th party me ana h,j bi ni hogi,hm bi ni rhege boar ho jayenge..'
M:ha vijay bhai,aajana driver se bolke gaadi bhijawa dungi,aap kal party me aajana..
Vb:chalo,thik h..wrna jay ne to mna krdiya tha..
M:aap aajana,main aaj bhut bg hu..kal milte h party me...
Cal cut...
Un:manyata ye dress keisi h,main kal yhi phnugi..
M:bhut achi h...
Un:i m realy exicted 4 2mmrow..mja ayega..hall dekha keisa lga..?
M:bhoot aacha h yar,kitna beautiful tha,wow..
Uday whi manyata k rum se gujrta h wo un dono ki baatein sunne lgta h..
M:pta h unanti,agr meri wish puchi jaye to main apni shadi us hall krwana chahugi...ha ni to..
Un:i wish ki tumhari wish puri ho...
Weise,hall ki sjawat dekh li tumne ya ni..
M:ni,sham ko mtlb tumhare dada k 7th jaugi..
Uday surprise,ki ye itne pyar se bol ri h..
Un:dada k 7th,r u serious?
M:ha,akeli gai,to weise bi unhe piche-2 ana h.
Both launghng
U blushng nd smile krta hua chla jata h...
M:unanti main apne bhai ko party me bula skti hu..
Un:ha,lekin ek bar dada se puch lena...
M:of,oh..thik h..

Manyata uday k rum k bahr khdi hoti h
'sir,aap ander h..
Uday ye itni dur se kaun bol rha h..
'kaun h?
M:sir,main hu manyata aapse kuch bat krni h..
U:ha to ander aajao..
M(thout):ye vamp.itni jaldi bhul gye,mujhe ander ni aana kya kru?
U(thout):oh,ye mam.ander to ayegi ni.
Uday khud hi bahr aajata h
Kya h?
M:a,a,a.sir wo party me main apne bhai ko bula skti hu.?
Manyata use ek chote bache ki trh dekhti h.
U:hmmm..
ha.
Manyata:thanku sir, khush hoti h or chali jati..
U:phr khud ayegi,sham ko sir chale hall dekhne..

Manyata apne rum me'wo file kha h,jisme hall ka pura karcha-paani likha h..wo vamp.mujhse maangega,pura hisaab...
File,shayed drawl me ho..manyata ko file mil jati h..
She z open d file,usme uday ki pic hoti h..
M:ha to ye...sir ki snap keise..she z rememberng ki usne keise sir ki pic file me rkh li thi..
Manyata us pic ko dekhti h'sir aap hste huye bhut aache lgte h,aap jb pyar se bolte h,tb aap bhut decent lgte h..aap jb pyar se dekhte h tb main kho...she z surprized 'manyata ye kya ho gya,kya bol ri h pagli..wo uday ki snap drawl me rkh deti h...

Gr 2 shanti..
'shanti g aaj tk hmne uday ko itna khush ni dekha,jitna in 10dino me dekha..
S:g shaheb,aap shi kh rhe h,manyata k aane se is ghr me hulchl rhti h...baba ko gusse bi km aata h..wo jb bi manyata ko dekhte h tbi unka chahra muskura uthata h..
Gr:shanti g,main apne bete k chahre pe hmesha muskurata hua dekhna chahta h,or apne ghr me ye hulchl bi chahta hu..
S:bhagwan kre apki bat such ho...
Gr:mujhe apne bhagwan pe bharosa h...

Uday manyata nd unanti hall jate h...
M:unanti tum hall dekhogi na,to bhut khush ho jaugi...
Un:main ja chuki hu,manyata meri ek frnd ki mariage thi usme gai thi..bs farq ye hoga ki..wo indian traditional party thi or ab international..isliye to i m vry exicted..
M:meri to ye zindgi ki phli bdi party h..
U:nd i hope ki wo international party jeisi ho..
M nd unanti make a nauty face...

Wo hall phuchte h...
U:chle..
M nd unanti:hmmm..
M dhire se 'ye na sir ko lana hi ni chahiye tha'boar kr rhey h!!
Un:shi kh ri ho..

U:maneger i hope sb taiyar ho..
M:yes sir..sb ready h..chaliye..hm door open krte h..
Nd manyata mam.hmene aapka idea bi apnaya h...
Chaliye...

Wo 3no khade hote h,door open hota h,lights of hoti h..

Wo 3no nter krte h hall me..
Maneger ekdum se bolta h lights on
'pura hall,saj k taiyar h..,blinking bulbs,colourful lights,roses boundiries decorative etc..totaly vry beautiful decorative...
Un:wow,manyata mindblwng..kal mja ane wala h..
U:weldone manyata..ye such me bhut khubsurat h bilkul tumhari...
Manyata sudden uday ko dekhti h..
Tumhari...kya sir..
U:a,a,a mera mtlb tumhari jeisi soch h weisi...
M:ab chalo,wrna meri najr khud lg jayegi,maneger g aap ye bnd krdijiye,ab kal hi open hoga ye door.ha ni to..
U:oh,ye main ise..sir main hu oder ye chla ri h...
Un:dada,manyata bi kal k agle din wo chali jayegi,chalo kisi coffee kafe chalte h..
Uday wo bat soch k udas ho jata h...'ha chalo..mujhe koi problem ni h...
Un:chle manyata...
M:ha jrur...
Wo 3no coffee shop phuchte h...
U:tum 3no chalo,main thodi deir me aata hu..
Un:bhai kha ja rhe ho?
U:bs main aa rha hu.chalo tum dono jao..
Uday chala jata h...

Wo dono kafe me jate h,wha jay nd jagat bi h...
M:unanti hm us table pe...wo ek dum se jay ko dekhti h,lekin jagat ka chahra ni dikh rha h..'unanti tum beitho,main aati hu ek min.'
Manyata calng jay
'jay tum kha ho?
J:di maine apni ek frnd k 7th bahr aai hu kya hua?
M:j mujhse jhuth mt bol,kiske 7th beithi h kafe me.
J dar k idhr-udhr dekhne lgti h..
Wo manyata ko dekh leti h,or manyata guse me use dekh ri hoti h...
J:jagat main chalti hu,kal tumhari party me milte h.
Jagat:bt hua kya?
J:kuch ni bye...

M:j ruk,kaun h wo?kiske 7th beithi thi,or mujhse jhuth kyn bol ri thi.?
J:di,wo mera dost tha,main dar gai thi..apko dekh k isliye jhuth bola..
M:j,apni had mt bhuliyo,tu jis style me uske 7th beithi thi,wo dost se jyada lg rha tha...jo mere 7th hua,main ni chahti..
J:di,aap apni kismat mere 7th mt jodiye,main smjhdar hu,mujhe pta h main kya kr ri hu...
Wo gusse me chali jati h..
M:jay meri bat sun...

Uday ek mall me jata h,wha ek braclet khridta h..
'dis 4 u manyata'tum 2din bad chali jaugi,main chahta hu nafrat se ni hm ek dost bnke jaye'...

In nxt morning...
2day vry special day 4 uday,manyata nd ofcourse mr.frakin(USA guest)...
Uday k ghr me mrng me hulchl machi hui h...
U:hy dad,main walk pe ja rha hu aap chaloge..
Gr:ha chalo...

Manyata wake up'aaj to mere liye bhoot bda din h'wo smile krti h'bhagwan g sbkuch aache se krdena,ye international deal hmein dilwa dena.'plz..wrna main aapse katti...ha ni to..
'jaldi se ofice jati hu,'sham tk wapas aa jaugi'manyata going bathng..

Uday or GR walk pe jate h tbi uday ki cal aati h'hello,
Maneger:sir aap ofice aa rhe h na,idhr mr.sexsena ane wale h,unke 7th apki choti meeting h..
U:oh,yes..ya i m cuming..cal cut 'dad aap walk pe jaiye,mujhe ofice jana h,main eveng me jaldi aajauga.
Gr:ok,beta jaiye aap taiyar ho jaiye.
Manyata apne kapde remove kr chuki h,usne apni body towel se cover kiya h...
Jb wo shower open krti h,tb paani ni aata.'ye mere bathrum me paani
Kyn ni aa rha h.hy bhagwan ab kya kru?
Wo bathrum se bahr aati h'ab kya kru towel me bahr bi ni ja skti.'wo thoda sa drwaaza khol k dekhti h,unanti ja ri hoti h'unanti,tum kha se aa ri ho?
Unanti dekhti h,wo manyata k rum me aane ko hoti h
M:ni,ni ander mt aao,kapde ni phne main,phle tum btao..
Un:arey,mere bathrum me paani ni aa rha tha,dada k rum me jake nha k aa ri hu..dada ne dekh liya na to..bs.
M:ah,mere bathrum me bi ni aa rha h paani..
Un:kya?tumbi chali jao dada k kmre me,bs apna koi saaman mt chod dena wrna dada ka gusa to tum jante ho...or dada ka rum to tumhare rum k pas h..jaldi se chali jao,dada k walk pe ane se phle nikal jana...
M:ha thik h thik h..thanku yar...

Manyata apne kpde leti h,or uski body towel se cover h..or dhire-2 uday k rum me jati h,idhr-udhr dekhti uday ni hota,or wo jaldi-2 bathrum me chali jati h,wo bathrum ka darwaza lock krti h,bt wo jaldibazi me bnd ni hota...
Then tbi uday bi rum me aata h'main nhane jata hu(remove d vest),ofice jana h jaldi,aaj manyata shayed jaldi chli gai ofice'wo bathrum me jata h...

Continue..

Pari
fia21 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Amazing update yaar 👏
Loving this SS with every update.
Hahahaha last part is sooo funny 😆
Oh God. Manyata is taking a shower and Uday is going to enter the bathroom. Lmao. Epic. Can't wait to see their awkward reactions and Manyata's screaming. Update soon. Dying to read the next part.
.Killer. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#89
woah...awesome update...Manyata and UV in the same bathroom...ahem..ahemmm☺️
continue soon ..waiting 4 d nxt part
SyedAinah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#90
OMG OMG, manyata takng shower in udayz washroom,n uday z also gng to washroom, dis z awesome update ,dying to read d next part

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".