Originally posted by: fia21
I know I am super dooper late in commenting. Please don' hurt me *runs away screaming* 😔 . Lol. But I swear I read the chapter as soon as you updated it. But got the time to comment just now as I have been super busy lately with family suff.
Okay so this update was mind blowing. I think I say that every time 😆 . Bu it's your fault Ranjana, you make me speechless with every update and I am seriously getting short of words to praise you now! Loved loved loved loved this part to bits. I loved every single thing in this update. Uday getting pissed with he movie idea as Manyata was paying no heed to him, Uday deliberately picking Manyata in his arms to move her to the other side of the sofa, Unnati and Uday's conversation outside his room after which Manyata gets upset because she thinks that Uday thinks she's fat (hilarious 🤣) and then Uday telling her how her getting chubbier is only good as it would give him more of her to love 😍 (can't there be guys like that in real life? 😕) these parts were really very cute. And then comes my favorite, the bathroom scene. Man that was H-O-T ☺️ . I am glad you included an "almost kiss" for now. I like almost kisses because they only just heighten he passion for an actual one when it happens later on!
I like Ranvijay even more now. He can prove to me a great friend for Manyata waisay 😉 . Lol. Anyway I loved how they both bonded and Manyata told him about what was bothering her about Uday. And awww he was so happy to hear someone praise him. Cute.
Update the next part soon Ranjana!! I'd be waiting for it palkain bicha ker 😍
Seriously Wifey...I feel like throwing a chappal at you! 😡
LOL i JOKE! dont worry! 😃 i understand man..we all get real busy adn of course i know that you read my update as soon as i updated LOL..i mean come on..its YOU..PAGAL LARKI! 😆
and awww seriously u blame me for writing so good that u dont know what to say?? With you its like u are so sweet that ive ran out of ways to say thanks! 😳 im sooo happyyy u enjoyed this update! really i dont feel satisfied until i hear from u! 😳 LOL and oh i know eh? there needs to be more guys like that..well at least my Prince better be cuz you knwo i love eating chocolates and sometimes...kuch zyada ho jata hai 😆
haha..working on controlling..LOL
oh man u enjoyed the shower scene? 😳 well lol i know your one for almost kisses so yea..might throw in a couple more of those haha..you never know Fia..what if they NEVER kiss? 😈 haha i can see you getting a heart attack 😆 ..just for teh record, i was kidding...calm ur poor heart down! LOL i dont think it can bear anymore shocks after watching DEK 😆
and LOL i know you like RV 😉 ..you know i just had this evil thought in my head where i should enter u in my SS as a girl named Fifi and start ur guys' love story! 🤣 HAHA just kidding...sorry for the second heart attack! LOL i know ur too faithful to UV..so dont worry, would never do that to you LOL
alright will update soon! 😃
