ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Official Editor in Chief?? 😲
Eeep.Wow that sounds cool Thanks Hubby 🤗
I read this again and I fell in love with ManVeer all over again. You managed to bring out the purity of love SO SO SO well Ranjana. Remember I told you how I got really emotional while reading thi? Well, you managed to do it again. This chapter is just so beautiful that I can't even express my feelings in words. It brought me peace somehow. Loved every bit of it. And the hug at the end was the icing on the cake 😍 . And as I said earlier, I simply loved the flashbacks when they were tying the threads. It was a beautiful moment. The part at the start where Rocket senses Uday's presence and runs to him, signalling Manyata to come along was ADORABLE!!
Great job Ranjana 👏
You are truly awesome ❤️

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arya009

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

this is jst awsm!!!!!!!!! i loved it totally!!!!!!!!😃😃

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Zainab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

I have no wrds really no wrds for this chapter it was jus really beautifully written...it took me to manveer dreamland ...thnks 4 d pm...the dialogues were very well written ...n thnks a lot for updating today bcause on weekends no DEk so no ManVeer I got really bored...but after reading ur update I'm in dreamland ov ManVeer..great performance ! This was a great piece of wrk... keep up ur good wrk! Update soon 😍

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Inkpen4877

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

That was so lovely! And I am glad there was no kiss in the chapter, M was still conflicted for a good part of the chapter throwing in a kiss wouldn't have seemed real- but I loved how you ended it- So PERFECT!

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akshi_t

@akshi_t

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

loved both ur updates to the core yrr...loved how M was making rannvijay work to get her apology... and even thought he's showing sighs of changing bt idk y i still can't buy it 😛...so finally M knws the truth...love u sheena 😆...now coming to ur latest update...it's super duper ultra mega awesome 😆...it's sooo romantic as well as beautiful...the whole dargah scene was just so perfect ❤️...and the song playing in the bg...made it so much more imaginable fr me...the whole scene was just playing in my mind while i was reading it...and both of them imaging their journey till now 😳...it was a wow update...plzz keep writing with this awesomeness and update soon...eagerly waiting!!! 😍

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

This is awesome story...u have made Manyata loveable even w/her antics!

she finally realized the importance of UV in her life...can't wait for love story to start...

-Sona

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-
😍u took me in some other world...world of peace purity satisfaction and LOVE...MANVEER LOVE...IN SHORT DREAMLAND OF MANVEER...
and i am feeling so good so peaceful in here...hmmm...let me breath in this air...😍😍
omg girl it was sooo good...awesome amazing out of the world...👏 update...loveddd it...🤗so pure...i can't think of any other word right now my mind is just repeating the same word...PURE,PURE LOVE...😳
awesome...👏👏👏
thanks alot for the PM...
loved it...

Thank you soo much Jehan! Really you just made my day! I am SOO glad you liked it! really you are soo encouraging!! 🤗

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Amazing Part Loved it, very well written as usual like all your other updates, such a beauitful way of describing Manveer feelings👏👏👏Cont Soon

Thanks so much Anam! happy u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: preya_radev
i loved it... u described the emotions so very well\... loved all the dialogue especially the end one ... please please update soon and thanks for the pm

aww thanks so much! 😳 and no problem

Originally posted by: cherry...
beautiful update,amazing,really loved it <3
manveer😍
very well written :):)

Thanks a ton Cherry!! I'm soo glad u liked it 😳 and yes ManVeer 😍

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07
👏👏thanks...beautifull...loved it...brilliant...👏👏

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: sim1623
Even though we didn't get kiss, I still loved the update, it was so cute. Can't wait for the next one!!

Simran :D..

aww thanks so much Simran 😳 ..lol im so glad you liked it anyways! 😃

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
This was just amazing, so pure, so true loved it 😊

Thanks so much! so glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: annysyed
Amazing,awesome , i like d Dargha part,i was feeling lke dat i was also in Dargha...thanx for gvng such beautiful update

awww really?? Thank you so much! 😳

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Lovely update as always Ranjana!! Very, very beautifully written!! Do continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:)

Thank you soo much!! and no problem 😃

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: Grenade
There are no words to express HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS !! Really! If a chapter can be so heart-melting and romantic and intense without a kiss, i'm totally ready wait a long way for their kiss! But I cant wait that long for the next chapter..so you've got to update soon!! :D

awww Grenade!! you once again made my day!! really u are too sweeet!! 🤗 btw, is there a different name i can call you by? LOL i dont know if u like being called Grenade all the time 😆sounds dangerous 😉

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