~Hona Tha Pyaar~ManVeerSS~Note Page 57~ - Page 34

Originally posted by: RadhapriyaG_01

Wow, nice update as usual Surya...

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome part cont soon

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

U take me to Manveer land with every part of your ff, loved it and thanks fro the PM 😛

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

Chak te fatte tusi,loved it,pls apne kuch ideas in serial walon ko bhi de do

Originally posted by: wendy25

hi surya, hii wendy..

this time you was very very very late in updating ss.😭 sorry yaar...woh seeing the way DEK was going, i thought apne SS pe break maarun...😊

i have been desperately waiting for it . even my desperation for your ff crossed the level of the desperation of despo j😆. my hands were literally itching to write a update...i'am glad i finally wrote something & posted it...😆😆
but wait was worth .SIMPLY LOVELY all i can say, thankooo so much...😳

i am glad you are not abandoning your ss because i also felt bad when ss and ff writers leave their work in middle leaving their loyal readers hanging in b/w with suspense

that kiss part and bantering over lipstick was so cute and same time it was very hot. i was blushing all the time😳 dear i know how the readers feel when the writer abandon their work..i will never do it don't worry..😊woh Uday-Manyata ka kiss ka scene likhthe waqt, woh lipstick ka scene likhthe, even i blushed..hehe...😳😳
Why don't donate some of your romantic ideas to SA and team , they needs them. I was so excited for intimate sword fight but look it was full of venegance and not a slightest bit of romance.surely i will..thankooo for the compliment..😊
you know what in your ss , i felt UV is very vulnerable to manyata , so can you please make him bit insensitive arrogant and that lady killer types . You know that we all love UV in that way. yaar wendy, see being emotional is a part of one's own personality...so i try to show both sides of Uday one where he was the full attitude Prince & he danced for love me, love me, even in this update Uday was composed even after the hurting things Manyata said & still he did the lipstick stint with her..now that is the strong arrogant Uday..& yes sometimes he puts his love before himself..that i feel is a part of every human emotion..i will surely try & add some arrogant Udayveer scenes for you..😃

so slight change for me please as being emotional is very unlike UV . well as i said i'am trying to create a perfect balance between the arrogant & the emotional Udayveer..further i will see what i can do...😳

rest you have a great choice of words dear . you expresses each emotional hurricane of thouights inside them so beautifully. thankooo so much dear..i have been writing from 2004, shayad that is the reason why i'am able to express emotions well...😊

please from don't delay your ss for long .update soon😊 and thanks for the pm sure wendy.. this time i will update soon..& not make all of you wait...the next part will be posted soon.. pukka..😊

Originally posted by: Love.anjlenirma

wow...nice update ...

pls continue soon...

thanks for pm...