You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 67

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ausum lovin it n do continue soon
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It was amazing and specially Manyata's reaction..she blamed Uday for her preganancy..& poor Uday bechara Manyata ko samzate samzate thak gaya...
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Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

very nice update...update soon..😊

Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: Khawaunju

ausum lovin it n do continue soon

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Originally posted by: Poojapange

It was amazing and specially Manyata's reaction..she blamed Uday for her preganancy..& poor Uday bechara Manyata ko samzate samzate thak gaya...

Thank you 😊
Glad you liked it :)
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Originally posted by: Archi02

Finally, you get up from sleep. I never thought that you'll get up so early. So late update!!! I think we will have to make pole for your every update.. Anyway, the part was asweme. I was laughing so hard after reading manveer's reaction. It was really very funny. I loved it.

Thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update M reaction is really funny😆😆😆 thxs for the pm 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 manyatas reaction ! luvd it update soon... n by the way h mny parts r u planning to write ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was soo good and 🤣.n Manyta is soo sweet.kash onscreen woh aisi hoti😍.
Nice updt 👏n pls continue soon
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Hey guys this is part 19...hope you all like it...

PART # 19

The scene shifts to Uday's car...Uday and Manyata was on their way to Rjmahal...Uday was going to drop off Manyata at Rajmahal...

Manyata: Uday yaar...(sighs)...yeh kya kiya tum ne...

Uday: Hooo...princess...tum toh aisey keh rahi ho jaisey hum ne akelay kiya...(confused)

Manyata: chup...veday kahin ke...sab kuch tum ne kiya...tumhari galti hai...kis ki...tumhari...

Uday: aacha theek hai...hamari galti hai...khush...???

Manyata: haan...bohat khush joke mara hai na tum ne...

Uday: princess...tum gussa kyun ho rahi ho...

Manyata: nahi main gussa kyun hongi...gussa toh ab Dadisahib hongi...woh toh mujhey kaccha chaba jayengi...main toh un se keh doongi jo kiya tum ne kiya...maine kuch nahi kiya...

Uday: this is not fair princess...

Manyata: (thinking)

Uday: princess...???

Manyata: (still thinking)

Uday: (puts his hand on her shoulder to get her attention)...Princess...???

Manyata: Aaa...(gets scared)...kya hai phir se darra diya...

Uday: (confused)...tum chikhi kyun...aaraam se yaar...accident ho jayega...par tum darri kyun...???

Manyata: main na...main soch rahi thi ke...Uday mujhey bohat dard hoga kya...???...(she starts crying)...

Uday: princess...tum phir ro rahi ho...tum toh hamein bhi darra rahi ho yaar...(looking a little scared)

Manyata: kaash...pregnant mein nahi tum hote...akal thikaney aajaati...

Uday: hum aur pregnant...(he starts laughing)...tum bhi na princess...

Manyata: hasslo...hasslo...kyun ke agley 9 months tak main tumhein itna tang karne waali hoon na...beta maza aajaye ga...

Uday: accha princess...aik baat toh batao...tumhein kuch feel nahi horaha hai...I mean you know...

Manyata: haan...ho raha hai na...Jaigarh ka yuvraj meray tummy mein cart wheels laga raha hai...abhi kaisey feel ho ga, abhi toh i'm only 3 weeks pregnant..

Uday: (laughs and says)...btw princess yuvraj kyun...hamein toh yuvrani chahiye...

Manyata: accha jee...ab iss main bhi tumhari marzi chale gi...jee nahi...yuvraj hi hai...(she touches her belly)

Uday: aur agar cute si chotu si Miss haan nahi toh hui...(teasingly)...

Manyata: main ne keh diya na...yuvraj hi hai...

Uday:sach princess...hamein toh bhi tak believe hi nahi horaha hai...

Manyata: haan yaar Uday...aur mein Mummy...hayeee...Mummy...Baby hamein Mom bolega, Mummy, Maa ya phir Mama...batao baby...???...(touches her stomach...)

Uday: princess...baby bol thori na sakta hai...(with a smile)

Manyata: bol nahi sakta to kya hua...mujhey phir bhi feel ho jaye ga...I am his mummy after all...right baby...???...(she looks at her stomach)

Uday: abhi mom bani bhi nahi aur moms ki tarah baatien shuru kar di...not bad...bas ab biwi ki tarah bhi behave karna shuru kar do toh mazaa hi aajayega...(he winks)

Manyata: seriously Uday...kuch toh sharam kar lo daddy ban ho gaye ho...lekin abhi bhi nahi sudhro gey...tumhara kuch nahi hosakta...I give up...

The car stops...Rajmahal was here...it was dark, the lights were dim it looked like everyone was asleep...

Uday: princess...mahal aagaya...

Manyata: (looking a little upset)...Uday...

Uday: bolo baby...kya hua...are you okay...???

Manyata: merey saath ruk nahi saktey...???...I need you...(with a puppy dog face)

Uday: princess...hum jaantey hain...that you are going through a very difficult phase of life...tumharey liye easy nahi hai hum jaantey hain...par sweetheart hum hain na bas kuch aur din...phir hum aur tum hamesha ke liye saath saath...okay...don't worry everything will be just fine...(he caresses her cheek)

Manyata: hhhmmm...uday kisi se kuch kehna mat please...abhi nahi...

Uday: of course baby...hum kisi se kuch nahi kahengey...okay jab tumhe theek lagey tab bata dena...hhmmm...???

Manyata: okay...thanks...(she turns around to leave but uday holds her hand)...

Uday: ahaaa...what about the goodnight kiss...???...(she smiles)...

Uday moves closer to kiss but Manyata puts her hand over his mouth and Uday then kisses her hand...and gives him a hug...she was holding on to him really tight as if doesn't want him to leave her...she was not feeling right...something was weird...she did not know what which was making her restless...uday then kisses her belly...and says...

Uday: baby...mummy ka khayaal rakhna...(with a smile)

Manyata: goodnight shonuu...will see you soon...

Uday: take care sweetheart...hum jald hi aapse milengey...(manyata leaves)...

Manyata quietly sneaks into the mahal, she quietly and cautiously walks towards her room, when she gets into her she takes a deep breath and says...

Manyata: bach gaye bachuu...

A voice from behind comes and Vijay bhai pops out, out of nowhere and scares Manyata...

Vijay bhai: ji nahi...pakrey gaye bachuu...(evil grin)

Manyata turns around looking shocked...

Vijay bhai: M bhai munh toh band karlo nahi toh flies andar chali jayegey...

Manyata: Vijay bhai aap saari raat idhar udhar bhataktey kyun rehtey ho...bhoot ho kya...???

Vijay bhai: kuch aisa hi samajh lo...so kahan se aarahi thi...(with a cheesy smile)

Manyata: aapka bhoot bhaganey ki tayari kar ke aa rahi thi...ab aap jaogey...???

Vijay bhai: chaley jayengey...chaley jayengey...pehley tum yeh toh batao keh tum aur Uday kahan...???...haan bolo...bolo...you naughty girl (teasingly)

Manyata: Vijay bhai mujhey na gussa mat dilao...

Vijay bhai: hum gussa thori na dila rahey hain...hum toh bas pooch rahey hain...(smiling)

Manyata: Vijay bhai abhi mera dimaag aisey hi khraab hai...aap yahan se ultey pao nikal lo...nahi toh...

Vijay bhai: AWWW...hamari piyaari bahena hamein darra rahi hai...

Manyata: (suddenly she was not feeling good, and she ran to the bathroom)...

Vijay bhai (from outside): M bhai...???...kya hua..???...tumhe loosies hai kya...aur tum ne hamein bataya bhi nahi...not fair...(looking upset)

Manyata: (throwing up inside the bathroom)

Vijay bai: EEEWWW...NASTYY...

Manyata comes out, wiping her face...

Vijay bhai: so..???

Manyata: (silent)

Vijay bhai: M bhai tumhari tabyat toh theek hai...zarror Uday ke saath bahar kuch kachara khaya hoga...iss liye tumhara tummy ki halat karaab ho gayi hai...

Manyata: Vijay bhai...please yaar thori der ki liye chup baith jao...yahan meri halat patli hui wi hai...aur aap jo jokes marney ki soojh rahi hai...

Vijay bhai: Awww poor baby...of course loosies...i mean food poisoning is pretty serious...

Manyata: (gets frustrated)...VIJAY bhai...mujhey food poisoning nahi hai...I'M PREGNANT...(she realizes she said what she was not suppose to)

Vijay bhai: (choking on air)...KYAAA...???

Manyata: (to herself) oh shooottt...crap...yeh main kisey bata diya...

Vijay bhai: M bhai...(looking shocked)...hum ne wahi suna jo tum ne abhi abhi kaha ya phir hamarey kaan baj rahey hain...how is it possible...

Manyata: (silent)

Vijay bhai: of course it is possible...(gives a look to M)...Uday itna desperate hogaya...GOD YOU PEOPLE...you people need to learn to control...

Manyata: pata nahi Vijay bhai kaisey hogaya yeh...par aap promise karo kisi se kuch nahi kahogey...please please Vijay bhai...

Vijay bhai: yeh kya M bhai...tum ne toh hamein MAMU BANA DALAA...

Manyata: please Vijay bhai kisi ko mat batana...(with a puppy dog face)

Vijay bhai: this is not fair...itni masaley daar news hamarey pait mein kaisey reh payegi...agar hamarey munh se slip hogaya toh...???

Manyata grabs the knife from the nearby fruit basket...

Vijay bhai: y..y..yeh...tum kya kar rahi ho...M bhai...hamein darr lag raha hai lag gai to...

Manyata: (threatening Vijay Bhai with the knife) abey o chirkut...bheja fry nahi karne ka...samjha na...nahi toh bhai ka meter out ho jaye ga...

Vijay bhai: O teri...MUNNA BHAI...??? (Looking scared)

Manyata: munna nahi...CURCUIT...samjha kya...ab tune agar apna munh khola na toh idharich kaat daaley ga upun...samjha kya...bhai ke saath masti nahi karney ka...

Vijay: hh..haan...hum samajh gaye bhai...hum kisi se kuch nahi boleingey gey...

Manyata: aisa na...chal ab yahan se kat le mamu...

Vijay bhai leaves the room...and while leaving says to himself...

Vijay bhai (to himself): yeh M bhai ke andar circuit ka bhoot kaisey ghuss gaya...oh God...(he leaves)...

The next day in hotel Uday Niwas...Uday was in his room when one of his security people comes to meet him...

Servant: Uday banna aapse milney aapkr security head aaye hai...

Uday: security...iss waqt...???...alright bhejo ussey...

Servant: jee Uday banna...

Uday's security head comes in...

Security person (to Uday): Good morning yuvraaj ji...hamein aapko kuch zaroori information deni thi...

TO BE CONTINUED...

hey guys this was part 19...hope you all liked it..please do leave your comments...and love you all 🤗

Love,
Alissa😊
Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago

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