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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

awesome os...loved all the small details u added to the os...

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

hayyyeee! Another OS!! Gosh! Your descriptive writing is just amazing! I feel like I am inside the scene and everything is happening in front of me...My 3-D writer!

Loved how you portrayed Uday. Though it was a bit sad. Felt like killing Manyata! When will she stop hurting him?! :( But I'm really happy how you portrayed Manyata in your last OS and now Uday...both done perfectly!

P.S - FEELAY MURGI!!!! 🤣

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I didnt even realize I was holding my breath until after I finished reading and let it out.😆 OMG...the way you described Uday's emotion in this was INSANE! Especially the part about Uday being angry vs humiliated. And I was really surprised to see Manyata come back but just as surprised when her crying wasnt genuine. But at least they hugged...sigh😍 Needless to say, I loved it😃

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-Misek-

@-Misek-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Amazing OS.. Awww.. My poor UV left heart broken 😔

Thanks so much for the OS..

Simmy 🤗

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Mahi

@-Mystery-

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Amazing OS!

Very well written, and I enjoyed reading Uday's thoughts/feelings.. the horse added a nice touch. I'd love it if they show something like that.

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Dikshita

@Dikshi92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Brilliant writing.. U expressed uday's emotions sheer perfectness.. I'm feeling so sad for udayveer after reading this os.. Why everyone forget that behind that cold mask of greyness he puts on he has a heart of gold too.. No one cares about him being hurt.. Even his own sister is no less.. 😔

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DEE!

@LKJCBTR

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

WOW! Yaar this was amazing to read! My heart was skipping a beat! AHHH! How cute! I love Uday!

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crazysandhir

@crazysandhir

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

This was simply BEAUTIFUL.👏and thanks for d pm dear 🤗

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

nice...can you continue this os..😊

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

I always run out of adjectives while responding to your writing😳 Wonderful wonderful wonderful!!!!!

You should maintain a blog...where you can upload all the diff FF/OS etc. Or at least make a topic in the FF section where there are links to you work😉

Thanks for the PM!!!

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