When PRINCE meets the PRINCESS *very very imo note pg 5 aug 17

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<font size="4">hi friends...this is my first ever ff...got inspired by reading urs...hope u like it...do help me wherever u feel i should improve...and if you want me to continue...do tell me...just trying my hand...its connected with the plot shown till now...</font>

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<font color="#993399" size="4">standing at the window,in her small room,Monia is gazing at the street and its passers by.she is smiling to herself...thinking about Soni,Chikki,and Aakash her friends...,Moniya...beta,where r u lost,????. I am very hungry...lets eat.Ayee baba!!Are meri rajkumari kya soch rahi hai??Baba i was thinking,its been only a week in mumbai.Ihave been to so many cities before but never felt like in here.I feel as i was born here,as if i was meant to be here,i belong here.I am so happy here.Something crossedover her baba' s face.Monya dont get attached baby...u know we will have to leave from here also...he left his food and went away.Iwas left to thinking...wats in this city that baba doent feel comfortable with.What does he fear???he has never behaved this way before!! I need to find someplace alone.SEAShore is the best place.</font>

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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

hi friends...this is my first ever ff...got inspired by reading urs...hope u like it...do help me wherever u feel i should improve...and if you want me to continue...do tell me...just trying my hand...its connected with the plot shown till now...


epilogue

standing at the window,in her small room,Monia is gazing at the street and its passers by.she is smiling to herself...thinking about Soni,Chikki,and Aakash her friends...,Moniya...beta,where r u lost,????. I am very hungry...lets eat.Ayee baba!!Are meri rajkumari kya soch rahi hai??Baba i was thinking,its been only a week in mumbai.Ihave been to so many cities before but never felt like in here.I feel as i was born here,as if i was meant to be here,i belong here.I am so happy here.Something crossedover her baba' s face.Monya dont get attached baby...u know we will have to leave from here also...he left his food and went away.Iwas left to thinking...wats in this city that baba doent feel comfortable with.What does he fear???he has never behaved this way before!! I need to find someplace alone.SEAShore is the best place.

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king brijraj,king giriraj,princ Uday veer are deep in conversations...Brijraj saya"beta uday just watching yoy makes me fill with pride.i am in a dire situation and only u can bail me out of this fiasco.I know u were bethroted to my elder daughter "maanyata"...,its now been more than 16 yrs...she is gone now...so i want u to marry jaynandini instead and save our graces...Prince Udayveer smirks and watches his father who is smiling at the thought."ok uncle as u and all the elders wish and if only thts good for the royalties of both the estates...!!!!but i need time to deal with new changes,,,,,,and so the prince drives towards the sea shore...on a secluded corner,throwings stones in the sea lost in his own thoughts...
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Really nice plz do continue nd plz pm me
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

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king brijraj,king giriraj,princ Uday veer are deep in conversations...Brijraj saya"beta uday just watching yoy makes me fill with pride.i am in a dire situation and only u can bail me out of this fiasco.I know u were bethroted to my elder daughter "maanyata"...,its now been more than 16 yrs...she is gone now...so i want u to marry jaynandini instead and save our graces...Prince Udayveer smirks and watches his father who is smiling at the thought."ok uncle as u and all the elders wish and if only thts good for the royalties of both the estates...!!!!but i need time to deal with new changes,,,,,,and so the prince drives towards the sea shore...on a secluded corner,throwings stones in the sea lost in his own thoughts...

chapter 1
bang!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!my my someones pelting stones at me...khasmanu khana,gosh,people here r crazy,,,cant leave alone in peace even here...who the hell????Monya turns around to see a guy standing and throwing stones. she walks in anger toward him..."eh halkat,khoya khoya chand,tere baap ki jaagir hai kya kisi ko bhi marega...u hurt me idiot."""O hello lady ,...u look like some nomad chawl waali...its not such a big stone...here take some money and get lost""!!!!...what???? o karele keep ur money with u and buy some brains and politeness for ur self...Haan nai toh!!!!!!!!kahaan kahaan se chale aate hain bigdey hue dhol...haan nai to!!!!!!!!!
uday is so annoyed and angry,.He holds her hurtingly and warns her..."Ek chawl waali aur itne tewar...not done at all""humse pang mat lena...".Moniya is shocked and surprised at his behaviour . she is dumbstruck bu his touch. she scratches his hand with her nails,frees herselfand goes away yelling at him,,pig,mokey,i will see u got it...bach ke rahiyo...she is very very furious.Uday just stares back at her...
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chapter 2
at the chawl,monya is still fuming.Akash meets her and says why r u acting weird...speaking to urself.??why r u so furious??suddenly moniya snaps out from herself and says...wat did u say am acting weird...ya u r right.its not been a good day at all...first baba and then that akdu ,khaduus bigdail kahin kaa...haan nahi to!!!!!!!!!woh kutta...,uss paneer makhani ka to mai achaar bana dalungi,if i ever met him again,uski kismat achi hogi to dubara nahi milega mujhse...!!!!!!!!Akash says her to calm down..."i think you r hungry and want to eat "paneer makhani".,,hmm thts ur fav i know...""""😊u
mm...paneermakhani...haan thta was my fav till today but now i hate it...dont ever bring paneer makhani in front of
me...gadheda.,kahin ka...i will it briyani...
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chapter 2

at the chawl,monya is still fuming.Akash meets her and says why r u acting weird...speaking to urself.??why r u so furious??suddenly moniya snaps out from herself and says...wat did u say am acting weird...ya u r right.its not been a good day at all...first baba and then that akdu ,khaduus bigdail kahin kaa...haan nahi to!!!!!!!!!woh kutta...,uss paneer makhani ka to mai achaar bana dalungi,if i ever met him again,uski kismat achi hogi to dubara nahi milega mujhse...!!!!!!!!Akash says her to calm down..."i think you r hungry and want to eat "paneer makhani".,,hmm thts ur fav i know...""""😊u
mm...paneermakhani...haan thta was my fav till today but now i hate it...dont ever bring paneer makhani in front of
me...gaheda kahin ka...i will it briyani...

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at the palace...king giriraj,prince uday are talking...
beta this is a golden oppurtunity...dont let the ship pass bye...this is ur right...a passage towards the throne...so think bout it...!!!!!Uday is standing at the window deep in thought...dada...oh dada!!!!wats this...plz dont marry J.Its suicidal dada...u dont love her i know...dont sacrifice ur self...plz i love u bro...and better not wear a mask with me ,,,,,,,,i can see through u !!!!!!!!Ey chutki...my love...wen did u come?????aaa...stop kiddo...dont worry and understand "hum rajwaade hain..."we shouldnt feel like normal people...c ommon...even you know...its my right to become the king...as for J..who cares its just fulfilment of wishes...and watches the scar on his hands...Oh god ,who has hurt u dada lemme bandage it...No no sis,he watches the scratches and smiles to himself...dont touch it sis i am fine...!!!!!My my bro...u r actually smiling and not as a prince...am i missing something????so who did it.?oh...she was a wild cat.i was so tensed at the thought of marrying J and this cat,,almost made me forget all.who was she dada..?hogi koi...not from the elite class ...and he smirks ...and def not...my ...types.HE smilies cunningly...ayr uske! liye acha hoga woh mujhse dubaara kabhi na mile...😛
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thanx...hope u guys like it...
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Gud start ,loved monu's dialogues in chapter 2.
Just one suggestion whenever u write dialogues of 2 character ,space them out so there is no confusion.(talking abt unnati and uday's convo)
Other wise luved the way u write
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An interesting start! please do continue...


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chapter 3
udayveer meets J.she is all wet.he leaves no chance to make fun of her."wow,J u and the sweeper...she is made u look too good". "stop it uday, that chawl wali crapper...,my moods all spoiled.Hey! whats those scratches on ur hands?? "...uv"my hand...oh!! nothing...was just trying to tame a wild cat" he smiles. J"whatever...why r u here anyways???"
"Ddn't u hear princess...i am after all available for u now...".he smirks.So get ready J ,its celebration time tonight".

monya is thinking..."why is that dumb guy torturing me?why cant i seem to forget him??i should think about aakash . soni,chikki say i love him.i think thats true.see how he cares about me,gifted me such a beautiful and costly sandals,& is taking me out to a disco tonight on his brand new bike.i feel so comfortable with him..."
"hey monya r you ready? lets go"
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J and UV are having drinks at the disc.Unnati asks them to go on the floor & enjoy...aakas and monya too step on the floor. Aaksh's mobile rings,he goes out to talk. Monya is observing everything with fascination.she stamps on J's foot.J taunts uday for the kind of croud in his disco.Monya...turns back to answer .
"What the hell????uuu...kaamwaali ,now in the disc as well,whose pass have u stolen???have u ever danced cheepo???????"
Monya is just too shocked to see mall waali nakchdi and her paneer makhani...both together.How bad could the day go???
Uday is extremely shocked at seeing his jugli billi...her hair down and woha!!!! lipstick too.he is totally flagged by her appearance."Finally my boring date is over"he muses to himself.and he is bombed by j that she was the same foul mouthed sweeper who fought J in the mall. he watches monya with a playful,flirtatious and a shrewd smile.without taking his eyes of monya...he tells"J i think u need a drink...and some time on ur own...u can go."J frets and goes away.
Monya wants to leave...but UV holds her and pushes her into a deep corner.She hits him on the shin.he saves himself and pushes her to a wall.he wants to converse with her and she gives back heated replies.he is flirting with her.she pushes him ,but he crushes her to him...face to face...breath to breath...He stills her...just stares at her, touches her hairs,feels her skin,her lips with his fingers tries to become intimate...when she slaps him.she is furious.Uday tries to hurl her back to him when he sees a mark on her neck and is shell shocked.Monya asks aaksh to head back to the chawl.
Monya is unable to sleep.she is still feeling his fingers on her face, her hairs, her chin, her lips.she gets annoyed."what the heck????main kyon yedi ho gayi??? how could i let him so far as if...i was his propery...!!!! akash never makes me feel so breathless.everytime i try to forget him. kutta jumps out of no where.why did suddenly his expressions change????????what did he see?? why is his final look bothering me?? It feels like he's saying"finally i found what was lost and my search is over"????""

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