Coal and Diamonds-Author's Note Pg 27 - Page 12

Originally posted by: desi chic

Rajmata sounds like a machine - I like the analogy, very suitable. The "other apple of her eye" -- is this Jay or Uday? I'm thinking the latter, but it's a little unclear. you rite...its uday didi"... wicked combination of brashness and responsibilityOMG now i have to go back c who did i write this line for?" -- I'm curious to see where the brashness element unfolds... I personally adore the fact that the CVs put the litter sister into the frame. I think there is room for exploration in this relationship... Like the minute detail of UV referring to RM as "Hukam," sounds regal and shows a shade of his personality... Alright, so no need for chappals as of yet. This part seemed to be a character sketch (from the regal end). Looking forward to the other side of the story.oh there is more coming...

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Part 3 -

Jay and Vijay got along like water and vapor, different specimens of same element... 🤣 Oh Amnu! "Specimens!"they are one of a kind... And VB is so colourful, I sometimes get the feeling that he swings the other way.u r not the only one...count me in too

"Uday concentrate on your food'kabse dekh rahe hain aap kuch kha nahi rahe hai," Komal scolded.

Uday smiled at her antics. She always noticed. After all she was his surrogate mother. She was one who raised him. According to Uday his only redeeming quality was his unconditional love for Komal. If the royals were not supposed to be formal at all times he would have called her mom. "Yes, Komal aunty," Uday replied and then finished his food.

Loved the whole bit here - Komal and UV relationship. This is again, something I wish the CVs would have delved into. UV is shown to be grown up in a motherless situation, but he has also spent more than half of his life at the Devgarh palace.I know he pratically stays there, eats there, drinks there...just goes to his house to sleep only and change clothes.😆 I find it a bit odd.

"Master plan?" What master plan. Ohh, this is interesting!! *sparks flying*a whole lot of them di

Aww, poor Jay. She's feeling isolated already. Aside from UV, VB, she is the only character who sparks interest in the show.she could give lessons on how to make all your plans backfire on you...she gets all the balls rolling in this show.

"She was only one step next to ordinary," But, "He would make her work." Oh... *red emotions* Imagine a guy like that in real life eh? Wouldn't you love to wake him up with a curled fist😃 i know i would hate a guy like UV in real life.Lol. But, the fact is, this is Yuvraj UV, we're talking about here -- something altogether different, and not always what he appears to be.yeah too much hidden and way too many secrects and feelings locked up...he is a kameena with a personality...and i love him for that

I'm liking the villainous aspect - it always brings the audience to sit up and pay attention. Besides, UV's character without the dark element is like cheese without milk -- non-existent! (Terrible analogy, sorry!)I know...i hated when he was blushing in the scence when unzie told her that...i ws like gah he is not supposed to blush...he is UV

Again, a bit of a character sketch here, so can't comment much on story yet. As for meeting suggestions, we don't know much about M's character so far, so it's hard to say what you're going for i honestly have no idea what i m going for either...hence welcome to the club. However, I think we all appreciate the "takrar" part of their relationship, so let'm collide...

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Part 4 - "Accidental Introductions"sorry i did not proof read itpart went too long and i was too tired.

How could he underestimate her choice - penthouse in a lavish hotel! well if she agreed there will b no clash.

Stalker and... creeper?Haan Nahi Toh Pictures, shoes, flowers, veggie-hunting. Haha! I suppose she is his future wife.

"nothing to sneeze at," 😳😆 *aaachhhooo!* Oops! That came as an afterthought. If I saw him, I might sneeze in bewilderment. You know, some pinch themselves to see if they are in fact in reality, but sneezing is less harmful.you are so bad🤣may b i shud try it next time with ppl i dont want o talk to again

Six months is a rather short period of time, and the endeavour he has taken upon might be a lot larger than he may know. Well he does not know that right

"Jaanwaron" 😆😆its all the pent up anger

She hasn't even met UV, but he is more on her mind then Akash. Hmm...its her true calling...all the soulmates stuff

Yes, less is more in terms of cosmetics.yeah when will ppl realise tht...

Specifically Ray Ban eh? You have a thing for them Amnu?? yeah but i also have a thing for prada😉Aviators would look stormy on him😉 and then some😍
... And how dare she dent his favourite machine?

Oh Jay... Kardi na Jay wali baat *shakes head*an Jay jay waali baat nahi karegi toh vijay waali baat karegi

A regal bit of advice from the man himself. Perhaps dropping a hint into the future.

The dreadful expression on her face was quite enjoyable.

Now that sounds familiar!Yup its my expression when i m writing a part...i tell u di u can sell tickets for it


The final remark was a nice twist. I like how he is weighing her competency and nerves. You can notice his ability to read through her.yeah what will happen when she starts reading him...how will he deal when tables get turned on him.

Finally, a full episode! I like the startHaanji. And I'm curious to see how it unfolds. Really, I'm curious to see what she ends up wearing *rolls eyes* I know, how shallow na? But really!God so much pressure becos of clothes..

Acha, I've went through the first four...yeah thanks so much.I love you🤗 and ready for the next four.Hain? Wht?😕 I've been so good na, now its time to reciprocate😳Ofcourse i will in my sweet time😉...part coming up 2morrow before u pick up ur chappal

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Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

hey u said part coming up tomorrow

btw i am ready with my chappal 😆

i mean common ive been waiting like since forever for the udpate

especially when manveer meet up

update fast..asap

on 2nd thoughts update like rite now 😆