Os: maanveer first feeling of lOve

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As he pulled me close in the circle of his arms
I didn't want to move I wanted to stay their let him hold me while I cried

I love akaash I whispered but something inside me told me that was not true that it wasn't love it was merely a friendship that I misunderstOod as love. But what if...

Her thoughts were suddenly disrupted by uday who moved away from her and looked at her. He looked hurt.

Yea srry. I forgot... Akash always akash excuse me

Uday left the room, his hurtful expression haunted Monya

Hey bhagwan Yeh maine kia kerdiya
She tried to go after him but stopped herself suddenly she knew he wouldn't listen and why was she why was she goin after him. Why didn't she push him away when he hugged her. why did she feel bad for him when she mentioned akash

Scene shift

Suno tum logo ne uday ko Dekha hai

Uday saw her and smiled and cleared his throat and started speaking loudly

Arrey j Tum kitni beautiful ajj lag rahi ho

He hugged her and looked at monyas expression through the mirror

Halkat kutti kamini issey kyun hug ker rahi hai aur yeh halkat ussey galey laga ne de raha hai

They did not separate and monya thought of a plan cockroach she thought

Cockroachhh Monya yelled

The plan worked and j moved away from uday and screamed
Kahaann she said as she screamed

Uday smirked he knew their was no cockroach and knew wht his Cinderella was doing and so just to irritate her more he pulled j back in a hug

Dont worry beautifull main hoo na he smirked

Yeh to iski to main monya thought of uday as she saw him pull her back in a hug
Ghatiya kutta kamina she thought

Cockroach she yelled again and j reacted again
Kahan

Woh woh dheko monya said pointing under the table j was now Standing on o
Top of

Ahhh j yelled though she didn't see any cockroach all she thought was monya was pointing towards her feet

She ran off and uday smirked

Monya walked away with an attitude that gestured uday to follow

But uday smirked and noisily dropped himself on the couch making monya stop midway.

She looked at him taking out down pictures and throwing them on the table one by one

She walked over

Who are these girls?
Actually dadisa had told me to pick some girls for my marriage as you dont want to marry me and j she's just not my type.

What!!! She pretended not to look shocked but it was obvious on her face.

Uday would have laughed but he needed to keep a straight face to trick her.

So tell me mr. Uday whose ur type maybe I can help monya said as she struggled to hide her shock. From deep inside she wished it was all a lie.

You you will help me uday laughed no thanx I don't need any chawl girl rishta akhir prince hoon koi to izzat or class honi chahiye

Class ke bachey monya whispered

What m srry I didnt hear you uday said pretending to put his hand near his ewe as if to hear clearly
Nothing monya said
U sure uday laughed

Yesss Waisey Tumne bataya nahi Kaisi ladki... Monya said while playing with her fingers

Bindaaas type uday said

Monyas face lit up

She should wear western outfits, short hair, and walk talk and act like a princess

Scene shift

Monya stood in front of the mirror looking at herself. She was wearing a dark pink Dress with her hair up in a pony tail trying to make them look shorter she put on dark pink lipstick and heavy make up.

As she stared at herself, she heard laughter from behind her and looked at j and her chamchis laugh at her style

For the first time monya felt embarassed and she looked down. I loOk so stupid she thought ad a tear rolled down her cheek

Ohohoho roh... J shuted up as soon as she saw him enter.

He walked to her and cupped her face and brought it up, he wiped her tears and shook his head as if to gesture not to cry for stupid people

He put her hair down and softly smudged her lipstick.

Those two changes only made her look like a true princess beautifull from inside and beautifull from outside.

Uday turned her to face j and her chamchis.

Wow girls doesn't she look beautifull even for a chawl wali. J this is an insult for u a chawl wali whose much more beautifull than you from inside and outside.

J glared as uday wrapped his arms around monya and whispered in her ear

You look beautifull princess. This time he meant it as he called her a princess

Hey guys my third os on this forum plz comment an tell me if u guys hate it or like it m srry if it was a waste of ur time. Extemely srry. Hope u guys liked it. ~fingers crossed~ plz comment even if u hate it.
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adventure_gurl thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very cute, I updated my story too, keep writing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

very cute, I updated my story too, keep writing!



Thnx sweety u r always the first one to comment on my stories and you don't know how much it helps me it makes me feel proud of myself and my work. Thank you so much. Like even if the story is bad u would give a nice comment thanx- a tons for liking it taking your worthy time and reading it and commenting on it
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no problem dear, I was home today so had time to check it out
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome! and what are the other os's that you have written??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aaahhhaa !! loved it though i didnot get the last part properly =))
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good post!

you can make your OSs so believable, like the CVs could actually have entered such a scene! it's not a waste of time dear, stories make the time fly by faster & the weekends bearable! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz pm me dear when u update, i come to this forum irregularly i have to literally search for ur os.
how cute hun uday helping in manyata's makeup
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS ...UV hurt and Manyata first true feeling of love woww beautifully written
Plzzz do pm me next time awaiting the 4th one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os...loved uday trying to make manayta jealous...

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