Shatir Lekhak Contest in Cid (Result Date Postponed)

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MysticVibe

@MysticVibe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

3. The three friends..

STORY NO.3
THE THREE FRIENDS (HINDI VERSION)
HINDI-----
VAISE TOH SENIOR CID INSPECTOR ABHIJEET KABHI GALATI KARTA NAHI THA...
MAGAR AAJ FISAL HI GAYA...BAAR BAAR YAHI CHEEZ USEY KHAYI JA RAHI THI KI ...'KYUN MEINE USS
AADMI KI PHOTO NAHI LI?'... "USE PAKAD KE KAM SE KAM USKA NAAM TOH POOCHH HI LETA..CHAHE
WOH JHOOT HI BOLTA..."BHAGTE CHOR KI LANGOTI HI SAHI ..KUCHH TOH HAATH MEIN AA JAATA"...
USKE OOPER SE ACP SAAB HAATH DHO KE PEECHHE PADH GAYE KI --'ABHIJEET TUMHARI EK GALATI SE
EK AADMI KI JAAN JAANE WALI HAI...EK KI KYA TEEN TEEN LOG KA KHOON HO SAKTA HAI..AUR HUM
LOG ?...HAATH PE HAATH DHARE BAITHE HEIN'
ABHIJEET KO BAAT CHUBBH GAYI...SABKO MAALOOM HAI KI WOH THODA TEDHA
AADMI HAI...DOSTON KA DOST HAI...MAGAR DUSHMANON KE MUSIBAT...BAAT SUNTA HAI ..TOH SIRF
APNE JIGRI DOST ...DAYA KI . CID OFFICE MEIN YEH BAAT SABKO MAALOOM HAI KI JUB JUB ABHIJEET KO
GUSSA AATA HAI TOH SAARE JUNIOR DUM DABA KE WAHAN SE KHISAK JAATEA HEIN...GUSSE KI AAG PE
PAANI KOI DAALTA HAI !!...TOH WOH DAYA...YA PHIR ACP PRADYUMAN.
ACP PRADYUMAN NE JUB TEESARI BAAR ABHIJEET KE OOPER TAANA MAARA TOH USNE APNE AAP
CONTROL KARTE HUYE... JAWAB DIYA --SIR AGAR KOI CHUPKE SE EK LETTER MERE DARWAJE KE
NEECHE SE KHISKA KE BHAG GAYA ..TOH ISMEIN MEIN KYA KAR SAKTA HOON.
ACP KI DONON BHOYEN AASMAAN PE CHADH GAYIN...
AANKHEN PHADHTE HUYE BOLE KI---EK CID OFFICER KE GHAR MEIN KISI NE LETTER DAALA TOH KYA CID
OFFICER USE AARAM SE BHAGNE DEGA?
ABHIJEET KE MUNH SE KUCHH ULTA SEEDHA NIKALNE WALA THA PAR PHIR BHI CONTROL KARTE HUYE
BOLA KI -BHAGNE KIDHAR DIYA SIR...MEIN FAURAN BHAGA USKE PEECHHE...USNE LAAL RANG KI SHIRT
PEHAN RAKHI THI...WOH JALDI SE SADAK KI BHEED MEIN MIL GAYA...THODI DOOR TAK TOH WOH LAAL
SHIRT DIKHI...USKE BAAD KAHIN KHO GAYI..MEINE SOCHA JALDI SE WAPAS GHAR BHAGTA HOON...
...KAM SE KAM WOH TOH DEKHOON JO WOH PHENK KE GAYA HAI...GHAR AAYA ..LIFAAFE KO
PHADA...TOH YEH THA..JO AAPKE HAATH MEIN HAI...
ACP NE SAR HILANA SHURU KAR DIYA...USKA DAHINA HAATH AAGE AA GAYA...USE CHAKRI KI TERAH
GHUMATE HUYE BOLE...
ACP-ABHIJEET ISMEIN LIKHA HAI...TEEN DOST HEIN...AUR TEENON EK DOOSRE KI JAAN KE DUSHMAN
HO GAYE HEIN...
ABHIJEET - JEE SIR...EK NAAM ASHOK HAI...DOOSRE KA ANUJ ...AUR TEESRE KA HAI ROY...
ACP-YEH ASHOK ENGINEERING COLLEGE MEIN PADHTA THA...
ABHIJEET-HAAN SIR ...ASHOK KO ENGINEERING COLLEGE MEIN SE NIKAL DIYA GAYA HAI..AUR YEH
BAAT, ROY NE JA KE ...ASHOK KE GHAR WALON KO BATA DI...ISLIYE ASHOK ROY KA KHOON KARNA
CHAHTA HAI
ACP-ASHOK KO ROY KA KHOON KARNA HAI...AUR YEH ROY.!!!!.YEH APNE DOST ANUJ KO MAARNA
CHAHTA HAI...
ABHIJEET -ANUJ NE SHAYAD ROY AUR USKI GIRLFRIEND SIMRAN KE BEECH MEIN JHAGDA KARVA DIYA
HAI.
ACP-ANUJ KO PATA NAHI HAI KYA KI ROY USKA KHOON KARNA CHAHTA HAI??
ABHI--MUJHE KYA MAALOOM SIR...JO LETTER AAP PADH RAHEIN HEIN wahi maine padhha hai..
ACP NE PHIR HAATH KI CHAKRI GHUMAYI--...ANUJ ASHOK KO MAARNA CHAHTA HAI...KYUNKI ASHOK NE
ANUJ KO DHAMKI DI HAI KI WOH SABKO BATA DEGA KI...KI ANUJ EK NAKLI DOCTOR HAI...USKE PAAS JO
DEGREE HAI WOH NAKLI HAI
ABHIJEET-JEE SIR...ANUJ MAARNA CHATA HAI ASHOK KO..ASHOK MAARNA CHAHTA HAI ROY KO..ROY
MAARNA CHAHTA HAI ANUJ KO...
ACP KA CHEHRA RONE JAISA HO GAYA WOH ...UNKA DOOSRA HAATH POCKET SE BAHAR AA
GAYA...DONO HAATH ZAMEEN KI TARAF PHENKATE HUYE WOH BOLE KI--PAR YEH TEENON HEIN
KAHAN?...KAISE BACHAYE INKO..? ...INKO NAHI DHOONDA TOH YEH MAAR DENGE EK DOOSRE KO.
ABHIJEET----PAR DHOONDENGE KAISE SIR...??.YEH HEIN KAUN YEH BHI TOH PATA NAHI...!!!
ACP--AISE BOLNE SE KAAM NAHI CHALEGA...HUM LAASH KE AANE KA INTEZAR NAHI KAR SAKTE...WOH
AADMI LETTER PHENK KE GAYA HAI..ISKA MATLAB HI HAI KI WOH CHAHTA HAI KI HUM YEH KHOON
HONE SE ROKEN.

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MysticVibe

@MysticVibe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

guys here is some term and condition regarding contest. before you start writing please go through it.. especially member below 18 and members living outside India as they are not eligible to take participate.

link credit goes to - Padma.

http://cid.setindia.com/contest/CIDT&Cs.pdf

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: MysticVibe
that's great..
diya

Left the hinglish version after two three lines...

the words used are ridiculous.😕

BTW, my mom is asking me to write a story for the contest...haha..😳😛

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MysticVibe

@MysticVibe

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Left the hinglish version after two three lines...
the words used are ridiculous.😕

BTW, my mom is asking me to write a story for the contest...haha..😳😛

that's great diya.
Give a try.. I know it's difficult because the plot is all.. err..
but give a try

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MysticVibe

@MysticVibe

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

guys if want to bang your head on wall after there these plots then please.. go a head..

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MysticVibe

that's great diya.
Give a try.. I know it's difficult because the plot is all.. err..
but give a try

Plot ki choro, look at the words they have used for the characters...laughing like a donkey...eating like a bullock...oh c'mon yaar...

IF IN ANY CASE, i happen to write something, I need to know a few things that I found nowhere to be mentioned...I found an email address where we can send r queries but unfortunately, I forget my password and I'm still in the hunt for the diary in which I had noted all these details...can someone please ask these and let me know.😳

1. Are we supposed to write the complete story (narration+ dialogues) in one language or are we allowed to use English for narration and Hindi for dialogues...??

2. Is it necessary to use the same dialogues/lines used in the plot to write those scenes that are already described in there...??

I don't want to use those specific words or lines in my story ever...I hope using them is not mandatory.

3. Is there any limits to the length of the story??

Please someone do this for me...

Edited by 23Diya - 10 years ago

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PAYEL DEY

@--PAYEL--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Abhijeet thinking about Tji in the 1st plot ! kya musibaat hain ! agar story likh pati toh sabse pehle Tji chapter ko end karti kisi tarah ...anyway All the best to the participants 👍🏼

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ---PAYEL---
Abhijeet thinking about Tji in the 1st plot ! kya musibaat hain ! agar story likh pati toh sabse pehle Tji chapter ko end karti kisi tarah ...anyway All the best to the participants 👍🏼

I left thinking about the plot as soon as Abhijeet started thinking about Tji.😆

But I dutifully read the whole.

The investigation part seems alright but the starting scenes are🤬

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Himani

@.mOSAIc.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

What was that? Freddy sir insulted once again!!!!! Duo's behaviour towards him 🤢!!! And the language used in hindi version, is just unacceptable.

I had expected something better. After reading plots, I am completely dissatisfied. If they are to organise a contest at such a big level, they should have at least used better words and should have respected all characters.

I am having a feeling that all this is fake, as if conducted on a poor level, though it's not the case.

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PAYEL DEY

@--PAYEL--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Abhi thinking abt Tji in the 1st plot ...Freddy insulted once again in the 2nd plot and ACP sir once again blaming Abhijeet sir in the 3rd plot...what nonsense!! 😡 I'll quit watching CID if they show such epis on TV...