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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Sonali.

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Aree nahi re pagli.. I am jus speechless at consistency of FW😆</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sorry If my commenthurtedyou</font>

My screw got loose 😆. That's why I misinterpret it 😆. Please don't say sorry di 😊. FW kal ek aur chamatkar karne wale hai..get ready..but this time I will lock my brain in vault after study to watch this 😆. But truth to tell I am fearing now its Daya sir's turn to be wounded severely or be in danger very soon by FW .

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

My screw got loose 😆. That's why I misinterpret it 😆. Please don't say sorry di 😊. FW kal ek aur chamatkar karne wale hai..get ready..but this time I will lock my brain in vault after study to watch this 😆. But truth to tell I am fearing now its Daya sir's turn to be wounded severely or be in danger very soon by FW .

Hota hain sweetiee... Misunderstanding misinterpretation... No problem by far we solve it 😉

But Regarding Daya sir aisa kyun lagta hain tumko? 😲

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SofiyaSam

@SofiyaSam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Lovely poem Sonali :D
very Good

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: .Nishi.
Lovely poem Sonali :D
very Good

Thanks so much Nishi 😃

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Soni.

@Soni.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Beautiful poem Sonali. I just loved it. Looks like Duo influence was a lot in your life. Keep writing more glad to know that you are more talent within you

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mano86

@mano86

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: Sonali.
Kabhi Tera Haath naa Choote

Dosti mein kabhi saathi ka saath naa Choote
ZIndagi mein ae dost kabhi tera haath naa Choote

Yaad hai... jab maut ki kagar par tha main...
Thama tha tumne yeh haath mera
Maut se bhi lad kar laut aaya tha main
Ke nibha saku main saath tumhara

Iss baar jab tum gire uss gehre se jharne mein
Chodakar mujhse mera yeh haath
Mansha thi tumhari bach jaye hum sab ki jaan
Par darr gaya main yeh sochkar ki choot jayega tumhara saath

Yeh saath chut jaye yeh naa chahata tha Khuda bhi
Bacha li usne tumhari jaan
Musukurata huva fir lauta mera saathi
Aur khush huva main uss Khuda ka shukar maan

Aaj bhi maangta hoon uss khuda se dua...
Ke hasta khilkhilata mera yaar rahe sada
Aur Dosti mein kabhi saathi ka saath naa Choote
ZIndagi mein ae dost kabhi tera haath naa Choote

poem
👏

juz like the lovely DUO bond
⭐️

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ControlledChaos

@ControlledChaos

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Sorry for being late di... I didn't notice this poem..
I loved it.. You eexpressed everything in a really great way.. 😊
I admire their friendship and that scene made me emotional.. one of the episodes which I will remember just like Behrupiya and AKI... I cried that night.. Silly na.. 😆 But everything was so natural..
now.. now..
Poem ka to kua kahun.. Bola na loved it.. 😆
really lovely... aur kuch kehne ke liye I don't have words..
Good job..

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Jerry di we are all silly in case of DUO BECAUSE THEY ARE PART AND PARCEL OF OUR LIFE 😳 😆. Sonali di, It just came to my mind due to FW's recyclic process😉.. Salunkhe sir, Rajat sir, Abhi sir, Acp sir..all done.. Whose turn next 😉 ? It's been long since Khatre mein Daya. By the time ek aur Daya sir phasao/kidnap/danger banta hai na 😉.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Sonali.
Scribbled something out of emotion... Sorry for the overdose this entire weekend... But Somehow I am not able to pass it over... May be its not that great yet thought of posting...
P.S. These are somehow Daya sir's emotions. Its a fan fiction. Just a thought

Kabhi Tera Haath naa Choote

Dosti mein kabhi saathi ka saath naa Choote
ZIndagi mein ae dost kabhi tera haath naa Choote

Yaad hai... jab maut ki kagar par tha main...
Thama tha tumne yeh haath mera
Maut se bhi lad kar laut aaya tha main
Ke nibha saku main saath tumhara

Iss baar jab tum gire uss gehre se jharne mein
Chodakar mujhse mera yeh haath
Mansha thi tumhari bach jaye hum sab ki jaan
Par darr gaya main yeh sochkar ki choot jayega tumhara saath

Yeh saath chut jaye yeh naa chahata tha Khuda bhi
Bacha li usne tumhari jaan
Musukurata huva fir lauta mera saathi
Aur khush huva main uss Khuda ka shukar maan

Aaj bhi maangta hoon uss khuda se dua...
Ke hasta khilkhilata mera yaar rahe sada
Aur Dosti mein kabhi saathi ka saath naa Choote
ZIndagi mein ae dost kabhi tera haath naa Choote