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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely poem Anu...⭐️ Very Nice...⭐️ 👏
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Fantastic buublly 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much BUBBLY for Sharing this Fantastic Treasure...😳👏👏
but I think the Initial Lines are like this...😊

Ghaltiyun say mawra Tu bhi Nahi Main bhi nahi
Dono Insaa'n hay Khud tu bhi Nahi main bhi nahi...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow, fantastic poem Bubbly di⭐️⭐️...truly amazing...👏👏
Every line went straight to the heart, the reality u portrayed through limited words is so appreciable...
Loved it to the core...Great work👍🏼
Keep writing di, u're excellent at it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice poem Bubbly. 👏 Loved it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful peace of poetry Bubbly...👏 Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very true and heart touching Poem Anu dear...😊 Loved all the lines...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a lot Angel,mishu,deba,vis di,Himani,GD,saman,Anamika, apoo & Ravi🤗 sorry I forgot to mention that some lines r not written by me😳
it has taken from somewhere😊I've written last 3-4 para😛
Edited by buublly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


Thank you so much BUBBLY for Sharing this Fantastic Treasure...😳👏👏
but I think the Initial Lines are like this...😊

Ghaltiyun say mawra Tu bhi Nahi Main bhi nahi
Dono Insaa'n hay Khud tu bhi Nahi main bhi nahi...😳

May be u r right GDEmbarrassed
actually I had read these lines somewhere nd loved it😊
then changed few words,added some more lines and completed this poem😛
Duo's current situation has inspired me to write these linesEmbarrassed
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Posted: 11 years ago

Picture Courtesy: DEBA
Poet: Aitabar Sajid




Usne kaha Mujh se Tumhein kitna Pyaar hai
Maine kaha Sitaron ka bhi koi Shumaar hai...

Usne kaha kaun Tumhe hai bahut Azeez
Maine kaha Dil pe Jise Ikhtiyar hai...

Usne kaha kaun sa Tohfa hai Man pasand..
Maine kaha Woh Shaam jo ab tak Udhaar hai...

Usne kaha saath kahan tak Nibhaoge
Maine kaha jitni ye Saanson ki Taar hai...


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