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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

**WHEN GOD LOOK UPON ME**
When you are still in sleep with your teddy,
I clean cups and plates with red eyes,
When you mom calls you to get ready,
My madam shouts at me to cook hurriedly,
When you get board on your school bus,
I set out with my brother for coal mines,
When you attend your class with books and pencils,
I expand my hands for a paise to pedestrians,
When you have lunch from tiffin box with friends,
My master throws a burnt bread over my face,
When you play video games with soupy noodles,
I return home collecting stale items from market,
When you enjoy cartoons on tv,
I get slaps and kicks for breaking the showpiece by mistake,
When you do your homeworks in front of your teacher,
I really try hard to stop my empty stomach aching with water,
When you go out with your parents to spend holidays,
I beg to your father for service with a shoe polishing kit in my hand,
But still I have a hope when God will look upon me,
I will also get to play.


ANGEL, U really Point Out What We all little Bothering...
U know so many times, We want to Move Forward and feeling to do Some Good... either from move a Stone to Roadside which might be Hurt anyone, or when We eating Ice Cream and feel a Simple Eyes on them, Eyes who did nat say a Word but Speaks Volume as they turned Down in a Second... at that moment Our Enjoyment, taste, happiness was completely Vanish, might be it Retireve back after Sometime but We Lost that Moment...
U know We does not Wake up that Angel Soul inside US...
We always want to Rest it in Sleep Mode...
which was the Most painful part...
Hope Almighty LORD gives US such Courage where WE does Not Hesitate Delibrately or Undelibrately to get DUA and KHUSHI at early base...
Almighty LORD always bring US on GIVING Hands... aameen...😳
Thank you so much ANGEL...😳😳
its really Precious and Priceless...⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: neha_dna


Maine bhi sapne dekhe thay,
Ek chhota sa ghar, pyaar ka ujaala,
Kitaabon ke saath duniya ki baatein,
Doston ke saath khushiyon ka mela...!!
Lekin meri kismat pe rota hai dil,
Duniya ki bheed mein yeh dil akela,
Ab toh khel se bhi darta hai dil,
Zindagi ne mere saath yeh kaisa khel khela...!!!!



Humein ye bhi tha Ghaneemat (acceptance)
jo koi Shumar (count) hota
Humein kya Bura tha Marna
agar Aik baar hota

(Faiz)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Something from my side... 😳

LIVE WITH PRIDE

While walking on a lane full of coloured leaves
Admiring the hypnotizing sunset scene
Watching the red disk playing hide and seek
Enjoying the dancing of birds and trees.

Mixing colours and making new out of them
Mingling sorrows and happiness to think for them
Life is precious as gold and is full with love
Thinking about it is in itself joy and fun.

Life is hard and is full of mistakes
Beneath it holds loads of fountains.
Living it with pride and joy is tough
But completing this task is a biggest fun.

Life is no eternity it has to end
So face the ups and downs till the end
Think about the birds and butterflies
And live it with full joy and pride.


awww... Zabardast...👏
Ray of Hope in Bhaloo Poem...👏👏
Thank You Baccha...😳😳

Us Zindagi kay Husn ki Tabindagi na pooch
jo Haadsun ki Dhoop mein Tap kr Nikhr gayii😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan

Aftr read ur poems nd comments i have smthng in my mind
which is


Ae dosto
zindgi ka khel h nirala
kisi ko deta h chaabi to
kisi ko deta h taala

kisi ko sb kuch deta h siwaaye dil ke
to kisi ko dil ke siwah kuch deta nhi

arey kisi ke paas itna h
ki unse smbhlta nhi
to kisi ke paas smbhalne ke liye kuch hota nhi

sacch yr
zindgi ka khel h nirala
kisi ko deta h chaabi
kisi ko deta h taala


ANJI, really a Truth of Life...⭐️
pr isi cheez ki Munsif Taqseem (Correct Distribution) Humari hath dii hay...
agar Mehz Hum apnay AKHLAQ hee Achay kr lein na tou Dunya Sanwar jayey...😳
I realy really Appreacite Ur Effort...👏
Buht Buht Acha Likha hay Tum nay...😳
Thank You so much...😳😳

I remember GULZAR Sir some Punkhtiyaan...

zara alfaz ka lehja tou badlo
zara maddham karo is aanch ko suno na
kay jal jatay hain kungray naram rishtun kay
zara alfaz kay nakhun tarasho
buht cubhtay hain jub
narazgi say baat kartay ho...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
@d
heart touching lines



Meri Zindagi Ghamon Se Ho Gayi Hai Taar
Khushiyan Bhi Mere Kareeb Nahi Aaati
Zamane Bhar Ka Zeher Pee Liya Humne
Jaan Hai Ki Kambhaqt Nikal Nahi Jaati…
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: IF_FRIENDS

@d
heart touching lines



Meri Zindagi Ghamon Se Ho Gayi Hai Taar
Khushiyan Bhi Mere Kareeb Nahi Aaati
Zamane Bhar Ka Zeher Pee Liya Humne
Jaan Hai Ki Kambhaqt Nikal Nahi Jaati'


Thank You...😳
UR Lines are Also Lovely...😳👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
GD and Deep very heart-touching lines. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88


My Best Friend shared ME this Shair through SMS and I think its APT for this Cap...😉

Nigahun say Qatal kr do, Na ho takleef Dono ko
Tumhein Khanjar uthanay ki, Humein gardan jhukany ki...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: gadhadada



My Best Friend shared ME this Shair through SMS and I think its APT for this Cap...😉

Nigahun say Qatal kr do, Na ho takleef Dono ko
Tumhein Khanjar uthanay ki, Humein gardan jhukany ki...

Waah!!! Kya baat kahi hai...!!! 👏⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Congo ⭐️ A WONDERFUL THREAD misha 👏

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