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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

tum dil ki baatein kya samjho

tum dil ka lagana kya jaano?

tum aag lagana seekh gayey

pr aag bujhana kya jaano?

aik baar agr tum rooth gayey

hum tum ko mana lein gy lekin

aik baar agr hum rooth gayey

tum hum ko manana kya jaano?

kuch sath chaly kuch chor gayey

waady jo kiyey wo tour gayey

saathi tou banaty rehty ho

pr sath nibhana bhool gayey...

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Sejal..but PP always for IF...

@pinkpearl5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Hmmm... Teary Lines...😭😭

reminds Me a Truth of Life as...😊

DARD bhi ek Bakht hota hay
chalo Hum ko bhi kuch naseeb hua...

Aww thanks for understanding the meaning of my poem and thanks for the comments...sorrry for tears ... Yep a truthful poem teary but truthful 😊

Yeah that's a really good thing to say dada I love this attitude of yours of accepting every good and bad thing positively 👏

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Abena Motianim

@Minionite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Ah that is so nice GD. Thank you for it. 👏

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Reshma

@Reshh16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: gadhadada

tum dil ki baatein kya samjho
tum dil ka lagana kya jaano?
tum aag lagana seekh gayey
pr aag bujhana kya jaano?
aik baar agr tum rooth gayey
hum tum ko mana lein gy lekin
aik baar agr hum rooth gayey
tum hum ko manana kya jaano?
kuch sath chaly kuch chor gayey
waady jo kiyey wo tour gayey
saathi tou banaty rehty ho
pr sath nibhana bhool gayey...

Very touching GD..!!

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Reshma

@Reshh16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Everything U wrote with Heart never have any Errors and Mistakes Baccha...😳
Lovely 4 Lines...😳👏

Thank you GD...!!😳😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Thank You PINKPEARL baccha, RAAZ Baccha, SHERYA and NISHI...😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

just to Sooth My Emotion ...😭

jub bhi koi aisa shaks mila;

jisy dekh k dil ny ye chaha;

ye kaash humary sath rahy;

mery hath mei is ka hath rahy;

haalaat magr najaany kyun!

kr dety hain majboor buht;

hr baar kahein ly jaaty hain;

us shaks sy mujh ko dur buht...

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Abena Motianim

@Minionite

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Ah that is so sweet GD.

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

@Shreya di⭐️⭐️, @Misha di⭐️⭐️, @Reshma⭐️⭐️, @Pp⭐️⭐️, @Dada⭐️⭐️.. Hearttouching lines all😳😳.. Thank you so much for sharing🤗.

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Madhu

@cutie006

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: buublly
frnds we all have lots of problems in our life
hum roz hansne ke bahane dhundte hai😳

here's few lines from my collection for all...

'Ek nayi surat bachi hai aazmaakar dekhiye

dushmanon ko v kabhi dil se laga kar dekhiye

chhodiye rangeen chasme ko chadhana aankh per

zindgi ki rangaton ko paas ja ker dekhiye

roz khush rahne me yaaron kuchh maza aata nahi

baat to tab hai ki thode gham v khaakar dekhiye

kal badi maasoomiyat se aaine ne ye kaha

ho sake to aaj mujhko muskura ker dekhiye

khushbuon ke kaafile jaaenge khud hi door tak

saath phulon ke kabhi to khil khilaker dekhiye..