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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Deep,mano,misha,sri,rose,soni nd cutie 4 liking my ghazal😃😃
@Deep, loved all ur lines nd d poem on childhood👏
thnks 4 sharing dear😊
@cutie,v nice ghazal nd v close 2 d fact😳
so loved it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
BUBBLLY bacchay... the Ghazal is Really Treffic, especilly these SHAIR I really Inspire and Admire alot...👏
Keep it Up baccha nd Thank You too...😳😳

Thanks a lot dada 4 ur words of appreciation😊
It really means a lot😃
but i know i m not able 2 inspire u😕
bcoz u r already a brilliant writer nd also an inspiration 4 me.😛
i loved all ur lines hereClap
just keep rocking⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rosepink.

phr gire ek building yahaan
phr hua ek haadsa yahaan
jane kitne chal base
aur kitne hue h zakhmi yahaan

jo chal diye, unko sukoon mile
jo reh gaye h bebas yahan
wo tadap rahe h zakmo k dard se
AE KHUDA karde reham yahaan

jaane kitne phanse h majbur
ho kr reh gaye zakhmo se choor
phr MADAD KAR DE UNKI KHUDA
ho jaye sari hi takleef kafoor

jo kr rahe h madad unki
dena sila behtar unhe
de baazuo me quwwat unhe
de hosla TU buland unhe..

v nice nd touchy poem rosy👏
kaash hum in haadson ko rok paate😳May god give strength 2 their families who lost their lives
nd bless them who r injured😲
The builders must b punished😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks u s😛 much
dada 😛misha,aman di,😆mano,shreya😃,bubly & rose
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IF_FRIENDS

i dont knw abt poet bt i really lyk these lines my core of heart 😊
i want to share it

Chalo Phr Dhoond Laein Hum!
Usi Masoom Bachpan Ko!

Unhi Masoom Khushiyon Ko!
Unhi Rangeen Lamhon Ko!

Jaha Ghum Ka Pata Na Tha!
Jaha Dukh Ki Samjh Na Thi!

Jahan Bus Muskurahat Thi!
Baharein Hi Baharein Thi!

Chalo Phr Dhond Laein Hum!
Usi Masoom Bachpan Ko!

K Jab Sawan Barasta Tha!
To Us Kaghaz Ki Kashti Ko!

Bana'na Aur Duba Dena!
Boht Acha Sa Lgta Tha!

Aur Is Duniya Ka Hr Chehra!
Boht Sacha Sa Lagta Tha!

Chalo Phir Dhoond Layen Hum
Usi Masoom Bachpan Ko?.


lovely lines di😛
thnks 4 sharing
kitni ajeeb baat hai,😲
jab "CHOTE" the tab "BADE" hone ki
"BADI" tamanna thi.😛...Magar
ab pata chala ki Adhure"AHSAS" aur"TUTE"
"SAPNO" se achche,"ADHURE"
"HOMEWORK" aur"TUTE" "KHILONE" the😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Har ilzam ka haqdar woh hamein
bana jate hain
har khata ki saza woh hamein
suna jate hain
hum har baar khamosh reh jatay
hain
kyun k woh apnay honay ka haq
jata jate hain
wow 😛wonderful lines di👏
i really loved it

di kuchh mere salection se...

😛Hum ruthe dil ko manane me rah gaye,
Gairon ko apna dard sunane me rah gaye
Manzil hamare karib se gujar gayee
Aur hum auron ko rashta dikhane me rah gaye😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

Har ilzam ka haqdar woh hamein
bana jate hain
har khata ki saza woh hamein
suna jate hain
hum har baar khamosh reh jatay
hain
kyun k woh apnay honay ka haq
jata jate hain

<font color="#660066">wow 😛wonderful lines di👏</font>

<font color="#660066">i really loved it</font>

<font color="#660066">di kuchh mere salection se...


😛<font color="#ff00cc">Hum ruthe dil ko manane me rah gaye,</font>

<font color="#ff00cc">Gairon ko apna dard sunane me rah gaye</font>

<font color="#ff00cc">Manzil hamare karib se gujar gayee</font>

<font color="#ff00cc">Aur hum auron ko rashta dikhane me rah gaye</font>😭
</font>


so cute lines alike u cutie 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Cutie


wonderful lines


⭐️
Edited by mano86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry wrong post 😛
Edited by mano86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: buublly

BUBBLLY bacchay... the Ghazal is Really Treffic, especilly these SHAIR I really Inspire and Admire alot...👏
Keep it Up baccha nd Thank You too...😳😳

Thanks a lot dada 4 ur words of appreciation😊
It really means a lot😃
but i know i m not able 2 inspire u😕
bcoz u r already a brilliant writer nd also an inspiration 4 me.😛
i loved all ur lines here👏
just keep rocking⭐️


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